Reviews For Broken Souls
Reviewer: Dory Notell
Date: 07/13/07 21:02
Chapter: Confrontations.

this is getting very interesting, keep on writing

Author's Response: Will do

Author's Response: Will do

Reviewer: Dory Notell
Date: 07/13/07 20:51
Chapter: Fight or Flee

well its certainly heating up

Author's Response: I'm glad U think so

Reviewer: Dory Notell
Date: 07/12/07 14:41
Chapter: The Real World

I think it could be more interesting but I'm not complaining to much.

Reviewer: Dory Notell
Date: 07/11/07 20:23
Chapter: Just the Two of Us?

ooooooooohhhhhhhhh nice beginning

Author's Response: Thanx

Reviewer: grawp22
Date: 07/11/07 19:29
Chapter: Confrontations.

really depressing dramatization, but pretty well written.

Author's Response: Hopefully it's not 2 depressing!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 07/08/07 18:52
Chapter: Confrontations.

OMS!!! I just realised that I had forgotten to add this to my favs list, and alas became three or so chapters behind on the amazing story.

This is a very well-written story. I loved how you've written this little plot. It is so different and exciting. You've only made me cry about five times.

The parts where you mention how Harry would view/feel about the situation in the weeks/months to come are wonderful. They give the story a whole new aspect of greatness.

In the last chapter: I loved the way you wrote Harry and Ginny's fight. It was so realistic.

The letter she left was heart-breaking. I feel so bad for Harry. AND I wanted to grab George and beat him upside the head for saying those horrible things about Ginny and what Harry said to her, when it was never like that.

This last cliffhanger is horridly evil...But oh so brilliant and wonderful. I'm really curious to see who told her those things. And where she is, and whether or not she is still with-child. I desperately hope she didn't chose to have an abortion or something. That would kill Harry.

Poor poor Harry, and Ginny. Please update soon. This is going to have my thoughts captured for some time.

This is an amazing story. You have a real talent.

~Haylee

Author's Response: Well, thanx 4 Ur wonderful long review! I hope some of Ur questions will B answered in chapter 7, but U may have longer 2 wait 4 other answers. Keep an eye out 4 the next chapter - hopefully it'll B validated B4 DH!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 07/08/07 18:09
Chapter: Confrontations.

OMS!!! I just realised that I had forgotten to add this to my favs list, and alas became three or so chapters behind on the amazing story.

This is a very well-written story. I loved how you've written this little plot. It is so different and exciting. You've only made me cry about five times.

The parts where you mention how Harry would view/feel about the situation in the weeks/months to come are wonderful. They give the story a whole new aspect of greatness.

In the last chapter: I loved the way you wrote Harry and Ginny's fight. It was so realistic.

The letter she left was heart-breaking. I feel so bad for Harry. AND I wanted to grab George and beat him upside the head for saying those horrible things about Ginny and what Harry said to her, when it was never like that.

This last cliffhanger is horridly evil...But oh so brilliant and wonderful. I'm really curious to see who told her those things. And where she is, and whether or not she is still with-child. I desperately hope she didn't chose to have an abortion or something. That would kill Harry.

Poor poor Harry, and Ginny. Please update soon. This is going to have my thoughts captured for some time.

This is an amazing story. You have a real talent.

~Haylee

Reviewer: brittany18baby
Date: 07/04/07 17:07
Chapter: Confrontations.

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope they find Ginny and who fed George that false information. I enjoyed George's reaction. haha

Author's Response: Answers are comming... Eventually. In the meanwhile, I'm just about 2 add chapter 7 2 the queue! Just so U no - I'm not done with plot twists just yet.

Reviewer: gred and feorge
Date: 07/04/07 16:09
Chapter: Just the Two of Us?

one of the gr8 things about reviewing ur story is that u reply. not most authors do this, it feels gud to know that someone has actually read ur review, rather than adding "please review" somewhere on the page.
no offence to anyone who doesn't reply to reviews, this is just my opinion. : )

Author's Response: I feel that as well - that's why I reply! Getting positive reviews really increases my confidence in my story and I think it's only right that my reviewers know their 4ts R apreciated.

