this rocked. my gosh u r so like awesome. honest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
U really know lily n james. gr8 work have fun and enjoy life.
ur so so fabulous. now i personally think that my story looks like the 'wishing jug' or sumthing being compared to HP. ur definately amazing. im not flirting. just being honest.. have fun
Switching from Lily to James all of a sudden was a bit confusing. It would have been helpful if we had a warning or something. But the story is great!!
Author's Response: Thank you :D And for the concrit as well ;]
OMG! I love James after all he had been through he still went that extra mile to help someone other than himself! I agree with you , I luv him too! I almost cried during this chapter!
Author's Response: I know! James is awesome isn't he?
Oh! That was so beautifully dramatic, so tragic, so..real. This is the best I've ever seen James done, and I love how you've developed Lily's character from the beginning of the story up to this point. More, please!
Author's Response: Thank you! (:
YES OH MY GOD!! I CRYIED!!! James is supper sweet.. Did lily say i love you outloud? She better have!! Oh my god i can't wait for my friend Ali to read this i bet she'll start crying like me!! Good Job can't wait for the next one!! LILY BETTER SAY I LOVE YOU TO JAMES!!
Author's Response: SHE WILL AT SOME POINT (: thank youuu
Utterly amazing chapter! Very well written :)
Author's Response: thank you =D
reallyreallyreallygood!
i loveee the way you write james.
so realistic. (:
Author's Response: Thanks. (:
Wow, that was really sad. Poor James! :(
Author's Response: Yeah definitely =[
Wow, that was really sad. Poor James! :(
Very entertaining! Love this fan fic! It really is fantastic
Terrific Chapter, cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'll respond to all your comments here - thank you very much for all of them. :D
Wow, lots of back stabing in this chapter! Overall very nicely written.
An unbelievably good chapter! :)
A bit of a short chapter but still enjoyable! Great writing
Pure enjoyment! Fantastic fan fic.
Terrific chapter! James just can't get his act together around Lily though, thats really funny
