Reviews For A Tear in Time
Reviewer: NotePad
Date: 12/23/07 16:52
Chapter: The Platform

PLEASE write more!
I have to find out what happens! Really well written, you've got the characters just right. :)

I can't believe Harry died though... can't you make him suddenly come back to life? I don't care how, Ron can do CPR, he has to stay alive though! FOR GINNY!
Sorry. I'm getting emotional. :)

Please write more ASAP!
Thankyouu. :)

Reviewer: NotePad
Date: 12/23/07 16:51
Chapter: The Platform

PLEASE write more!
I have to find out what happens! Really well written, you've got the characters just right. :)

I can't believe Harry died though... can't you make him suddenly come back to life? I don't care how, Ron can do CPR, he has to stay alive though! FOR GINNY!
Sorry. I'm getting emotional. :)

Please write more ASAP!
Thankyouu. :)

Reviewer: NotePad
Date: 12/23/07 16:43
Chapter: The Graveyard

Well you must be a pretty amazing writer if this is your first fan fiction. :o
It's really good!

Has Harry died? Ohnoes, I hope he hasn't. :)

Well done! (Y)

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/10/07 13:13
Chapter: The Platform

I love this fic, hope the next chapters up soon. I know Harry dying in the first chapter wasn't well recieved, but at least he took Voldemort with him and that is what he set out to do. I'm now terrified about what Bellatrix will do, I hope her plan fails eventually, even if it looks like she'll succeed. I wonder if she'll try and kill Lily or James, or both, or just stop them getting together. I was a bit confused with the time orb going back thirty years, surely if Harry was 19 and was born in 1980 it had to take her back to 1969 or 1970. Not that it matters really, because it's a great idea and I can't wait to read the next bit.

Reviewer: 001anonymous
Date: 08/14/07 8:43
Chapter: The Platform

I like this story! You've got the characterizations pretty well! Hope to hear more from this! ;-)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 07/12/07 18:34
Chapter: The Platform

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 05/28/07 9:52
Chapter: The Platform

I'm like that too! But this story is sssooooooooooooooooo worth the wait. you went from good to wow-wowie-wowza

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 05/28/07 9:46
Chapter: The Graveyard

to bad harry died, but this is good so far. and abit rough. try a beta! i'm new 2 but betas really help

Reviewer: Rikku
Date: 05/01/07 9:38
Chapter: The Platform

I think this is very good written. One thing though; Remus couldn't have been muggle born, because the reason he's a werewolf is because his father refused to join the death eaters and Fenrir Greyback therefore bit him.. but otherwise it's great! keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Ah I love it when people point those things out. Because I tend to kiss that. I go back to change that to half-blood. Thank you! :)

Author's Response: **miss, not kiss. Wow. That was a big typo.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 04/30/07 17:02
Chapter: The Graveyard

good story!!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 04/30/07 16:02
Chapter: The Graveyard

this is great so far... the life an times of a death eater! good job on your first fic... check out MINE as well!

Reviewer: BookWorm77
Date: 04/06/07 9:14
Chapter: The Graveyard

Oh the suspense! This may be one of the most well written fanfics, ummmmm....... EVER! Keep typing 'cause I can't wait for the rest of this fic!

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you! I'm currently working on getting the next chapter in, sadly, it's been rejected twice. With a long wait time each time... :(

Reviewer: truelight
Date: 04/03/07 22:10
Chapter: The Graveyard

let's hope the she do very bad in this mision.

Reviewer: Padfoot101
Date: 03/14/07 20:29
Chapter: The Graveyard

nice twist. this is a completely original story. just a word of advice: sometimes you write the way yoda would speak. (example- "Down the stairs and out the door, she managed to creep.") otherwise i really liked it.

Author's Response: Hmmm. Well that's different. Thanks for that comment, I'll have to be more careful about that... Heh. I never even realized I did that.

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 03/13/07 12:58
Chapter: The Graveyard

Oh god, this does seem interesting. I'm really interested to see how James and Lily slip into this as well.

Reviewer: Ashes_to_Ashes
Date: 03/13/07 12:50
Chapter: The Graveyard

it was good, but i just don't get why it's under Lily/James.....the whole time i was waiting for one them to pop up, but they didn't. Was this a mistake?

Author's Response: No, it was not a mistake. Bella traveled to the past. From the next chapter on it's all about Lily and James. This chapter was just for background.

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