Reviewer: The Weasley Triplet
Date: 03/13/07 10:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

AN ORANGE THONG?!?!?! LOOOOL!!!!! I was laughing my head off and splitting my sides at this.

The Weasley twins could DEFINITELY make a fortune with that spell.

this is great. excellent job.

Author's Response: Heh, thanks very much. I kind of like the idea of a Weasley prank getting turned on the ultimate jokesters, lol.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 03/12/07 23:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a really cute fic but I would love to read Harry's speech. Are you planning on a sequel?=Sammy

Author's Response: Heh, none planned at the moment, but that is a great idea for a sequel. Thanks!

Reviewer: BloodFetish
Date: 03/12/07 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hey Hey Hey! Great story!

Author's Response: THanks!

Reviewer: writersdd
Date: 03/12/07 9:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Excellent! You definitely caught Tonks' cheekiness. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun writing Tonks for this one.

Reviewer: Vivvie
Date: 03/11/07 15:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

:D I liked this story! Tee-hee, Tonks is so mean.

Author's Response: Grin. I'm glad you liked it. I enjoyed writing Tonks during this one.

Reviewer: ThePotterLover
Date: 03/11/07 12:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice story! Love the underwear thing! xD Good job!

Author's Response: Heh, thanks!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 03/11/07 8:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

awww I love it! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! Epspecially what Harry imagined Tonks wore. That would be a very disturbing/hilarious to be in Harry's place.

Author's Response: Hee, thanks! Don't you think Tonks would be as wild with her intimate things as she is with everything else? Heh, I love Tonks.

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 03/11/07 6:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Brilliant! I can't stop laughing. Imagine the look on Harry's face. HAHAHA!!!

Author's Response: Hee. Thanks much. "Red is good." Poor boy ;)

Reviewer: Phoenix156
Date: 03/11/07 0:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my! I was laughing so hard while reading this! I love Fred & George's undergarments lol... Little bit of fluff at the end too, nice touch ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I love Fred and George.

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 03/10/07 21:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

I have one word that I have for you... WOW!! That was so awesome!! I wasn't sure if he was seeing or thinking what Harry was actully seeing. Like the fact that he saw Tonks in a thong, but then Ginny said it was his imagination. But everything was really funny. It tickled my fanciness, and excited my soul. (That was one of my dad's awesome sayings.) Anyway: keep on writing!!

Ok... I can definitly say that this is totally awesome. But I should tell you that you should change it. It is more about the undies than it is the acceptance speech. Maybe you should change the title to something less serious and more about the plot. I'm REALLY sorry I'm critisizing. It was a GREAT fanfic.

Author's Response: Heh - thanks, to both of you. Lily, it was all in Harry's imagination - but I certainly imagine Tonks's underthings to be as wild as she is (if I take a minute to think of her underthings, that is!) - so I certainly think an 18-year old boy's imagination might stray ;) Susan - yes, it does have more to do with the underthings, but imagining a crowd in them is actually a common trick to get through public speaking.

Reviewer: tar
Date: 03/10/07 19:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

very good! i realy injoyed tonk's undies by the way that was realy cool

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: sgwilliamson
Date: 03/10/07 19:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

I have read every one of your stories and I think they are all imaginative, realistic, and incredibly wonderful. Great work!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks very much! I had fun with this one - Tonks in particular.

Reviewer: Aikio
Date: 03/10/07 18:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was just blo*dy brilliant!!!
Not really a surprise, since you wrote it.. :P

Just a question, but this wasn't a one-shot was it?

And I'm on your mailing list and was wondering what story you are talking about in the "CoE update - SPOILERS" mail.. I can't seem to find the name on any of the mails I've recieved (been getting these mails for som while now...)


Author's Response: Hi! Glad you enjoyed this - and that your on the mailing list. Speak up a little!! CoE stands for Coven of Echoes on PhoenixSong. It's very good, and several of us are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Lav_Lav
Date: 03/10/07 17:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

OMG, that was super hilarious! :) loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: abbycadabra
Date: 03/10/07 15:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

awww. lol. cute story.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: potterweaslygranger
Date: 03/10/07 15:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

Remember me? It's ok if you don't. Melinda is back! Now it's time for a sequel to HPSH! great story, though it's not my favorite from you. Still 9/10

Author's Response: Heh, thanks, I know - nothing blows up so it doesn't seem like me, but I really enjoyed this piece.

Reviewer: Frenchfan
Date: 03/10/07 12:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

Absolutely delightful as usual !
Please don't ever stop doing this, you're so good at it !

Author's Response: Oh, thanks much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: nalaniekeala
Date: 03/10/07 11:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

what a cute story! i love the red knickers. ;)

Author's Response: Heh, thanks - so did Harry!

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 03/10/07 11:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great story. Funny and with a nice twist. I wonder if Harry would has always pictured Tonks that way. A little much, but very well and tastefully written. Great job. As always

Author's Response: Heh - I think Tonks' underthings would be just as over-the-top as her overthings, lol. Harry and Ron are still teenage boys - and thier imaginations do tend to wander even if they'd never act on it.

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 03/10/07 11:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

"a load of mating dragonís dung..." The whole story is great, this phrase really made me laugh!
Are you going to continue it? Would be loads of fun!
Thanks a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks! I wrote this for a challenge on Phoenix Song. While I think it stands on its own okay, it only reinforces my love for writing about Harry!

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