Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 06/01/07 9:27
Chapter: The Killing Curse
Ahhh...for a moment I actually thought you were going to kill Severus! Then again, maybe you still are. O.O Anyway, I think this was probably my favorite chapter yet. It was so...powerful. I mean, love really does conquer all, even despite whatever barriers (like age) may come up. And that's really just wonderful that you were able to do that with this story! Mkay, I'm rambling. In conclusion, another amazing chapter, great job! :D
Author's Response: Oh, I don't mind the rambling the least bit... ;-) No, really, thanks for the review. This one was the hardest chapter to write (well, besides "Acceptance"), I thought I'd never get it done right - so I'm really glad folks liked it.
Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 05/29/07 19:41
Chapter: Acceptance
*jumps* Yay! They're together? But will it last...? >.> Still a great chapter, though. :)
Author's Response: You'll see ;-)
Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 05/29/07 9:24
Chapter: Denial
It's so funny how Severus and Minerva are dealing with their feelings here, although I have no problem seeing either of them acting like they had a disease. ;) I also found the parts with Augusta Longbottom funny, and both of them acting like little school girls again. Teehee.
Author's Response: Thank you again... Yeah, I like Augusta, too. I know it's not canon, only a few little hints there that McG and Augusta might know each other, but I can so see them get on fabulously as friends...
Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 05/27/07 14:56
Chapter: A Report on War and Love
Ah! Severus said he loved her directly this time! I didn't expect that at all. But that's good. ;) So, another lovely chapter, great work!
Author's Response: Thanks again! Wow, it's great to get those chapter-by-chapter comments - of course that doesn't mean I expect you to review every single chapter ;.) But it's nice to get detailed feedback. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I do hope you'll like the rest of the fic.
Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 05/22/07 9:19
Chapter: Fighting Passion
Oooh, she told him how she felt. Poor Minerva. Severus remained cryptic as ever in his reply, and I liked that; you still manage to keep them both very much in character. Great job. :D
Author's Response: Thank you, keeping them (remotely) in character was the big task I set meself... Glad you liked this chapter, it's one of my favorites, too. Can't wait to see how you will like the rest...
Author's Response: Thank you, keeping them (remotely) in character was the big task I set meself... Glad you liked this chapter, it's one of my favorites, too. Can't wait to see how you will like the rest...
Reviewer: Celia Rox
Date: 05/16/07 8:48
Chapter: Through the Eyes of the Others
Excellent story, really well done!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you liked it!
Reviewer: AnneLea
Date: 05/09/07 20:56
Chapter: Through the Eyes of the Others
Woah. Moody could have gon off really bad.
Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you for leaving me those reviews, I'm glad you liked my little fic!
Reviewer: AnneLea
Date: 05/09/07 20:21
Chapter: Memories
One word to explain how this chapter makes me feel:
BRAVO!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: BrokenandLost
Date: 05/09/07 15:48
Chapter: Through the Eyes of the Others
This is very good. Not many people could pull off a Snape/Minerva story. I loved the ending. I'd love to see another story like this. I feel sorry for Moody. Foor guy actually cared about someone and he got his heart broken. Overall your story was awesome and full of twists and turns. (I seriously hated you for not saying anything about Snape dieing or living in the last chapter) You've got talent.
Author's Response: Oh, but I couldn't have told you about him living or dying, that would have spoiled all the fun of writing such cliffhangers ;-)
Thank you for your review. It's wonderful to see that I succeeded in making Severus/Minerva believable and I loved working in those little twists. Glad you liked it. And yeah, poor Moody... I'll have to write a happy-Moody fic some day as a compensation.
Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 05/07/07 14:42
Chapter: Through the Eyes of the Others
Thank you for sharing your talent - The fic kept me on the edge of my seat, and the originality truly stood out. Plus it fanned my Snape crush!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed my story. And if it did increase a Snape crush a bit.. oh well... don't we all love him (and I'm a guy!) ;-)
Reviewer: patelnotpatil
Date: 05/06/07 20:12
Chapter: Through the Eyes of the Others
Aw! It's over! I feel bad for Mad-Eye though! Poor guy...ah, well, he'll get over it, right?
But yay! They're openly together! And people are ok with it, sort of...
Sequel? Maybe? Just to show like, public opinions of the Snape/McGonagall romance. And I want to see Snape propose and the wedding and everything! Hehehe...
Author's Response: Poor Moody, I know - I was a bit mean to him. But he's a tough one, he'll get over it I guess. And about the sequel thing: well, I've said no before because all I have in mind is just what you suggested - a series of vignettes showing other folks' opinions on that relationship, and how they react when they find out by and by... but it does IMHO not (yet?) qualify for a real story wih a plot and all. I'll think about it, I promise. After all it's quite flattering that quite some readers have asked for a sequel (*blush*)
Reviewer: timestep
Date: 05/03/07 8:25
Chapter: Through the Eyes of the Others
You know, I have no problem believing in this pairing. I know I've not reviewed alot, but I have enjoyed the story.
