Reviewer: RavenclawDiamond
Date: 03/08/08 6:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

Well I'm very glad she didn't do it, I really like the ending 'Longer she'd wait to hear angels sing' thats a really powerful line.

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 03/27/07 15:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

It's wonderful, Emily_the_Poet! Very interesting take on things, as I've never thought of Hermione in this kind of context. But this is a very moving sonnet and I think the words are beautiful and your meter is perfect. *Alas, is no poetry expert*

I like that you used a potion to signify Death because it's such an interesting metaphor. And really, your choice of words is fantastic. Beautific. Lovely way to earn House Points, haha. Great job!

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