i like the chapter, but like you said the end was kind of boring, but every great story has some dull parts otherwise keep up the great job and update soon
Author's Response: thanks, i`ll update as soon as my broken comp is fixed
When is Lily going to come around?
I love it though, keep it up!
Author's Response: wellll, it could be around either chapter 12 or 15. yes, either or, probably, because those chapters won't be from her perspective, one will be from james' and one from probably either marlene or sirius .
hmm, good writing, but it was a little dull. i'm kinda a little dissapointed actually, your other chapters were so amazing! update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry, this chapter was sorta boring. The next chapter is a bit better, and the one after that is pretty interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks :D
wonderful! i LOVe your story, update quickly!
Author's Response: thanks :D chapter 3 is in mods right now !
This is great!
I cant wait until chapter four get approved!
Author's Response: well, of course chapter three has to be approved first XD thanks !!
Wow, I love this story!! It is different than most other james/lily fics, i think that's one reason i loved it so much! make sure to keep updating!! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks :D I love the cliched l/j fics as much as the next person, but I wanted to do something different for once, so I tried it, and here it is. And I'm sure I won't abandon this story for a while yet -- I'm writing chapter eight right now, so you'll at least be able to read it until then.
Author's Response: thanks :D
i can tell this story is going to be a hit. i love and it is really well written anyway update soon
Author's Response: Thanks :D I just put Chapter Three in mods, and it's sort of different from the first two chapters.
This is great!
Author's Response: sure, i`ll put chapter three in mods now :]
it was a needed transition chapter...i still enjoyed reading it no matter how little you enjoyed writing it. can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: lol yeah i`m updating now . thanks :]
Can't wait to read more! It's a pretty good story so far!
Author's Response: thanks :]
Ummmm... I hate to say this, but I've seen this story somewhere else. I think it was PhoenixSong.net, but I'm not sure... sorry if I'm wrong, but I have seen this story before.
Author's Response: lol, i submit it to other sites, wizardtales.net and harrypotterfanfiction.com. and i think i put the first chapter on phoenixsong.
i love it the more i read it! this chapter was amazing. you really know how to make a reader feel for your characters. you've captured the essence of the war...with that said...please update NOW!
Author's Response: haha thanks :] i tried with the essence of the war, i really wanted to make it different from your usual l/j fic where voldemort randomly pops up out of nowhere, kills lilys parents, and disappears again. and yeah, the chapter's been in mods for like a week :]
ove it so far, can't wait to read the rest, so i won't wait...ONWARD!!
Amazing, one of my favorites ever! pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase up date quick!
Author's Response: aww thanks :] chapter 2's in mods
i love the story so far please get the next chapter in soon
Author's Response: it`s in mods :D thanks ;]
Wow, I absolutely loved it! I hope the next chapter is accepted soon!
Author's Response: lol thanks me too :D
Author's Response: ;D
This is really good! Please update soon.
Author's Response: just cuz you asked nicely, i'll post chapter two now :D