Reviews For Broken Souls
Reviewer: dgloves70
Date: 09/10/07 14:25
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

Loving this story and as always I want to know more. It is good to know that Harry has awoken up to want to verify what is going on. Why did Madam Pomfrey do what she did? What is Ginny going to do about her situation and will Harry save her? What about baby Charlie?

Author's Response: Answers comming soon...

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/09/07 16:15
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

WHAT?!?!?!?! Harry is going to find Ginny right? You need to update NOW!!! (And p.s. Charlie sounds absolutely adorable. I love babies!)

Author's Response: I love babies 2!!!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 09/09/07 15:30
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

Wow, evil Madame Pomfrey! Definately didn't see that one coming.
I loved this part:
“Yes, Ron,” said Hermione kindly, placing a hand on his arm and speaking as if he were a very upset small child. “It’s what pregnant women do — have babies.”
I hope they get to Ginny on time-I don't even want to think about what Greyback could do to her. Ugh.
Update soon!

Author's Response: Will do - Hermione's line was 1 of my favourites 2!

Reviewer: Potter_13
Date: 09/09/07 15:03
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

i can`t wait to read the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Well - just give me a chance 2 write it 1st...

Author's Response: Well - just give me a chance 2 write it 1st...

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 09/09/07 12:19
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

Oh i luv this story! update soon!

Author's Response: Thanx!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/08/07 21:09
Chapter: Baby Charlie.

So she didn't even come back with her baby? That's so sad. She will come back eventually though, right?

Author's Response: I hope so - lol

Reviewer: lupin is the chocolate man
Date: 09/08/07 20:43
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

that was great!!! i really loved harry's thoughts on being a father & i believe thats exactly how he would act with his child. im so emotional when it comes to babies lol

Author's Response: Rn't we all? Glad U liked the chapter ;)

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/08/07 20:32
Chapter: Confrontations.

And the truth comes out... by the way though, I think at one point you called George Fred, right after Fred and Bill came in. You said that Harry and Fred were still breathing hard, but I think you meant Harry and George. Oh, and I'm so glad both Hermione and George are alright! Even if Hermione is confined to a wheel chair.

Author's Response: Oops - I no my beta picked the same mistake out a few times, so it's highly likely. I'll check it out if I go back 2 edit later.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/08/07 19:57
Chapter: Fight or Flee

Well that's quite a twist. And quite a cliff hanger at that.

Author's Response: It was, wasn't it?

Reviewer: hexgirl6193
Date: 09/08/07 15:38
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.


Author's Response: WHEN IT'S WRITTEN!!! :D

Author's Response: WHEN IT'S WRITTEN!!! :D

Author's Response: WHEN IT'S WRITTEN!!! :D

Reviewer: Potter_13
Date: 09/08/07 14:08
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

omg this is such a powerful chapter. i love it keep writing

Author's Response: thanx

Reviewer: harryginny224
Date: 09/08/07 12:40
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

I absolutely love this story and I was so excited when I saw it was back! I can't wait to see more...

Author's Response: I can't wait 2 right more

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 09/08/07 9:20
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

I loved the ending! That was so Twin like to do that.

Madam Pomfry? How did you come up with that it was genious. Ron's 'should feel this big' to harry was so horribly good. Just the thing I would expect, not blatent anger but disappointment and disgust mixed with the anger. Great Job, Haylee

Author's Response: Thanx

Reviewer: Ginny663
Date: 09/07/07 23:05
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

well i am glad that it finally updated =)
you're really good with cliffhangers, arent you??? well yes, you are!
good chapter, keep em' coming!

Author's Response: Will do.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/07/07 21:36
Chapter: The Brink of Despair

I'm glad both Remus and Tonks are alive, and I really hope that George and Hermione pull through. You've probably found a beta reader by now, but if you ever need another one, or a different one, just send me an e-mail or something. I'd be happy to help.

Author's Response: Thanx 4 the offer, but happily me and my orignal beta-reader R back working 2gether now. Thanx 4 the review

Reviewer: shannie35
Date: 09/07/07 21:08
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

i loooooooooooooove this chapter! it is extremely suspensful. i cannot wait until your next chapter gets posted!

Author's Response: Thhhaaaaaaannxxx 4 rrreeeeeevvvvvvviiwwiiiinnnggg! lol

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/07/07 20:31
Chapter: The Real World

Oh no, not George and Hermione! That's so sad!!!

Author's Response: U mut think I'm evil :(

Reviewer: sailorscout_k
Date: 09/07/07 20:18
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

i loved this chapter! do you think you could make them longer though?
it's like a giant cliffhanger! i can't sleep wit those!
lol, jk

Author's Response: I'm sorry - I could make them longer, but then it would B even longer between updates!

Reviewer: kittykat
Date: 09/07/07 20:18
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

I THINK YOU NEED TO UPDATE RIGHT NOW!!!! i i mean the baby sounds so cute, but ginny might die, and rons mad but now they need to find ginny, and fred has ginnys medical record...UPDATE!!

Author's Response: WILL DO!!!

Reviewer: luv4harryginny
Date: 09/07/07 15:41
Chapter: Meet the Grandparents.

I am so glad he finally held the baby. I thought Ron's response was right on the money...keep the chapters coming.

Author's Response: I'm glad U 4t so. More on it's way soon.

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