Reviews For My Constant
Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 12/07/07 9:42
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

i love this story. it makes me smile. its adorable how james and lily have there conversations. pushing each other bottons. haha. keep writing. dont give up. i hate it when people have wonderful stories and leave us readers hanging. you doing a great job keep it up! and update soon soon soon:D

Author's Response: (: I won't give up .

Reviewer: Splatteh
Date: 12/07/07 2:18
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

I love this story, its so real and full of humour and real people! Especially this chapter where Lily the Head Grinch finally gets drunk!

Your story is unique in the sense that I felt it really explored how Lily and James felt about each other and world around them.

Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you (: Your review made me smile

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 12/06/07 21:21
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

I just discovered this story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great story.

Author's Response: Thank youu :D

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 12/06/07 16:09
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

Ah THAT WAS AWESOME!!! Now i hope Calvin or what ever his name one gets a firm relatity check for messing with the amazing shipping of Lily and James!
Dare,” I replied.

“Dare you to love me.”

More firewhisky, and then I said, “Course I love you, James, how is that a dare?”
Thats my favorite line!! Tobad with there hangovers there not gonna remember much.. hopefully not of corse!! Ahh good chapter love this one so far!!

Author's Response: That's my favorite line too! I actually know people who remember everything about their night when they've been drunk ... but I can guarantee you LIly isn't one of those people. :D Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Lana Moonland
Date: 12/06/07 14:14
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

Sounds A LOT like the parties I had with my friends this summer. How come people became sooo stupid when they are drunk? Except for the kissing the knee part. That's a little too much; no matter how drunk I am, I can always find people's lips. Hehe.

I truly believe this is my favorite chaptered fanfic in this entire site. You are bloody brilliant!


Author's Response: thank youu :D also, i know people who, when they are drunk, are actually smarter than they are when they're sober. is that weird?

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 12/06/07 1:27
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

hehe. the beginning was sort of umm... sober, but the ending was really funny. =D

Author's Response: Hehe, how punny :D Thank you =]

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 12/06/07 1:24
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

hehe. the beginning was sort of umm... sober, but the ending was really funny. =D

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 12/05/07 19:10
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

LMAO!!!!! I loved it! Them drunk is totally awesome!!! Update soon, please!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah they are awesome drunk :D

Reviewer: groovalicious
Date: 12/05/07 13:50
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

that was really good i loved it!! it was sooo sad!!! nice ending, can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: Thanksss :D

Reviewer: BRITTD25
Date: 12/04/07 23:12
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

Too funny!! Keep 'em coming!!

Author's Response: Thank you (:

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 12/04/07 18:13
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

OOOOO
wow lots and lots of drinking there
i wonder how there next day is gona be like thats gona be a major hangover but then again they were drinking away the paint


I really liked the chapter, ur doing a great job with the story :D

I really liked the confrontations between James and Lily... i hope she finally gives in and tells him what she really feels in a more sober state :D

Author's Response: thanks you :D and of course she will, at some point

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 12/04/07 18:04
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

it was so sad at the beggining i felt so bad for Lily.but the end was soo funny i loved it! I want Lily and James to be together soon. Update soon

Author's Response: I will! And they will, in a few chapters (:

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 12/04/07 18:04
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

it was so sad at the beggining i felt so bad for Lily.but the end was soo funny i loved it! I want Lily and James to be together soon. Update soon

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 12/04/07 18:03
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

it was so sad at the beggining i felt so bad for Lily.but the end was soo funny i loved it! I want Lily and James to be together soon. Update soon

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 12/04/07 17:54
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

Soooo funny! Loved reading this chapter :)

Author's Response: thank you! (:

Reviewer: hpluvsgw
Date: 12/04/07 17:41
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

Wow, nice chapter! I guess it did make sense for them all to get drunk bc theyre mourning. Well ttly can't wait 4 ur nxt chapter! ;) *hint hint*

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 12/04/07 16:43
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

The end was pretty funny, but the beginning kinda made me a bit depressed. I guess you were trying to make the readers feel Lily's saddness, and it worked really well! Great chapter, nice and long!

~Passion For Prongs

Author's Response: Thank you! Don't get used to long chapters, though - the next few are pretty short. =[

Reviewer: blah929
Date: 12/04/07 16:15
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen

lol the drunk truth or dares are hilarious! love this chapter!!!!!!! Lily needs to dump Calvin soon cause she and James are awesome together!

L+J+ 4ever

Author's Response: :D thank you!

Reviewer: iheartjames
Date: 11/25/07 18:02
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen

i feel so bad for lily and james. but i love him so much and he is so sweet!

Author's Response: I know, isn't he awesome!? (:

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 11/24/07 17:09
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen

Awwww that is horrible! *sniffles* For them to both lose both of their parents. Are you going to explain wh their parents were targeted? (and if James's parents were actually poisoned?) Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Well, it was actually Lily herself who was targeted and her parents were just casualties - and James' parents were targeted because they're both really up-high Aurors and yeah they were targeted I might mention that in a later chapter.

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