Absolutely brilliant. You've captured Draco's personality perfectly and your summary is quite funny too.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I was actually just discussing the character before I came here. He is one of my favorite charries. I am glad I was astute and amusing.

*envies your ending abilities*

No, really. I just think you end every one of your poems perfectly, with all the meaning of the poem you wanted to convey concealed in the single line, or single stanza, as it sometimes happens, though usually it is a line. So, wonderful job. This poem is so....true. To Draco. Because he does act like that. As if it weren't his fault. You know? Great poem, Tagidi Riva...

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I try to treat the last line as a summation. I try to make it a clear picture of my meaning. I really believe that a few words can really say a lot.

I like it; it's dark and hopeless, as Draco's future should be. ;-) I think you've done a very good job of capturing Draco's fear while still keeping his false bravado. Good work.

Author's Response: Thanks again. I mean that literally. ;)