This is my favorite chapter! I can't stop reading it! I have probably read it 20 times, I know it all by heart!
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks. A lot.
Let me start of by saying: I LOVE THIS FIC. I simply cannot read enough James/Lily and Marauder era fics. I've read all 66,000+ words of this fic in just under 3 hours and I have to say that it is one of the best James/Lily fics that I've read to date. It is wonderfully written and very plausible. You know a fic is good when you stay up until 2:30 in the morning to finish reading the fic. I can't wait to continue reading more of this fic, keep up the awesome, awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank you! A lot =]] I will, I hope.
I really really love your story. The writing is fantastic...and actually believable! keep up the good work! And please update!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will soon =] I have the next chapter written, I just need to find some time to edit it and post.
I really really love your story. The writing is fantastic...and actually believable! keep up the good work! And please update!
someone needs to update... hint hint
By the way... I for one don't think the stories seems to dragging on... I mean if you want to, you could write like 40 chapters. I mean... I wouldn't mind.
Author's Response: :D Thank you. I don't think it'll go on for that long, simply because I have an extremely short attention span, haha.
it's good, but it's dragging on and on. i think you should end it soon and have Lily and James get together otherwise they'll be out of school before they're a couple.
Author's Response: No, they won't. Trust me, I know. However, if you do think it's dragging on, you can stop reading once they become an actual couple around chapter 20.
nice chapter. Lily is really frustrating me she needs to get with James already. Im so glad that Marly realized Sirius telled the truth. I feel so bad for James. I hate Calvin, he cant be with Lily she needs to be with James 4eva. i hope Lily is ok, I cant believe Marly poisened her even thouh it wasnt on purpose. Anyways loved this chapter, you are an awesome author, please update soon!!
Author's Response: =] Thank you!
nice chapter. Lily is really frustrating me she needs to get with James already. Im so glad that Marly realized Sirius telled the truth. I feel so bad for James. I hate Calvin, he cant be with Lily she needs to be with James 4eva. Anyways loved this chapter, you are an awesome author, please update soon!!
I am absolutely in love with James in every way possible. Your story is so frustrating at times, but it's definitely the best L/J i've read!! :)
Author's Response: =] Thank youu :D
Omigosh!!!!!! I love your story!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
Author's Response: (: As soon as the queue opens haha.
Awsome! I really liked this chapter, there's a lot of stuff going on. Finally Marly believed Sirius. But I gotta say, near the end of the chapter Calvin seemed pretty suspicious to me. The cliffhanger killed me. Can't wait to know what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Aw, it's not Calvin's fault! Haha. Thanks (: Next chapter once the queues open.
Well I pretty much attacked my computer when I checked my email and found out that this story was updated. This is really becoming one of...no, my favorite story I have read in a long time on here. I love the long author's note so I decided to asnwer the questions you asked...lol.:
1.) I feel bad for Calvin because he truly does love Lily but I don't like him at all becuase Lily belongs with James...lol.
2.) I absolutely loveee James! I only wish that Lily would stop being stupid and date him! Lol.
3.) I think Lily needs to stop fighting herself and get with James! Lol.
Overall, I love this story so much and it makes me sad that you're not planning on doing more than 30 chapters...I wish this one could go on forever. Great job with the descriptions of feelings and stuff...makes the readers feel what the characters are feeling. Best story ever...that's all I have left to say. :)
**Emma(please update soon! Lol.)
Author's Response: (: Thank you for your review - it really did make me smile. I agree with 1, 2, and 3. Don't worry, Lily will stop being stupid soon =]. I feel like going past 30 chapters will sort of be milking it although when I really think about it my mind puts the story more in the range of 33-34 haha. And of course I'll write more after this - probably more Lily/James as it's my favorite HP ship
HAPPY EVE OF NEW YEARS EVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MY RESISLOUSION IS TO EAT HEALTHLY AFTER ALL MY CHOCOLATE IS GONE!
WHATS URS?
GREAT FAB LOVELY CHAPPIE LOVED IT!!!!!
P.S. ITS GOING TO BE HARD MY RESILOUION BECAUSE I GOT A CHOCIE FOUNTAIN FOR CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY 2008!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ITS ALMOST A DECADE WOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Happy eve of New Year's Eve to you too (: My resolution is to get some more sleep and do all my homework although I'm not sure if the two mix haha. Wow. Two more years and it's a decade. o_o
new yers resolution, hmmmmm, to get homework done on time for once?
this is a good story, keep up te good work :)
Calvin is almost fake, i don't like him, maybe he poisoned it on purpose, e is secretly working for Voldemort >:-)
Where is Peter? he hardly shows up in the stor, mind i do the same thing, i don't like him either, even if he idn't work for voldemort, e is strange :)
Merry Christmas/Hanukah etc etc and a Hapy New Year!
PaP
Author's Response: Peter's not in NEWT potions I think ... at least according to my plans he's not. And during the break he and Remus were with their families haha
Author's Response: Also, thank you for your review and that should be one of my resolutions as well. :D
I LOVED IT! Although I kinda wish James had pronounced his love for Lily with the Veritaserum...but I think you had your reasons.
~Passion For Prongs
Author's Response: James and Lily's "I love you"s will come at some point, trust me (:
James must know the truth about Lily being in love with him I DEMAIND IT!!! So Marly and Sirius are back together now!! Awesome awesome awesome!! Happy holidays cant wait for more!
Author's Response: (:
Great chapter! Lily hungover was quite funny!!! This is an amazing fan fic ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Omigosh! What a perfect cliffie! I hate you for writing it like that, but I love you for being such a fantastic writer. I hope its possible to love and hate you...
Anyhow, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and a great New Year! Can't wait for the next chappie, literally!
P.S. I have to say i love how you make Calvin so...so... i dunno, but I like how you write his character even if i dont like him. I like the beginning alot too!!!
Keep on going!!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be posted once the queues reopen. And I also have strange feelings toward Calvin -- I feel bad for him, because he really does love Lily even if we have to be biased toward him because we're all James fangirls here :D
Beatiful!!! ( wipes tear from eye!!!)
Author's Response: (: thank you
I sort get annoyed with Lily! I mean she should realize she and James are meant for each other, and that her and Calvin don't have anything and need to break up! If the Veritaserum actually worked, wouldn't Calvin have asked Lily if she loved him or James? Anways, Calvin I HATE, he's just getting in the way of true love. Plus, he's really horrible when he's drunk and would be abusive I think.
Signed,
JAMES IS THE BEST AND CUTEST AND I WISH HE WAS MY BOYFRIEND!!
Author's Response: Yes, that's what Calvin would have eventually asked. I agree that Calvin would be abusive if he became an alcoholic. And yes, James is pretty awesome isn't he?