Reviews For My Constant
Reviewer: Pixie Flite
Date: 06/04/07 9:25
Chapter: Chapter Five

I really don't like cliffies. When will the next one be up???

Author's Response: haha, thanks for all the reviews, i just posted chapter six so it should be up soon :D your reviews made me smile today when i turned on my computer and there were like seven more reviews than yesterday, XD.

Reviewer: Pixie Flite
Date: 06/04/07 9:16
Chapter: Chapter Four

Is not boring. MWAHAHAHAHA!!! Next chapter is cliffie. Wait: I have to wait longer!

Author's Response: haha thanks

Reviewer: Pixie Flite
Date: 06/04/07 9:07
Chapter: Chapter Three

TutTut. That was... cool. Nice POV.

Author's Response: Thanks :]

Reviewer: Pixie Flite
Date: 06/04/07 9:03
Chapter: Chapter Two

Whta did I say in my last review? Oh yeah, YOU ARE SO DARN GOOD! It's hard to believe you can throw fluff into the middle of all the bad stuff.

Author's Response: lol thank you that's really what I tried for while writing this fic

Reviewer: Pixie Flite
Date: 06/03/07 18:01
Chapter: Chapter One

You outdid yourself, missie1 Why can't you be normal like the other authors? Why can't you write an average storie, instead of the most awesome one on here?

Author's Response: xD thanks, this review just made like my whole day

Reviewer: Pixie Flite
Date: 06/03/07 17:51
Chapter: Prologue

OhEmGee!!! That is one of the best-written prologues on here!!!

Author's Response: haha thank you verryyyy much :DDD

Reviewer: miss Ceilidh
Date: 06/02/07 23:44
Chapter: Chapter Three

it was Ok.

Author's Response: er, thanks?

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 05/30/07 17:32
Chapter: Chapter Five

I LOVED it!!!! so much better than the last two!!!!! GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT job!!! you really really need to update however, two weeks is way way too long!!!! Please update quick!

Author's Response: thanks, i'm reallyyyyyy glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Marauder_Luver2
Date: 05/30/07 17:27
Chapter: Chapter Five

That was a rather intersteing way to end the chapter. It was very good update soon

Author's Response: thanks :D

Reviewer: Obsessive
Date: 05/30/07 17:13
Chapter: Chapter Five

OOH! What's happening? Good writing there! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks lol :] chapter's in mods, hopefully it'll be out soon.

Reviewer: _miss_kylee_
Date: 05/26/07 19:43
Chapter: Prologue

i love this chapter. espescially the last paragraph when it describing james' shadow behind his eyes and the mask on his face! love this story!

Author's Response: thanks :D

Reviewer: _miss_kylee_
Date: 05/26/07 19:43
Chapter: Prologue

i love this chapter. espescially the last paragraph when it describing james' shadow behind his eyes and the mask on his face! love this story!

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 05/05/07 21:54
Chapter: Chapter Four

please update! this story is great!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yup, I'm just revising chapter 5 and it should be in the queue soon :]

Author's Response: BTW, I used your prank in chapter 8, so after 6 & 7 get validated, you'll get to read it...3 guesses who the "lucky" professor is!

Reviewer: snapeisevil67
Date: 04/28/07 7:58
Chapter: Chapter Four

i really like your story so far. you portray the devastation of war so well. And you make all your sharacters seem so real. a good prank to play on snape would be to have a dark mark follow him around all day.

Author's Response: thanks, i tried really hard for that. and i love your prank, it's hilarious, i hope you don't mind if I change it around a little, maybe have a lion following him around all day? thank you :D

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 04/21/07 17:01
Chapter: Prologue

Amazing story
Can't wait until ur comp is fixed...hopefully for good so u can put the rest up!!!!
Keep writing cause ill sure keep reading

And as of a prank:
I got nothing!!!

And ill rate ur story 9/10
I won't give u a ten beacuse its not complete and 10 is perfect and no ones perfect...

Author's Response: thanks :] I'll write lots more as soon as my comp's fixed, which will hopefully be soon!

Reviewer: Rikku
Date: 04/15/07 18:58
Chapter: Chapter Four

Okay, so after re-reading my review (after submitting it of course) I noticed a sentence where I said something like "giving having...". If you want the sentence to make sense, just ignore the word "giving". Yep, that should do it. Once again, love the story, update soon!

Author's Response: haha thanks ;]

Reviewer: Rikku
Date: 04/15/07 18:55
Chapter: Chapter Four

I really love your story, I think it's nice when the L/J fics aren't just romance but has a lot of seriousness in them too. You're probably right that it is a bit boring at the end of the chapter though; but it doesn't matter that much, because other parts of the chapter are great!

And the pranking Snape part ... Well, I thought about it, and the only thing I could come up with was giving having the marauders slip him some veritaserum, cause then he would say some pretty embarassing stuff or other things ... But it's not really that creative ... I think it's hard to come up with inventive pranks!

Okay, so I'm saying a lot of blah blah blah in this review, but main part is: good story and update soon!

Author's Response: haha I'm also terrible with prank ideas, and thanks for the compliment, i love the cliched L/J fics, but I also really adore the different ones. An update in a week or two, I have everything written and saved on my broken computer, but it's only a battery problem, so everything should be back to normal as soon as Toshiba sends me a new battery pack.

Reviewer: Padfoot777
Date: 04/15/07 17:29
Chapter: Chapter Three

Liked it.

Author's Response: thanks :] hopefully you'll love chapters to come

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 04/14/07 21:15
Chapter: Chapter Four

I actually liked this chapter even though I got a little frustrated that Lily didn't say that she liked James too.
*As for the Snape prank the Mauraders could slip some love potion in something Snape was drinking or eating and Snape could fall in love with a professor. Then Snape would declare his love to that "lucky" professer in front of everyone in the Great Hall and therefor embarrass himself. (he realizes that after the potion wears off)

Author's Response: haha thanks for the prank, I love it, and if I use it I'll be sure to mention you.

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 04/13/07 23:09
Chapter: Chapter Four

good, pretty good, not great though. you started the story off with a bang, well i want a few more bangs, i keep expecting something to happen, an dthen it kinda doesn't. i still LOVE this story though, you don't know how many times i've checked to see if this chapter was update yet.

hmmm, pranks for snape, well is his hair's supposed to be so greasy why don't they dunk it in some sort of vegeable oil, or something sticky thaty he wouldn't be able to get out all day. or they could simply shave all his hair off. Or maybe die it pink and spike it, haha, i don't know.

chapter: 7/10 (i'm a pretty harsh reviewer aren;t i?)

Author's Response: thanks for the pranks :] I like them a lot. Thanks for the critisism too, something somewhat big happens in chapter five, and chapter seven is sort of interesting. I'm nearly done with chapter 8, which is sort of more just dorcas and lily's arguement, and a few snape pranks toward the end, but i won't be able to update for a while because the comp i have everything saved on is broken. never fear though, i have chapters 3-7 in my inbox.

Author's Response: Oh, I forgot, Lily and Dorcas's arguement isn't even mentioned until chapter 7. Oh well, a little spoiler for you.

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