Part way through, I started to wonder about it, but I stuck with it. I'm so glad I did.
I loved the scene from the Astronomy tower at the end. You handled Harry and Snape beautifully later. I can so see Harry, as he matures, taking the action of fessing up.
Poor Moody (but I just can't see Minerva taking to him - but I truely believe him being taken with her.)
Author's Response: Thank you; I am glad that you stuck with the fic and did like it in the end - actually I love those reviews most because it shows that you're quite a critical reader.
Thanks for commenting on that scene at the end - I guess Harry is truly grown up now, so i wanted him to do something responsible and have him stand up for what he's done. And about Moody... I know there's not much in JKR's books, but for some reason I always believed old Mad-Eye to fancy Minerva a bit, so it was easy to work that into my fic... Anyway, thanks again for reviewing!
Reviewer: Setres
Date: 05/02/07 21:51
Chapter: Through the Eyes of the Others
right on... I've always liked Snape, strangely...
Author's Response: Thank you - what's so strange about liking Snape ;-)
Reviewer: larrybob
Date: 05/02/07 18:12
Chapter: Through the Eyes of the Others
Yeah! Squel?
Author's Response: Thanks! Sequel - no, don't think so (see my response to oldwitch53). But I'm glad you liked my fic.
Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 05/02/07 18:08
Chapter: Through the Eyes of the Others
That was beautiful!! I love this. Great Job!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: oldwitch53
Date: 05/02/07 14:39
Chapter: Through the Eyes of the Others
awwwww, if I wasn't sitting here at work, I'd be crying right now. I love the story, the tone of it and how you kept them all in character. I"m just sorry it's over.......can we spell s e q u e l ?
Author's Response: That is totally sweet, thank you so much. I just love it when I can convince others of my One True Pairing ;-)
About a sequel. Hm. Honestly, I'd say no, or maybe no for a long time. First of all I have three more fics in the process of re-writing and getting them done for publishing. And then... while I do know exactly what mood and athmosphere I'd like to create in a sequel to 'Minerva and Half-Blood Prince', I am still somewhat at a loss as where to go plotwise. Basically what I have so far is a couple of scenes showing how others react to that pairing and how they will handle those reactions, but I don't deem them worthy for publishing. But we'll see. You're actually the sixth person asking for a sequel, so I might give it some thought.
Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 05/01/07 18:51
Chapter: Going Too Far
This is a really interesting story so far, and surprisingly believable. You've managed to keep both Severus and Minerva very in character, and the plot is intriguing.
I have one nit-pick for this chapter, and that is that you typed Slazar Slytherin, instead of Salazar Slytherin. Other than that, great job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for leaving me this wonderful review! That is just the thing I wanted to hear... my goal was to keep them both in character as much as possible. Thank you also for pointing out that typo; I will see to chaningin that - it's just the thing that is not supposed to happen with 4 betas, but I guess sometimes we all do a sloppy job. Hope you'll like the rest of my fic as well.
Reviewer: ozexchanger
Date: 05/01/07 0:28
Chapter: Memories
The site doesn't seem to like me today. I somehow posted my review twice - once for "A snake's tale" for which it wasn't meant and now I can't delete it. The review is for "Memories" only of course!
Author's Response: That's alright.. you can see that I had similar problems with posting my response :-)
Reviewer: ozexchanger
Date: 05/01/07 0:22
Chapter: Memories
First of all congratulations for another excellent chapter! The story is getting sweeter by the day, alas you have warned before that life is bittersweet and I dread what might be coming up ...
I have a certain suspicion as well and I have re-read some of the earlier chapters looking for affirmation of my theory. I guess one could see a hint in "The love life of witches" if one wanted to and I wonder whether some other small things are just random or will indeed turn out to have a deeper meaning. Yet I might be completely off the mark with my inkling and therefore I'm not going to articulate it here.
I am also surprised that no one heard Voldemort's rather drastic remark about Minerva's and Severus' relationship and that no one has given any thought to the fact that Harry was saved from the Avada Kedavra by his mother's love and that in light of Severus' fierce protectiveness Minerva might have been safed by more than incantations and wandwaving as well.
I'm looking forward to the last chapter!
Author's Response: and thanks again... there seems to be a problem with reviews and response texts showing up twice or more times..
Reviewer: ozexchanger
Date: 05/01/07 0:21
Chapter: A Snake's Tale
First of all congratulations for another excellent chapter! The story is getting sweeter by the day, alas you have warned before that life is bittersweet and I dread what might coming up ...
I have a certain suspicion as well and I have re-read some of the earlier chapters looking for affirmation of my theory. I guess one could see a hint in "The love life of witches" if one wanted to and I wonder whether some other small things are just random or will indeed turn out to have a deeper meaning. Yet I might be completely off the mark with my inkling and therefore I'm not going to articulate it here.
I am also surprised that no one heard Voldemort's rather drastic remark about Minerva's and Severus' relationship and that no one has given any thought to the fact that Harry was saved from the Avada Kedavra by his mother's love and that in light of Severus' fierce protectiveness Minerva might have been safed by more than incantations and wandwaving as well.