Reviewer: blue eyed dragon
Date: 07/02/07 5:28
Chapter: Confrontations.

This story is very unique. I can never remember reading one like it.

Who said it, who said it? A Healer? Lupin? One of the minstry guys. That makes sense I guess. Updating soon would be fantastic, but I can wait *bites fingernails* sure I can *starts eating hands*

Author's Response: I'm going to TRY to get the next chapter up B4 the queue closes 4 DH, but I can't promise Nything, especially as it will probably B quite long with every1 trying to beat the downtime. Thanx 4 reviewing!

Reviewer: gred and feorge
Date: 06/30/07 7:38
Chapter: Confrontations.

errrm........wow?
no wonder ginny ran away.
but who was pretending 2 b harry? only lupin knws abt the baby apart 4m harry.
i hope harry gets 2 c the birth, he's already missed so much. thank goodness george n hermione r recovering.

Author's Response: Thanx 4 reviewing

Reviewer: gred and feorge
Date: 06/30/07 7:36
Chapter: Confrontations.

errrm........wow?
no wonder ginny ran away.
but who was pretending 2 b harry? only lupin knws abt the beby apart 4m harry.
i hope harry gets 2 c the birth, he's already missed so much. thank goodness george n hermione r recovering.

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 06/29/07 4:06
Chapter: Confrontations.

oh no - but how? polyjuice potion? oh poor,poor,poor ginny
I love this story but i hate it (if that makes sense) its just soo sad and makes me want to cry.

Author's Response: U'll just have 2 wait and see

Reviewer: Time Shifter
Date: 06/28/07 23:31
Chapter: Confrontations.

Oh man, that's absolutely terrible. Will Harry and Ginny ever get a moment of happiness? I'm guessing the Healer was a Death Eater, or one disguised as Harry. In any case, I really hope things cheer up soon. Surely Harry will find her in time to be there for his child's birth, right? Couldn't they just send her an owl and follow it? Owls can find people without knowing their location. Or maybe one of the Healers knows. Perhaps Ginny's been seeing a Healer secretly since she can't give birth alone, and Harry finds out and can convince the Healer to help him. In any case, I really hope things get better for them soon. Praying for a happier chapter 7!

Author's Response: Chapter 7 should B quite fluffy, but it may not last long...

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 06/28/07 21:59
Chapter: Confrontations.

Wow...now I'm really thankful I didn't have that many brothers! lol I loved th is chapter!

Author's Response: Thanx 4 reviewing

Reviewer: luv4harryginny
Date: 06/28/07 21:41
Chapter: Confrontations.

Don't leave us hanging this is great....we want more....very soon!!!

Author's Response: I hope not 2 - fingers crossed chapter 7 will join the queue some time next week so it can be validated B4 the queue shuts down 4 DH.

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 06/28/07 20:24
Chapter: Confrontations.

Holy! George was awsome! I can't believe he would think that Harry said those things.
I hope Ginny's alright. If it was the Healer who said those things, I hope she gets fired.
Will Ginny keep the baby?
AHHH! I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Me neither!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 06/28/07 17:59
Chapter: Confrontations.

OMG! This is quite a stressing chapter! I'm so worried about Ginny, and Harry! He's got a lot to explain, and it ain't gonna be easy!

Author's Response: No, it's not

Reviewer: luv4harryginny
Date: 06/27/07 21:37
Chapter: Confrontations.

I love this story, where is our update!

Author's Response: That's what I'd like 2 know! Fingers crossed 4 it 2 B up in the next few days.

Reviewer: luv4harryginny
Date: 06/26/07 22:00
Chapter: Fight or Flee

Wonderful story can't wait to read the next chapters and see what happens!

Author's Response: In queue as we speak (write?)

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