cute with the last bit
awwww he is so cute!!!
helloooooooo! :) it's summer time again :) you think you'll be able to update the next chapter? i sure will be able to read it, seeing that i finally don't have a load of homework to finish off every weekday plus weekend! :)
Author's Response: It's summer! Meaning I definitely have the time now :) Thanks for reading!
Waiting Waiting Waiting for a new chapter :)
(I guess i already reviewed but, just another time)
I love it!
Desperate for a new chapter! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! Writing away :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Writing away :)
Hey
it was good.i liked it but you've done better!i'm sorry to said that. howerver i'm waiting for the next one to come.i'm sure you'll do great and make me satisfied! UPDATE sooon.
Author's Response: Well, I hope you like the next a little better!
Loooooooved it
But please update quickly!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on it ;)
Loooooooved it
But please update quickly!!
Next chapter or I'll go clinically insane and you'll have it on ur concscience forever!!! (really now just update :-D)
Author's Response: I'm working on it! Thank you :)
this fan-made story is amazing! i still can't believe you're ending it...i haven't read it for so long since the last two updates...the first time i read this fanfiction was 2 or 3 years ago, and it's still one of my top favorites. do you know how hard it is googling a lily/james fanfiction without it being poorly written...or farfitched. your fanfiction is unbelieveable..i especially like how you introduced it from the first few chapters.
this fan-made story is amazing! i still can't believe you're ending it...i haven't read it for so long since the last two updates...the first time i read this fanfiction was 2 or 3 years ago, and it's still one of my top favorites. do you know how hard it is googling a lily/james fanfiction without it being poorly written...or farfitched. your fanfiction is unbelieveable..i especially like how you introduced it from the first few chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so happy that you've enjoyed reading it thus far <3. Don't worry, there are at least four or five chapters and an epilogue to go ;)
Great job with this chapter! Cannot wait to see the next one :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I really like the story so far. You've got a great writing style and everything flows pretty nicely. I really liked Frank and Alice's part, there aren't nearly enough stories about them.
However, I lose interest pretty quickly with this whole will they won't they crap that a lot of stories have with LJ's seventh year (hasn't that already been happening for the past 2+ years???) Just some advice :)
Again, good job!!!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! I think the answer is now permanently yes, they will.
Good story! I saw one bad thing. James,on towards the end. He kinda of got....um...."Loopy"? Like he belonged in the Asylum instead of Hogwarts.
Depressing as hell. Thats my only comment as far as the story in that. Hmmm.....I just hope James and Lily go ahead and get together instead of this bs.
Deathly Hallow was awesome. I assume these are 2 of those deaths you were talking about.
