Reviewer: PheonixFlamesForever
Date: 01/13/08 8:13
Chapter: One-shot

Hi!
I really enjoyed this story, I could only notice a couple of errors namely, a school of Witchcraft and Wizardry and also 'She heard she father call out,' it would be 'She heard her father call out' I'm sure they are just silly little typos though!

I really like how you've shown how Petunia feels, without coming from 1st person. It does make you feel for poor Tuni! Also the way you have included snippets of canon in with it - the turning teacups into rats for example. I think you've stayed very IC for both Lily and Petunia, and I'm really glad I read this story :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Typos are always innoying so thanks for pointing them out. Glad you thought the characters were close, since my tale ended up being as far from the truth as humanly possible...

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 03/24/07 20:46
Chapter: One-shot

Wow! I really like how you protray Petunia. I love that you show how she is feeling and all! ~MJ

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I enjoyed looking at feelings of not as well liked characters, and discovering why they do what the do. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Keepbelieving___
Date: 03/16/07 15:50
Chapter: One-shot

I really liked that it was from the point of Petunia. It's helps you to feel slightly more sympathetic twords Petunia. However, she's still a bag. I think It's was nicley written, the ending was slightly weak,But very good job!

Bravo,

Lindsay

Author's Response: Thanks for review. I enjoy taking the not so loved characters and looking at them in a different light. Ya and the ending did give me a little trouble. Thanks again!

Reviewer: BeachBabe
Date: 03/12/07 17:17
Chapter: One-shot

That was a very good perception on how Petunia must have felt. I would love it if you would continue the story.

Author's Response: To be honest I don't where I would be able to take the story. We really don't know alot about Petunia. But if you really want to read more, I did write a poem on Petunia's feelings after Lily died called "My Sister Lily." Thanks a bunch for reviewing!

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