Loved it! Cannot wait to read more :-)
i love this so much! you're so honest and you make the whole thing completely real. i can't wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you :D !
does 'nice guess' mean I'm right? Or am I close?
Author's Response: It means I'm going to be mean and make you wait and see wahahaha >:D
Ohh, this chapter was so nice! I just got my ability to go back on the computer tonight and I jumped strait on here to find you'd updated in the days I hadn't been round.
I loved this chapter just like any others. The bit where she talked to Remus and co. was excellent and I could really feel for her when she was scared that if she had her nightmares James wouldn't of come to comfort her.
So, please update soon. I'm guessing that James and Lily will get together in the next few chapters (after the stuff with the Death Eaters)! :)
Update soon, love the story,
~ Parchment and Quill
Author's Response: Thank you! (:rnrn(Also, nice guess :D)
i love your story so far! its amazing. I'm uber glad that Calvin is out of the picture because he was annoying ahah. anyways please update soon!!
Author's Response: thank you! :D
it was good but i think you could have added another chapter to the end there- just to finish it off!!
It was really good though!!
Author's Response: thank you !rn(& I think you might be confused? the fic's not done quite yet! haha)
update soon! great story! least favourite character: snape.. heh.. no really, I'm not a big fan of Calvin, but he's not evil..
anyways, great story and please update very soon!
Author's Response: thank you! (:
The idea scared us an enthralled us.
I'm going to take a wild guess and assume you meant to say "and" instead of "an." :)
That's my only nitpick.
Okay. So. I LOVE your story. It's absolutely amazing! I love the relationship between James and Lily. I love how all the dark/angst stuff is juxapose with romance and friendships. I love how you write the dark parts. I love how Lily refers to everyone as "we," the way that you make everyone suffer. I love how it seems so real and dangerous in this.
It was the best unaided night's sleep I'd had in months.
I love LIly and James need each other. It makes perfect sense and you write it in such a real, believable way.
"Put that thing out," I said shortly. "You're going to get lung cancer."
I love this bit about the cigarette. It's so real. It's something that we, the readers, can relate to, and it makes the horror that much more real to us.
Remus rolled his eyes. "You and James have to be the two biggest idiots I have ever met."
This made me smile, despite all the drama and awful stuff going on. I love how you can put a little bit of humor in there with all the other stuff.
Professor Saggese's entire family was murdered at once.
I like how you show the war affecting everyone, not just Lily and her friends. I also like how you protrayed the DADA teacher. I get so sick of reading MWPP fic after MWPP fic with old, mean, unfeeling DADA professors.
And we would win. We would save the world, or at least our little part of it.
This is a beautiful closing to this chapter. I love it. It wraps up everything that was going on. This would be a great last line to a story.
Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: (thank you, I corrected that)rnrnI like that you know the word "juxapose." I love that you told me everything you liked about this chapter. Thank you so much for your review. It really means a lot to me.
Looking forward to a new chapter! I think the recent turn of events is quite interesting. I can't wait to read more. :) Woot.
I wasn't too keen on Calvin, I actually thought he was a little annoying, but that's probably only because I'm such a Lily/James fan. :D But now I feel a little bad for him, but not enough to want them together. I like that in his heart, he knew Lily and James were going to be together... Also, I was quite fond of this chapter especially because of the nightmares and such. It's nice to know Lily is slowly coming around. :) All I can say is: keep up the good work and keep those chappies coming!! :]
Author's Response: I agree with the feeling bad for Calvin, but not wanting them together - everyone knows James belongs to Lily and Lily belongs to James.rnrnThank you very much for your review (: !
AHHH! you can't even imagine how excitedd i am that you wrotee. i was beginning to think that you abandoned your storyy. because that always seems to happen to my favorites =[. Anywayyy I love this chapterr. I always feel like lily and james get so far, and the something ruinesit. and im reallly nervous for marly. I hope lily can nag her into stoppingg. update sooon pretty pelase!
Author's Response: thank you :D No I won't abandon my story. And yeah I have a thing about cigarettes =/
This was such an emotional chapter...I LOVED IT! I liked that Remus and Peter went to Lily to try and convince her that she needed to talk to James, but I thought him coming in added a nice twist to the plot.
I kind of understand where Lily's coming from, where she's afraid to sleep because of nightmares, and because if she does have the nightmares, no on will come to her.
~Passion For Prongs
Author's Response: Thank you!
I like that Remus called them idiots -- she needs to talk to him.
Author's Response: Remus is a smart dude.rnrnThank you :D
great chapter. i really loved it.
the nightmares must be so scary. the war is fianlly getting to everyone releasing that it is real.
This was a sad chapter. when Prof. Saggese broke down in class i almost started crying.
I loved how you had james and Lily comfort each other about their nightmares. but when james overheard her conversation with remus it kind of sucked because i thought they might finally be together.
Lily really needs to talk to him and tell him how she feels.
and marly smoking really mad me mad. but the pressure of the war is tkaing a toll on everyone and they need someway to realx and forget about it.
anyways great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! (:
I love James too! He's so sweet! I feel so bad for everyone, though! Life sucks sometimes. Poor Lily. Poor James.
Author's Response: =[ Poor future Potters.rnrnThank you!
Wow. That's all I can really say. This was so sad, but so incredible. I feel so bad for James!
Author's Response: Thank you!
"Erm - would you look at that, the sky is blue!" Best line ever. I love this chapter. Especially the end, with all the Marauders in Lily's kitchen. Amazing job.
Author's Response: Thanks :D
I'm really enjoying your way of having Lily argue with herself. It's very entertaining, and it shows her emotions really well. I've said this before, and I'll say it again...you are an amazing writer.
Author's Response: Thanks so much (:
Oh my god! That's so sad! I really liked it though. You're a fantastic writer.
Author's Response: Thank you (:
I absolutely love this chapter! It's so dramatic and fun to read. I loved the prank the Marauders played on Snape; very original, very funny. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
I just started reading your story yesterday...well, I finished what is here. I have to say, I Looove the alternating points of view. At first, I wasn't sure if the alternating P.O.V. would make the plot oddfor me, but I really see how effective the varieties are, especially Calvin's.
I also like that your story isn't full of excess fluff; it has its fair share of war and distress, which definately is a plus.
Good work. =] I love it. Yay. =]
Author's Response: Thank you! (: