Terrific chapter! I though you did fine writing Peter I understand about not being "fond" of his character. I also understand about being busy but please update soon!!! :-)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I've actually been really into writing lately, and the first 3000 words of the next chapter have already been written, haha.
Story's still going great!
But when will Lily and James get back together?!? It's so frustrating that they don't !
Author's Response: Hey, they have to eventually, right? Otherwise, Harry Potter would never have been born ;) & thank you!
i'm interested in hearing james's perspective of the distance between him and lily right now...just curious. :)
Author's Response: I actually think that would be interesting too – but chapter 24 is from a very different perspective, I think. (by the way, I posted it! So it should be up within a few days)
wow that was a long wait. but a great chapter :D cant wait for the next update :D
Author's Response: It was ridiculously long, I actually feel pretty bad about that. BUT the next chapter is shaping up to be VERY long.
are you going to post the next chapter soon? please finish this story. :(
Author's Response: Don't worry about it – I'll be done soon!
i wonder how lily is going to find out about the maurders' secret, that is if she does find out. :)
Author's Response: Well...she has to know eventually ;]
so...um...how's that interlude coming along for you?? just wondering. :)
Author's Response: Nearly done! Should be posted by mid-next week.
i am impatiently awaiting for the next chapter. can you hurry up??? i love your story. update!!
Author's Response: I'm nearly done! I'm already up to 4k and it's an interlude-y chapter x_x
Wow, that caught me off guard! Terrific chapter :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
wow...well this just got overated :). lolz. what is going to happen next??? ALICE is going to have nevile. i wonder. can lily and james get back together again. it's sad seeing them argue so much. :(
Author's Response: is she going to have Neville? Hmm...
oh i didnt accept you to update! this fic is special and its kind of different! i like your characters. and im happy you want to update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! To be honest, I hadn't realized how much time had passed since my last update until I updated again and saw comments from early 2009, haha.
FINALLY!!! i've read this fanfiction a couple of times and i love it. so much DRAMA. it is my FAVORITE FANFICTION- and i've read a lot of other lily and james fanfictions before. I hope the next chapter is really good. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm halfway done with the next chapter already :D
i love the way you write.
this prologue has me hooked :)
Author's Response: thank you so much!
I like your story, it is very interesting, when do you think you might write more?
Author's Response: I am writing more as we speak! Thank you!
Author's Response: I just posted chapter 23!
i love this story. i love to see you update again. i read this whole story i 2 days. i don't know if you want to ever update again. if so update quickly and if you're not please change your mind. this fic realy amazes me. you're putting new things in it.
Author's Response: I'm trying (though I realize you reviewed 7 months ago)! I've been unbelievably busy.
you finally got rid of him!!!!!
i kinda like james more than harry
I found this fic a couple of days ago, and by now it has become one of my favourites! I love these Lily/James fics where they don't get together too easily, and just live happily ever after! I love the drama and waiting, and this story definetly has it.
You have created very good characters and your plot just makes me want to read more and more. I hope you will write more really soon! I can't wait it!
Keep doing the good work! Spring greetings here from Finland!
Author's Response: thank you :D Spring/summer greetings from the US!
i reli like this story
its got a lot of potential
Author's Response: thank you =]