Reviews For Broken Souls
Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/07/07 15:31
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

good job! Harry shouldn' get too dissapointed yet... Charlie could still have green eyes. When a baby is born, they usually hae blue eyes, and they eventually go to their normal colour!

Author's Response: Damn, U spotted my finalee (probably spelt wrong)! lol. Harry might B pleasantly surprised when he realises the eyes R only baby blue.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/07/07 15:24
Chapter: Not a Fairy Tale

I'm kinda upset that you killed off Charlie and Snape and Malfoy, because I actually really like all of them (always have even before DH, it's weird, I know), but I'm sooooo glad you left Remus alive. And I'm hoping Fred is alive, too.

Author's Response: Well, U'll just have 2 read on 2 find out Fred's fate won't U? :P

Reviewer: Abz
Date: 09/07/07 14:43
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

oh i feel so sorry for ginny. i'm still a bit confused about how madam pomfrey persuaded ginny to run away but that could be explained in later chapters. my favourite part is probably when harry is holding charlie... that was adorable

Author's Response: There will B more explanations later, don't worry

Reviewer: ShamanBlade
Date: 09/07/07 13:17
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

disappointed that there was no explosion

Author's Response: Explosion...?

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/07/07 12:25
Chapter: Just the Two of Us?

So even though DH has completely made this AU, I think I'm going to read it anyway, just because your writing is amazing, and I can't wait to see where you go with this fic. It'll be cool to read a sort of how it could have been thing.

Author's Response: Thanx - I'm very flattered.

Reviewer: gred and feorge
Date: 09/07/07 11:48
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

their gna find Ginny, plz let her live.
keep up the excellent wrk, plz dont leave us hanging as long as u did with this 1, even though its not ur fault really but.....i like it so much that i cant w8!
kick grey'sback-side. lol!

Author's Response: Don't worry the next 1 won't B nearl so long.

Reviewer: blueeyes
Date: 09/07/07 11:43
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

Amazing! thanks for updating, I cant wait for the next installment. I was shocked when it was Madame Pomfrey though, I hadn't picked up on the fact that Ginny was being held against her will. Keep it comming!

Author's Response: U were meant 2 B shocked - lol :D

Reviewer: double_d
Date: 09/07/07 6:49
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

This is an amazing chapter! Please don't stop writing, it is really pissing off too have to wait... you tend to forget what happens in the previous chapters and get all muddled up with other stories. Can't wait for the next one....

Author's Response: I fully intend 2 finish this - U have my word.

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/07/07 5:54
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

Awesome, thanks for updating, I was beginning to lose hope.

Author's Response: Well, I am glad U didn't

Reviewer: Trismegistus
Date: 09/07/07 0:51
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

The story has certainly taken an upswing in action, but please, no more holidays. Not after what you started in this chapter.

Author's Response: Well, school's back so the holidays R definitely over 4 now - next update in a few weeks

Reviewer: LilaBear
Date: 09/07/07 0:14
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

rofl. GO FRED!!!!

Omgosh it's getting exciting now... can't wait for them to kick some werewolf butt!!!

Author's Response: Glad U liked it :p

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 09/06/07 23:48
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

That Mme Pomfrey thing made me cry.
Thanks God Fred's genious put me back on track.
Can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: Neither can I !

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 09/06/07 21:39
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

*screams* That was a really, freaking annoying cliff-hanger. I hate that. But I shall somehow force myself to wait until you get the next chapter out. I guess/hope I'll last that long. I might not. So if you never hear from me again, you'll know what happened.

But seriously. That was a really good chapter! I like all the mushy stuff with Harry and Charlie. I actually liked that, though in other places stuff that mushy would just be stupid. But it was perfect here. I loved it. (I think you all know now that I really have to stop saying that) But I did. I really, really did. Thanks tons for another great installment in this fascinating story, and I shall be waiting impatiently for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanx 4 Ur v. enthousiastic review!

Reviewer: Flaming Harry
Date: 08/24/07 14:42
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

come on i have been waiting for ever for the next chapter

Author's Response: Please read the summary, thanx

Reviewer: brittany18baby
Date: 08/13/07 9:33
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

I can't wait for what happens next! If only I could read your mind! haha

Author's Response: Where'd I put that Occlumency book? :{

Reviewer: johnkatana12
Date: 08/12/07 17:03
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

when are you going to put up the new chapter.
i love this story soo much but i want harry and ginny to end up together again and every thing to end up happily ever after. i dont like the depressing endings (but harry telling ron he shagged is sister would be funny)

Author's Response: Next chapter will B in the queue v. soon - sorry 4 the wait!

Reviewer: HPs_girl7
Date: 08/10/07 9:35
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

i love this story, but i wish Ginny was there with him too

Author's Response: I do 2!!! But it's my job 2 fight off the fluffy impulses...

Reviewer: gred and feorge
Date: 08/09/07 8:04
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

i have nothing better 2 do than read ur story. hurry up n post : p cant wait.

Author's Response: I'm sorry - check out the summary 4 when 2 expect my next update.

Reviewer: Flaming Harry
Date: 08/08/07 11:10
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

very good i hope the next chapters are as good as the rest of the story
p.s. when are u going to post again

Author's Response: Thanx, but as it says in the summary, the next chapter will still B a few weeks - sorry!

Reviewer: albvs
Date: 08/07/07 16:24
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

wow i was just browsing cuz i was bored and waiting for an im from a friend
u did very well keep going im adding this story

Author's Response: Thanx

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