Reviews For Captivated
Reviewer: GinnyPottterGranger
Date: 04/28/11 18:47
Chapter: Captivated

luv it! i wish you would write another chapter

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 04/02/08 16:22
Chapter: Captivated

This was so brilliantly written. It was quite upsetting but I always think the best stories make you feel, be it fear or happiness or regret or just make you feel like laughing forever, just as long as they make you feel something. I can't stand reading stories that have no emotion. Anyway, this was excellent, but i'd love to know more about the situation. What did Malfoy know, and how? Was Ron alright? Was that the end of the death eaters? Did Harry ever find peace without Ginny? Guess i'll have to make all the answers up myself.

Author's Response: Why thank you! And yes, you're quite right - those questions are for yourself to answer ;)

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 06/29/07 14:11
Chapter: Captivated

well that was diferanta i likedit though why didnt harry coome sooner? and is ron still alive? you left that part out.

Author's Response: In this particular story I left a lot to the reader's imagination. So it's all up to you, I'm afraid =) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: travelgirl
Date: 03/19/07 13:19
Chapter: Captivated

Wow. An ending almost happy, yet hanging with questionis. How did Draco know? How did Harry figure out where she is? And most importantly, is Ron alive? Is Harry hugging because Ron is dead or because she is like his sister and best friend?

Wow. You are good. Really good.

Author's Response: Teehee... I love to leave readers with questions (I'm evil like that). I'm only going to answer the first one, though - while Ron and Hermione thought Harry was working alone, he actually had Draco on his side, and that's why he wouldn't risk letting them in. As for the other questions... well, I know what it is in my mind, but I'm going to let you decide the ending for youself. =) It's more fun that way. [/rant] Anyway, I'm very pleased you liked reading this, and that you took the time to leave such a nice review! Thank you so much! <3

Reviewer: superstitious
Date: 03/17/07 3:37
Chapter: Captivated

ohhh... so cool, i was sad wen draco died. please keep on writing more

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I managed to move at least someone =P I probably won't be updating this story any time soon, but I do have another fic up and a couple more on the way if you'd like to read them. Thank you for the nice review!

Reviewer: gryffindorgirl9388
Date: 03/16/07 21:30
Chapter: Captivated

this was amazing! i loved how you had draco become the good guy. and your writing is great.

Author's Response: Thank you for the very kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this, and that you took the time to review! =)

Reviewer: NJGirl
Date: 03/16/07 20:22
Chapter: Captivated

wow! that was really good. why don't you continue it?

Author's Response: *deja-vu-moment*

Reviewer: NJGirl
Date: 03/16/07 20:11
Chapter: Captivated

wow! that was really good. why don't you continue it?

Author's Response: Well, she was rescued, wasn't she? If I continued, the story would be something different, and the idea for this was only this part. But I've been having some ideas lately, so maybe sometime in the future! =) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me! <3

Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk
Date: 03/16/07 19:44
Chapter: Captivated

Ooh! Jennifer! This is wonderful! Please update soon; I want to find out what happens!

But why was Harry there? And how did Malfoy know what was going on? I'm confused.

This is a good start, and I can't wait to read more!


Author's Response: Hi Hanni! *waves* This was only meant to be a one-shot, but you never know, a plot-bunny might strike and I'll continue with it. But for now... I'll leave it up to the readers to answer those questions for themselves =D It's more fun to make up your own. I'm happy you liked it, Hanni, and glad that you took the time to review! *huggles*

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 03/16/07 19:43
Chapter: Captivated

Wow. I really wish that wasn't a one-shot. It was sooo good. Of course, if it weren't a one-shot, I would have had Draco miraculously come back to life but...That was one awesome cliffhanger, right there. Now I'm going to be imagining what could have happened next the rest of the day. :-)

Author's Response: That's the nice thing about one-shots and cliff-hangers - you're free to imagine your own ending, if you like =) Thank you so much for your kind words! You've just made my day =)

Reviewer: insanitea
Date: 03/16/07 19:00
Chapter: Captivated

wow.. that was really interesting. i know this is the least of everything, but i think you never wrote hermione's name, which is a more creative twist. the ending took me by surprise, as i'm sure you had wanted.. this is a one-shot, right? if so, that ending made for one hell of a one-shot! (er, i can say hell right? :D ) i liked this one.

Author's Response: I'm thrilled you liked it! I never meant to not write out her name, I just started out that way and then kind of liked the idea of the readers having to guess and find out who everyone is. Yes, it is meant as a one-shot, thank you for the praise! =P Thanks for stopping by and for leaving such a nice review!

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