Good, I think it was very insightfull to his feelings
It was a pretty good poem. Sad though.. Oh i feel really sorry for Remus now.. He must feel horrible. anyway i really liked it, Keep up writing the poetry (or story fics whatever you like)
Some really nice bits - I think it showed Harry's pain well.
That was good. It really makes you think about Lupin, and the pain he has to go through.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!