Author's Response: Wow, an excellent catch with the fact that Harry was saved by love, so the same should apply to Minerva! My theory on the matter is that althogh LV did find a way to block the AK and that way is the one Severus used, that love he felt did play an important part, too. It is the reason why could not only shield her against the AK, but also against other spells (that stunner) and why Minerva's scar is smaller than Harrys - she had even better protection because in her case it was both the counter-spell and the love.
About LV's remark.. yes, it's amazing what folks don't understand even if it is right in front of their eyes. But I think that is quite natural. In fact I know a number of films where spies - or dirty little traitors, depending on from what side you regard them - are referred to as whores etc. You know, the ones who do the dirty work and basically sell themselves for something they like to call a greater cause. Spying isn't all glorious James Bond- like action, it also is a thing of betrayal... And if you don't suspect a romance going on, "whore" is an insult that might easily be chosen in a situation like that. It is after all a term that will hurt quite a bit, especially if it's applied to a man.
You must tell me some time what your suspicions were for the last chapter, I am very curious. As for the bitter-sweet things to happen - part of what I was refering to back then was the thing about Albus, that he did love Minerva and that in a way their whole friendship is a big might-have-been issue. You'lll see how she feels about that now that she has learned the truth. And you are right, I have left a hint to those feelings already, in fact she has already answered the question in an earlier chapter. Another thing that you might keep in mind is that the whole bitter-sweet life aspect does not only apply to Minerva and Severus. There is one other loose end I need to tie up in the last chapter... But that's enough info for now ;-) And I did list the fic in the romance cathegory after all.Wow, an excellent catch with the fact that Harry was saved by love, so the same should apply to Minerva! My theory on the matter is that althogh LV did find a way to block the AK and that way is the one Severus used, that love he felt did play an important part, too. It is the reason why could not only shield her against the AK, but also against other spells (that stunner) and why Minerva's scar is smaller than Harrys - she had even better protection because in her case it was both the counter-spell and the love.
About LV's remark.. yes, it's amazing what folks don't understand even if it is right in front of their eyes. But I think that is quite natural. In fact I know a number of films where spies - or dirty little traitors, depending on from what side you regard them - are referred to as whores etc. You know, the ones who do the dirty work and basically sell themselves for something they like to call a greater cause. Spying isn't all glorious James Bond- like action, it also is a thing of betrayal... And if you don't suspect a romance going on, "whore" is an insult that might easily be chosen in a situation like that. It is after all a term that will hurt quite a bit, especially if it's applied to a man.
You must tell me some time what your suspicions were for the last chapter, I am very curious. As for the bitter-sweet things to happen - part of what I was refering to back then was the thing about Albus, that he did love Minerva and that in a way their whole friendship is a big might-have-been issue. You'lll see how she feels about that now that she has learned the truth. And you are right, I have left a hint to those feelings already, in fact she has already answered the question in an earlier chapter. Another thing that you might keep in mind is that the whole bitter-sweet life aspect does not only apply to Minerva and Severus. There is one other loose end I need to tie up in the last chapter... But that's enough info for now ;-) And I did list the fic in the romance cathegory after all. Wow, an excellent catch with the fact that Harry was saved by love, so the same should apply to Minerva! My theory on the matter is that althogh LV did find a way to block the AK and that way is the one Severus used, that love he felt did play an important part, too. It is the reason why could not only shield her against the AK, but also against other spells (that stunner) and why Minerva's scar is smaller than Harrys - she had even better protection because in her case it was both the counter-spell and the love.
About LV's remark.. yes, it's amazing what folks don't understand even if it is right in front of their eyes. But I think that is quite natural. In fact I know a number of films where spies - or dirty little traitors, depending on from what side you regard them - are referred to as whores etc. You know, the ones who do the dirty work and basically sell themselves for something they like to call a greater cause. Spying isn't all glorious James Bond- like action, it also is a thing of betrayal... And if you don't suspect a romance going on, "whore" is an insult that might easily be chosen in a situation like that. It is after all a term that will hurt quite a bit, especially if it's applied to a man.
You must tell me some time what your suspicions were for the last chapter, I am very curious. As for the bitter-sweet things to happen - part of what I was refering to back then was the thing about Albus, that he did love Minerva and that in a way their whole friendship is a big might-have-been issue. You'lll see how she feels about that now that she has learned the truth. And you are right, I have left a hint to those feelings already, in fact she has already answered the question in an earlier chapter. Another thing that you might keep in mind is that the whole bitter-sweet life aspect does not only apply to Minerva and Severus. There is one other loose end I need to tie up in the last chapter... But that's enough info for now ;-) And I did list the fic in the romance cathegory after all.
Thank you for leaving me such a detailed review! I do so love these.
Author's Response: sorry.. I copy-and-pasted that response together because I kept trying and every time I tried posting it I was kicked off-line. Now it shows up twice in parts... arrgh. Well, you will understand. Thanks for reviewing is my main message ;-)