can you upload the next chapter, it's been weeks! :(
Author's Response: I'm nearly done – just trying to perfect Alice's voice without making it too melodramatic!
hey its me again i was just wondering how many more chapters are left! its just because i love this story soo much that i would love for it to end when lily and james end ! if not ill still love it any way you should nearly publish it! thanks
Author's Response: There will be around 30 chapters total, plus an epilogue. I'm glad you love it so much!
hey its me again i was just wondering how many more chapters are left! its just because i love this story soo much that i would love for it to end when lily and james end ! if not ill still love it any way you should nearly publish it! thanks
not sure if i liked the beginning or not but the end was good :D
Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like the beginning, but glad you liked the end! :D
Oh my gosh! this is brilliant. i liked the whole parts. and they're together again. i'm so glad. and i hate petunia. she's such an asshole. i love reading this story. update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I shall try.
Two thumbs up for this chapter! As always eagerly awaiting the next one :-)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :D
WOW!!!!!!!!!!
feel sad for alice though but obviously neville was supposed to be her first child
Author's Response: Yes! Though it would have been nice for Neville to have a sibling...
i can't wait untill the next chapter is uploaded
Author's Response: Soon! I am pretty much done, it just needs some tweaking.
“Whoa,” Edgar Bones said, and I was certain that it was his arm and not James’s that steadied me.
What were you trying to imply in that line?
is it that james lost feelings for lily, is he still mad at her, or was he just not paying attention to the entire situation, or did it mean anything at all?
just curious, beause i can't stop thinking about that line! how does he feel about her now!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: James isn't paying attention because of Alice. And Edgar Bones is, in my head, just closer to Lily physically, so he could more easily steady her. You'll get some James/Lily ~stuff next chapter ;)
Three comments:
WOW- for the story
NOOOO - for Alice
AMAZING- for you
Absolutely luv it!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU! :D
Wow, Very exciting chapter!! Looking forward to reading the next one! I cannot believe you are almost done though! :-(
Author's Response: I know, it's hard for even me to believe. I've been writing this for what, like, three years? And it's almost over, I'm glad you like it! :)
hey it was so saddening.but i liked it.update sooon. we're waiting.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :D Ch. 26 just needs some tweaking.
ahhhhh! the story is almost over :(...i did tell you that this was my favorite fanfiction, didn't i?
an image of lily having no eyes is soooo freaky!!!!!!! and like BLACK SNITCHES! HA...hilarious and scary at the same time.
Author's Response: Well, he probably doesn't know what golf balls are, right? Haha – and thank you! I am terrified of finishing.
A great update!
Author's Response: Thank you!
It is realy great as always. liked peter's POV though i hate him. we all know what's going on in james and lily's mind and it made the chapter different from the others!
it's so saddening about james and lily's argumment. i think you want one of them hurt in the next chapter.
in the end: CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
Author's Response: Clever prediction. Thank you!
i like the maturity in the story-which is why it's one of my favorite stories, but you should make cliff hangers a little more exciting towards the end of this story....but i like the description you gave Lily Evans, and lol, you described Peter's POV so perfectly.
first he messes with his hair, and then he tries to see what james loves about lily so much..:)
This description of Lily Evans it awsome!!
Almost as if the lie had called to her, Lily entered the common room ......long red hair piled into a bun on top of her head..... and seeing her then, circles under her eyes making her look almost skeletal, long neck bare and vulnerable, twisted at something inside me the same way James’s eyes had, and it struck me, then, how perfect they were for each other, the two broken spirits who wouldn’t stop fighting.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I'll give the cliffhanging a try, but it's not something I've ever been a fan of, in terms of writing.
YEEEEEEEEP!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT!
i'm about to read the next chapter, and what a good way to start out my afternoon. 1,2,3......:))
Terrific chapter! I though you did fine writing Peter I understand about not being "fond" of his character. I also understand about being busy but please update soon!!! :-)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I've actually been really into writing lately, and the first 3000 words of the next chapter have already been written, haha.
Story's still going great!
But when will Lily and James get back together?!? It's so frustrating that they don't !
Author's Response: Hey, they have to eventually, right? Otherwise, Harry Potter would never have been born ;) & thank you!
i'm interested in hearing james's perspective of the distance between him and lily right now...just curious. :)
Author's Response: I actually think that would be interesting too – but chapter 24 is from a very different perspective, I think. (by the way, I posted it! So it should be up within a few days)
