I actually liked this chapter even though I got a little frustrated that Lily didn't say that she liked James too.
*As for the Snape prank the Mauraders could slip some love potion in something Snape was drinking or eating and Snape could fall in love with a professor. Then Snape would declare his love to that "lucky" professer in front of everyone in the Great Hall and therefor embarrass himself. (he realizes that after the potion wears off)
Author's Response: haha thanks for the prank, I love it, and if I use it I'll be sure to mention you.
good, pretty good, not great though. you started the story off with a bang, well i want a few more bangs, i keep expecting something to happen, an dthen it kinda doesn't. i still LOVE this story though, you don't know how many times i've checked to see if this chapter was update yet.
hmmm, pranks for snape, well is his hair's supposed to be so greasy why don't they dunk it in some sort of vegeable oil, or something sticky thaty he wouldn't be able to get out all day. or they could simply shave all his hair off. Or maybe die it pink and spike it, haha, i don't know.
chapter: 7/10 (i'm a pretty harsh reviewer aren;t i?)
Author's Response: thanks for the pranks :] I like them a lot. Thanks for the critisism too, something somewhat big happens in chapter five, and chapter seven is sort of interesting. I'm nearly done with chapter 8, which is sort of more just dorcas and lily's arguement, and a few snape pranks toward the end, but i won't be able to update for a while because the comp i have everything saved on is broken. never fear though, i have chapters 3-7 in my inbox.
Author's Response: Oh, I forgot, Lily and Dorcas's arguement isn't even mentioned until chapter 7. Oh well, a little spoiler for you.
Its too not bad,
Author's Response: thanks ?
i like the chapter, but like you said the end was kind of boring, but every great story has some dull parts otherwise keep up the great job and update soon
Author's Response: thanks, i`ll update as soon as my broken comp is fixed
When is Lily going to come around?
I love it though, keep it up!
Author's Response: wellll, it could be around either chapter 12 or 15. yes, either or, probably, because those chapters won't be from her perspective, one will be from james' and one from probably either marlene or sirius .
hmm, good writing, but it was a little dull. i'm kinda a little dissapointed actually, your other chapters were so amazing! update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry, this chapter was sorta boring. The next chapter is a bit better, and the one after that is pretty interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks :D
wonderful! i LOVe your story, update quickly!
Author's Response: thanks :D chapter 3 is in mods right now !
This is great!
I cant wait until chapter four get approved!
Author's Response: well, of course chapter three has to be approved first XD thanks !!
Wow, I love this story!! It is different than most other james/lily fics, i think that's one reason i loved it so much! make sure to keep updating!! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks :D I love the cliched l/j fics as much as the next person, but I wanted to do something different for once, so I tried it, and here it is. And I'm sure I won't abandon this story for a while yet -- I'm writing chapter eight right now, so you'll at least be able to read it until then.
Author's Response: thanks :D
i can tell this story is going to be a hit. i love and it is really well written anyway update soon
Author's Response: Thanks :D I just put Chapter Three in mods, and it's sort of different from the first two chapters.
This is great!
Author's Response: sure, i`ll put chapter three in mods now :]
it was a needed transition chapter...i still enjoyed reading it no matter how little you enjoyed writing it. can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: lol yeah i`m updating now . thanks :]
Can't wait to read more! It's a pretty good story so far!
Author's Response: thanks :]
Ummmm... I hate to say this, but I've seen this story somewhere else. I think it was PhoenixSong.net, but I'm not sure... sorry if I'm wrong, but I have seen this story before.
Author's Response: lol, i submit it to other sites, wizardtales.net and harrypotterfanfiction.com. and i think i put the first chapter on phoenixsong.
i love it the more i read it! this chapter was amazing. you really know how to make a reader feel for your characters. you've captured the essence of the war...with that said...please update NOW!
Author's Response: haha thanks :] i tried with the essence of the war, i really wanted to make it different from your usual l/j fic where voldemort randomly pops up out of nowhere, kills lilys parents, and disappears again. and yeah, the chapter's been in mods for like a week :]
ove it so far, can't wait to read the rest, so i won't wait...ONWARD!!
Amazing, one of my favorites ever! pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase up date quick!
Author's Response: aww thanks :] chapter 2's in mods
i love the story so far please get the next chapter in soon
Author's Response: it`s in mods :D thanks ;]