I wanted to read another one of your poems and thought this was a great title. It was also a good poem! I really liked the rhyme scheme you used, with two lines rhyming and a third that sort of concluded each stanza. It flowed very well. I also liked how the poem told a story, as sad as it was. You could really feel the bitterness of this piece. Great job! Thanks for my lovely banner, and CONGRATS on making the top ten list!
PS. What couple did you have in mind when you were writing this piece??
im not sure who it's about, but i lurve it!!
That is so depressingly sad! I like how you did say flat out who the poem was about. I love how you put everything into great detail! You're a fantastic writer!
Very nice. I really love the style you have.