Reviews For Winter Wishes
Reviewer: Emily_Anne
Date: 12/12/07 18:34
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

Amazing! I love it!

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!

Reviewer: Traiana
Date: 11/02/07 10:03
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

Very well written!
Your story lets arise the spirit of chrismas even if it's just November ^.^
And they're both so cuute, aren't they?


Author's Response:
Thank you so much.

Well, I think so

Reviewer: Traiana
Date: 11/02/07 10:03
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

Very well written!
Your story lets arise the spirit of chrismas even if it's just November ^.^
And they're both so cuute, aren't they?

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 09/30/07 19:34
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

Very Sweet!

Author's Response: ...and fluffy! Like snow! *hugs you*

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/25/07 19:54
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

Aw, that was cute.

Author's Response: I thought so, too. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Padfoot519
Date: 09/08/07 0:52
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

where did you get Sirius' motto from

Author's Response: Sirius's motto actually ought to be credited. It's from the story 'The Princess Bride' by William Gold-something or other. One of the more brilliant books written in the last 50 years or so and I reccomend it to everyone!

Reviewer: x_dobby
Date: 09/05/07 19:36
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

lovely. really nice. most S/R fics are just pathetic, and this isn't one of them. :] kbyes;; OLiViA

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: x_dobby
Date: 09/05/07 19:35
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

lovely. really nice. most S/R fics are just pathetic, and this isn't one of them. :] kbyes;; OLiViA

Reviewer: Everlasting
Date: 07/27/07 15:14
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

I loved this! it was so well-written and Sirius and Remus were both really in-character. Great job, and I love how it's in present-tense.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Writing in present tense seems to have become 'my thing.' I'd say the majority of my stories are written that way....

Reviewer: WinterDragon
Date: 05/21/07 12:15
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

:deep breath: ok, one, two, three...KAWAI!!!! ('cute' in Japanese if you don't know) THAT WAS SOOOOO ADORABLE!!! I loved it ^_^ Remus/Sirius, who could go wrong with a pairing like that? They're just sooo cute together, and this fic, like so many others I've read, proves it ^_^ Very well written, and I congratulate you on a job well done with some cookies :leaves a basketful for you to have later: Cheers ^_^
~Winter

Author's Response:
*gobbles cookies*

I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much!

Reviewer: WinterDragon
Date: 05/21/07 12:11
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

:deep breath: ok, one, two, three...KAWAI!!!! ('cute' in Japanese if you don't know) THAT WAS SOOOOO ADORABLE!!! I loved it ^_^ Remus/Sirius, who could go wrong with a pairing like that? They're just sooo cute together, and this fic, like so many others I've read, proves it ^_^ Very well written, and I congratulate you on a job well done with some cookies :leaves a basketful for you to have later: Cheers ^_^
~Winter

Reviewer: jomarch
Date: 03/25/07 15:40
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

a fan of the princess bride?

:D

cute story :D

Author's Response:
Just a bit :-P

Thanks!

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 03/24/07 16:54
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

Very nice. The dog bit especially. And now I am wondering what it is with James and Peter...not that you will write that. Still, I am allowed ot wonder if they each wanted to go home for Christmas, or if they wanted to let Remus and Sirius have this holiday together, alone. And what each of them did on their holiday, as I am sure it was not anything like this. There is a point past which I just can't willingly suspend disbelief.

Umm..is there a formatting error, or am I missing something?

Author's Response:
Darn you. Now I want to go write James and Peter during Christmas. I give myself till...April 5th and if it's still bugging me I will write it for you and what comes after will be on your head.

Formatting and it's fixed now *grrargh

Reviewer: Fading
Date: 03/24/07 14:51
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

Please let this not be a one-shot. I want it to go on. I was a bit confused when it switched to all italics--was that on purpose, or did you forget to [/i] it?

Author's Response: There's another chapter. I don't know why this got marked completed. Seems to have been a bit of trouble with this and I don't know why. It'll be in Q soon!

Reviewer: MaraudersWolf
Date: 03/24/07 12:48
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

Oh, this hit the sweet spot in me! I love it! Great work, Slian! Masterful & powerful!

I don't know which piece I like more . . . the "life is pain" thing, the snowflake-catching, Sirius-as-Padfoot or the "childlike enthusiam" line - tough decisions.

I just know I love it all!



Author's Response: Remus being childlike is my personal favorite in this chapter of the duo (the second of which should be up...soon?) *loves*

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 03/23/07 21:57
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

That was really sweet and cute! Though I think you may have had a problem with the italics. I liked Sirius's description of Remus as innocent...as usual, you write them both so well!
Oh, and I loved the Princess Bride quote. ;) One of the best lines in the movie!

Author's Response:
I did have a problem with them, but the tag is closed and fixed now.

Isn't it just?

Reviewer: _Ivy_
Date: 03/23/07 16:19
Chapter: Snowballs and Snogging

Aww, this is so very sweet! Er, but was it intentional that half of this became italicized? Or am I just missing something?

I love your characterization of Remus and Sirius. They're just so... excellent. You show their faults as well as their strengths. This is just so sweet. Great job!!!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much!

The italicization (?) was a mistake and is now corrected. Thanks for pointing it out!

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