heyyyyyyyy...it's moi! I'm writing this review to make you happy :) It was a great chapter, though I did not like how short it was (I'm eager for more) and I'm certainly not happy about the cliffhanger!!! I mean, yes, I will definately read the next chapter (duh)--which is why authors use cliffhangers, but seriously...THAT'S A HUGE CLIFFHANGER!
I'll never forgive you...
~Passion For Prongs
Author's Response: Aw, it's not that bad! XD Thank you very much, I'll submit 22 soon, it just needs some tweaking.
luvers it!!! cant wait till the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
This was a really sweet chapter, with a little cliffy at the end. I like it. Please, please, PLEASEEEE write more!!
Author's Response: Will do :D
Aww... poor James. I feel so damned sorry for him. The poor guy. Hopefully he'll say yes, and both of them will be happy, yeah?
And Marly and Sirius engaged! Lol. Nice fib, maybe it can be turned into a truth later on. =D
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one, but will still have to. lol.
Author's Response: Hopefully :]
Ok, so im gone for a few weeks in the summer, I come back and the first interneting I do is going to read this story...verryyy excited for an update...and I die a little inside because there is a cliffie! Even though you leave me in terrible suspence, you are fab!!! please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will, 21 is written and I'm just being lazy about updating XD
I feel obligated to review because this is such a wonderful story! Nicely written and original (and I like the fact your chapters are rather longer than most people's :D )
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
at least lilly is sleeping a little i love tis story
Author's Response: Thanks :D it loves you back.
i loved this chap really amazingly done
Author's Response: thanks, glad you liked it :D
i liked this chap quite a bit
Okay, for a second there, I forgot that James was still in the same room... Then the line at the end made me drop the sugar peas I was holding. Please update soon!
Author's Response: XD I love the element of surprise. I will, hopefully within the next week...if I remember. I have 21 all written, I just have to edit a bit.
Please update soon!!!! :-)
Author's Response: :]
this is so good you've really sent the pain thet're all feeling through the typing really powerful
Author's Response: thanks :D
well i have to say the begining was a teeny tiny little bit slow but at the same time intriguing
cnt wait to read more
GO LILY!!!!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
cupcakes forever and always,
Author's Response: Yum cupcakes :D
will he sayy yes?!
please let him sayy yess!
Author's Response: Hehe maybe ;o Thank you!
Awwwwww!!!! I loved it! I just hope James says yes...will he?
~Passion For Prongs
Author's Response: Maybe ;]
OhMyGawd. You suck. I hate the stupid cliffies! Update! Please! Please? HURRY! UPDAAATE!!! :):):):)
Author's Response: In a couple days, I promise. I have 21 done, I just need to edit it a bit.
Sooner or later we all to have to grow up. But to tell the truth, I don't think I would want to experience what any of them are going through. But thats fiction, this real life, and even to then ... we all have the same connection, the same bond that keeps us together or even makes us fall apart.
Author's Response: Thank you for such a deep review. I pretty much agree 100%.
Very nice chapter!! Very exciting :-)
Author's Response: =] thanks!
:) I like it. Lots.
Author's Response: =] thanks :D