Reviews For The Locket
Reviewer: pinktat
Date: 03/22/07 7:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

Fantastic as ever, I really felt for bells loss and can totally see why she did what she did, it was like pulling back the curtains for her, allowing her to see the true evil of her lord. Will you be wrting another from draco's pov?

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Hmmm...I hadn't thought of writing one in Draco's POV. I don't think I could write now. I'm working on a new chaptered fic and maybe some challenges for the fourm, but I might think about it for future.

Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 03/21/07 14:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great story. I can totally feel Bella's pain at losing her sister. I did find one small grammar error...

“You may open it,” he said, clearing seeing her anticipation.

I think Clearing should be clearly. :)

I really have to say that Bella is growing on me because of you. I don't know if your version is what Jo sees, but I like it. ;) Cyns

Author's Response: *smiles* Thanks Cyns. Also, thanks for pointing out the grammar error. I shall run and fix it. *huggles*

Reviewer: phoenix_93
Date: 03/21/07 13:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

really well written, the only thing is that i dont thing destroying a horcrux would be that easy. good start though. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

You're totally right about the Horcrux. I was so busy trying to set the mood, I didn't really think about it. Guess that was kind of dense of me.

Reviewer: NikkiSue
Date: 03/21/07 12:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

oooohhhh.... What a great story. I was reading this and wondered if it was a continuation from your Green Dragon prompt? It had a lot of similarities. I loved seeing into Bella's head as it is slightly different every time you dive in through your stories. I'm still at war with myself as far as her leaving Voldemort after her kills Cissy, though. Part of me thinks she would and part of me thinks, though she would be torn and might have quavering beliefs, that she would allow it to pass eventually. I think she might be more bitter at the reasoning behind the act happening. I LOVED the fic, regardless of internal arguements though. Fabulous job as always!! (I even took time at work to read it, I was so excited!)
*huggles*
~Nicole

Author's Response: *huggles Nicole*

Your reviews really make my day. More huggles.

Anyway, I just believe that Narcissa and Bella have a strong bond. I don't believe Bella could get over losing her sister, nor could she forgive someone who hurt her.

Thanks so much for the compliments.

Reviewer: pinktat
Date: 03/21/07 8:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Another master piece:)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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