Reviews For Broken Souls
Reviewer: Omagus
Date: 07/31/07 3:50
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

Wow, nice fic. It's one of those things that make you wonder what you would do differently if you were one of the characters.
One thing that I like about it is that it feels real, like a situation that could actually happen in the real world (and unfortunately probably does...).
Hehe... it's just like on TV where you get pissed off at the characters for being stupid, wanting them to see the whole picture and do what they should. Right now I'm mad most at Harry for not stepping up more (especially for being such a coward when Ginny was fighting going back to Hogwarts, in my mind it shows how unfair he is; reserving breaking down for when he's supposed to be helping Ginny and actining like there's nothing between them around anyone else) and not going to look for Ginny when she ran away. She's a bit of a mess herself though isn't she? I mean really, running off right after agreeing to admit what had happened, just isn't right.She kind of betrayed Harry (even though he wasn't exactly the most supporting person ever, was he?), leaving HIM to face her entire family alone. And then he just moves on, lying about and suppressing his connection to Ginny. They're both pretty screwed up. I'm actually rather glad George tried to beat Harry up, but not for the reasons he had been misguided into. Harry had it coming, war or not.
Oops, sorry I appear to have rambled on. Have a bit of a tendency to do that I'm afraid... I'll stop now if you promise to add more soon :)

Author's Response: U'll B glad 2 hear that I've set aside the whole of 2day 2 finishing the next chapter! And thanx 4 Ur (v. long) review!

Reviewer: double_d
Date: 07/29/07 6:27
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

please complete this. PLEASE... and e-mail me when you do( and please make a happy ending. I love this... its like reading the eigth book in the series. PLEASE do this quickly.

Author's Response: I am fully intending 2 finish this, but it's taking me a while 2 get my head back in2 this after HP7.

Reviewer: Lord Voldything
Date: 07/27/07 20:00
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

I think it's really good, and I want you to keep writing!
And please have Ginny come back...

Author's Response: Thanx 4 reviewing.

Reviewer: actress101
Date: 07/24/07 21:23
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

Great story i had a friend write something like this along time ago and they had a hard time returning the character that left so dont put it off to long please just a warning. Update soon this is awesome 10/10

Author's Response: Again, thanx

Reviewer: actress101
Date: 07/24/07 21:23
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

Great story i had a friend write something like this along time ago and they had a hard time returning the character that left so dont put it off to long please just a warning. Update soon this is awesome 10/10

Author's Response: Thanx - and don't worry, I no exactly how Ginny will rejoin the story

Reviewer: CLL042
Date: 07/24/07 15:47
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

Awesome story. Your writing style is great. You've hooked me ever since I read chapter 1. What the heck is going on w/ Ginny? She wouldn't act like that.....or would she? Plz update soon!

Author's Response: Will do (er, when I've actually written the chapter). It's really hard 2 get my head back into the fanfic world after DH!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 07/23/07 20:05
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

Have courage Harry and Ginny!

Author's Response: I'll pass the message on - lol!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 07/23/07 19:59
Chapter: Confrontations.


Author's Response: Aww

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 07/23/07 19:50
Chapter: Fight or Flee


Author's Response: Yep, she is.

Author's Response: Yep, she is.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 07/23/07 19:43
Chapter: The Brink of Despair

aw, so cute

Author's Response: Fluffy!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 07/23/07 19:37
Chapter: The Real World

this is a good story so far

Author's Response: Thanx

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 07/19/07 20:54
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

I can't wait to see Ron's reaction when he finds out that Harry knocked up his baby sister!
Will Ginny ever be found? I hope so. Someone has to be controlling her-I don't think she would do this otherwise. My money is on the Healer.
Update soon!

Author's Response: I agree - Ginny's not really behaving like her normal self is she? Is it down 2 my poor writing, or perhaos something else... Hmmm.

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 07/18/07 20:54
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

That conversation ain't gonna be easy at all! I can't wait to read it!
I guess Charlie is just beautiful. I love him!
Where's Ginny?!

Author's Response: U'll find out soon - and as 4 Charlie, he's adorable, naturally!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 07/18/07 18:43
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

Oh I loved this chapter. I hope Ginny is all right. The person who filled her head with all that nonsence should be...I don't know but something horrible and painful. For some really odd strange reason, I think that Draco did it. I have NO clue why, maybe its just my Draco obsession hoping it was. Very good chapter.

Update soon.

Author's Response: Harry killed Draco in this story - there was a flashback in chapter 4 - but I know what U mean; it is suitably Malfoy like. I seriously doubt Ny1 will guess the bad guy in this fic, but by all means, I'd like 2 C U try!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 07/17/07 21:31
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

Oh I can't wait to see his reaction! And the baby sounds so cute!!! This is going in my favorites it's really good!

Author's Response: I'm glad U've Bn enjoying this fic!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 07/17/07 21:23
Chapter: Confrontations.

Great chapter! And I never liked that healer, healers/doctors shouldn't give THAT kind of advice.

Author's Response: Quite right.

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 07/17/07 21:12
Chapter: Fight or Flee

hey, is your SN from the show recess? cuz i just remember that they had the king of the playground and his name was bob. IDK.

And WTF? Ginny's gone? Where'd she go? Why'd she go?

Author's Response: No, my user name refers 2 another Kingbob (looooonnnggg strory!), but I know the show U'r talking about.

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 07/17/07 20:43
Chapter: The Brink of Despair

I like this chapter most of all so far. I think it was the best written. And I loved Lupin being like Harry's sort of stand in mentor person.

Author's Response: That's an interesting comment. I had quite a bit of trouble with this chapter actually - it's good 2 know it was worth it!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 07/17/07 20:23
Chapter: The Real World

I'm glad Ginny's okay, i hope the rest of em come out of it too. Again, good chapter.

Author's Response: Again, thank you :D

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 07/17/07 19:50
Chapter: Not a Fairy Tale

awkward... don't you just hate eavesdroppers? Another good chapter.

Author's Response: Glad U liked it - it's always nice to hear from new readers.

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