Yeah, a new chapter!!! 8dances around the house in school uniform and pink, white fluffy socks while getting odd looks from just plain weird family members*
So, first, I have a question. Why would you even consider thinking I was hateful of Calvin? I don't hate him. I have never hated him. True, he's not my best friend, but neither are anyone in this story. My best friends name is Lauren ..... At least, that's all I'm telling you.
I like this chapter. It's not the est, because I like the more romantic chapters more, but I like this chapter.
I could also not like this story as much because it talks about divorce and shells of people and it hits home for me.
See, my parents are separated. They separated in 2005. They separated because my father got so screwed up, so depressed (apparentelly) that my mum pilitely asked him to leave. (no, really, it was poliely. It the first converstation in ages where they didn't yell at each other in ages, months, almost a year.
Away from that and back to something a little closer to the story at hand (although it does have it's consetions). I loved this chapter. I did!
Please update soon. Please!
Oh, and sorry about the computer. Can't take the blame though, I'm not informed on where you live so I can't even get involved in something like this.
~ Parchment and Quill'
P.S. Sorry 'bout the ramblings. I tend to do it when I'm hyper active. (Long story...).
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. It's okay that you rambled haha. I assumed most people hated Calvin because there are just so many reviews that are like I HATE CALVIN RAWR D:< so I was probably wrong about that part.rnrnSorry about your parents - I can see where this chapter might really hit home for you. I will update soon. 19 is ready and waiting (:
Write more!!!!! this is my favorite story!!!! I need more!!!!!! NOW!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm about to post the next chapter! (: Thank you!!!
Author's Response: I KNOW!!!!!!!!!
I have only just started reading fanfics and I can most definatly say that I am absoloutly hooked on yours =]
I actually opened this account merely so that I could give you a little message to say how great your story is
please update soon.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you =]
It is amazing!
Author's Response: For sure :D Thank you (:
Please add more to your story. This story was great.lol
Author's Response: Thank you! (:
gosh she is so confused!!!!!!!!!!!i love it!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
omg.. this is getting sooo good :)
i knew it was gonna happen, and with the war and all ,but calvin and lily have been dating for not even a year!!!!!
what wars do to people... *shakes head* hahaha
Author's Response: That's exactly it, yeah. Thank you so much (:
the story is all right nut y isnt james n lily together yet?? its like taking them forever to get together... lol but great story though... cant wait for the next chapter.. update soon
Author's Response: James and Lily aren't together get because of the way I made Lily's character. They will be soon, though. Unfortunately an update might take a while because my old computer broke completely and I have to rewrite chapters 18-20.
OMG!!!! Will you please get James and Lilly together?!?!?!? I cannot wait any longer!
Author's Response: Soon (:
I love how pissed they were the whole time. funny! god chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks (:
YOU ARE MEAN! I hate reading cliffies, though it's fun to write them.
Author's Response: very fun. haha
You know who Casey is? Such a sad day, the day he died.
Author's Response: an extremely sad day. i was sobbing and blasting hawthorne heights for hours.
Almost. I know what it's like to lose your parents. At least they will always have their memories.
Author's Response: I know what it's like to lose someone very close to you. I tried to show the emotions properly. Yes they will always have their memories. May their parents' souls always rest in peace.
Voldemort is the wizarding world's Hitler! Death Eaters are Nazis!
Author's Response: agreed.
OMG, you HAVE to update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: haha. i'll try to.
I KNEW CALVIN WAS ABOUT TO PROPOSE THE MOMENT HE GOT ALL NERVOUS! I WAS LIKE WOAH!!! What was James reaction to that????
I hate how Lily's exes go crazy and do stupid things like joing Voldy because Lily broke up with them. PLEASE DONT MAKE THAT HAPPEN!!!!
This chapter seemed kind of rushed. It wasn't as detailed as your other chapters, but I still loved it.
PS. a goo Early Christmas present would be an update!!!!! update!!!!
Author's Response: James was definitely pretty shocked. And no, Calvin won't do that. He's a good sport.
I have been waiting for this for a long time!!! I was kind of surprised Calvin proposed so soon. I mean, they haven't even been together that long!
I don't underestand James, I mean doesn't he love Lily??? Or was he not really visiting becasue it hurt him to see her like that? Did James just give Lily chocolates or something, because if he did, I would have expected something better.
Author's Response: During the war, everyone was all "let's get married before we die!" and Calvin joined in on that, just like the Weasleys and eventually the Potters, to an extent. That's my explanation for that. James loves Lily, of course - he wasn't visiting because he believed that it hurt her to be around him/it hurt him to be around her and know that she "belonged" to someone else. And he didn't give her chocolates. Of course not. He gave her earrings that matched her eyes and probably cost him more than my house is worth.
I really like this story and this was a brilliant chapter
Author's Response: Thank you =]
OMG he actually proposed to her?! poor guy got rejected..but hey..James is the one marrying her! we all know that XP
great story so far! u just made my day!!
Author's Response: Haha glad to know I made your day. Poor Calvin =[ But James > Calvin, so that had to happen. haha