good writing but i think i've read it before and not in your story
Author's Response: if you've read this anywhere that isn't my story, please report it, because this is 100% my writing .
loved it. you have too update soon i am really getting into this story
Author's Response: thanks =] I'll update as soon as my beta returns chapter 11
Please update soon,I'm dying to know what happens next!
Author's Response: :D I will, I promise .
il kill lily... siriusly!! why cant she understand that james loves her... he has even said it aloud... and then she goes of and dates this guy!! what the heck is happening??
anyways, i love the way you write. sirusly!!
ah, and a request....
Author's Response: Ahaha thanks :D Sirius jokes rock =]. And yes, she is being a bit annoying isn't she?
Ooooooo, I can' wait for the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks =]
i seriously would have choked lily by now...no offense but would she just stop being sooo damn thick! i mean come on its not your fault your mom is dead..voldemort is evil and james is right for wanting to kill death eaters and voldemort..i really side with james
Author's Response: I side with James as well, you're completely right...something soon might change Lily's mind a bit. =]
Ahh another great chapter! they ARE great and i know you must get tired of hearing it from me but they really are and never fail to make my day when i read them!!!
Author's Response: Thanks =] I don't get tired of hearing it from you or anyone, you guys keep my ego up :D.
no it's not even the slightest bit of depressing at all! (sure wink wink)
i love it as usual!
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Yes! It's fun to see my theory of that one potions guy becoming Lily's boyfriend come true, seeing as nearly all of my theories about Deathly Hallows turned out to be wrong! (The exception being Snape liking Lily, which I wasn't even really sure about.)
Anyway, thanks for the speedy update, you're doing a great job! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks :] I'm glad your theory was right haha.
Quidditch debate..hehe I loved it. Nice fast update--can't wait for the next :]
Author's Response: thanks =] Next will come soon, I promise.
Author's Response: As soon as my beta reader sends me 11 =]
this story is AWESOME!! absolutely LOVE it. dont stop writing! i cant wait to find out what happnes next between lily and james and marly and sirius... sooo good!
cant wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I promise I won't stop writing any time soon.
Alas, your story has done a very good job of keeping me up tonight as it is not almost three in the morning for me and I was not able to stop reading. But I must say there was one thing I found disapointing — after reaching the end of chapter ten I found my path quite blocked. Perhaps that obsticle will be cleared up soon?
Keep it up! Don't make me go crazy without my favourite Marauders and thier drama-filled friends.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks =)
Alas, I was shocked and excited to find this chapter writen with a new tang. I must say, I know exactly what you mean by not being able to stay with one peoson's point of view for too long. But, the way I see it, everyone is interested to know every side to a story, what goes on in the other characters' heads. And these characters are just too interesting to pass up a chance to step in thier shoes. Can't wait to see who else's shoes we get to try on ;)
Author's Response: Haha, thanks a lot. There are a lot more different point of view chapters to come -- 12 is from James's again and 15 is from Regulus's. It seems random, but it has to do with a certain subplot :)
Turning out very well! I like it!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
I must admit, the first thing that attracted me to this story was the mention of Lily and the Marauders as they are my all-time favourite characters but now I see that there is so much more to it. I find that having it in Lily's point of view gives it a very personal and colourful touch on how she feels about what's going on around her. I cannot wait to read the rest but I felt I had to drop by to give you my two Knuts. Koodos and keep up the good work!
=] nice update. can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'll submit it right now
i love this story i cant wait for the next chapter !!!!!
Author's Response: Always good to here that :).
This story is awesome. I really hope there's going to be some more jealousy, though (I know I'm horrible! But that's just me..) But like, I hope James gets really jealous of Lily going out with that one guy in potions she smiled at, or something like that. Is something like that going to come up? It's just an idea and really random I know... But anyway great job keep up the great work!!!! I added this story to my favorites. Update soon!
And yes, Deathly Hallows did kick some serious butt didn't it?
Author's Response: thanks :] i promise i'll update soon ! and your guesses are good =]