Reviews For To Be With You
Reviewer: Ana Lopes
Date: 06/29/09 19:11
Chapter: To Be With You

awwwwwww.
hw could this not be good. You are a seriously good writer. I just love it when i'm looking through the fics and i spot your name. it means i just found something worth reading!!!!
Well Done!

Reviewer: Ana Lopes
Date: 06/29/09 19:10
Chapter: To Be With You

awwwwwww.
hw could this not be good. You are a seriously good writer. I just love it when i'm looking through the fics and i spot your name. it means i just found something worth reading!!!!
Well Done!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 17:30
Chapter: To Be With You

I like this story. It's a cuttie.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Luna6789
Date: 08/04/08 20:44
Chapter: To Be With You

This seems a little forced at the end when James starts explaining why he and Lily should be together, but I love it anyways...especially for introducing me to this song

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll go take a look at the end. I haven't read this story in forever, it probably could use some touching up!

Reviewer: Lilypotter55
Date: 03/22/08 12:13
Chapter: To Be With You

It's so sweet.... I hope you add more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll definitely add more, once school settles down.

Reviewer: duskshadow
Date: 11/12/07 0:46
Chapter: To Be With You

haha, if this sounded better in your head then I'd hate to see what you must think of the rest of us =P absolutely awesome more like it!

Author's Response: Hehehe. Thank youuuuuuu! :D

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/25/07 13:51
Chapter: To Be With You

I enjoyed having this from James point of view and not having them kiss at the end. Very well written, creative, and funny. Excellent piece.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/21/07 2:55
Chapter: To Be With You

Awww that't really cute and kind of sad. That song fits this scenario perfectly, it's amazing.
I think you're a really good writer, so keep going strong.


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/21/07 2:43
Chapter: To Be With You

Awww that't really cute and kind of sad. That song fits this scenario perfectly, it's amazing.
I think you're a really good writer, so keep going strong.


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 08/10/07 22:39
Chapter: To Be With You

This is one of the best one-shots I've ever read! I read this before and I loved it so much, I printed it out. Then I showed it to my friends and now they're into fanfiction. And we have you to thank! Keep up your amazing work!

Author's Response: Yay, new members recruited! :D Thank you!

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 08/03/07 18:04
Chapter: To Be With You

aww so sweet~~
i siriusly love ur stories!! ( lol i just fell like spelling seriously siriusly.)
So as i said before tell me when the books out!!

Author's Response: *Grins* Don't worry, I will. :D

Reviewer: lunarocks15
Date: 08/03/07 17:50
Chapter: To Be With You

awww thats sweet. i thought it was really good and you captured lily and james really well :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 04/09/07 8:31
Chapter: To Be With You

really sweet!

Author's Response: Thanks! =D

Reviewer: girl_in_love
Date: 03/21/07 6:20
Chapter: To Be With You

.awwwwwwwwwww!!!!now do us all a favor and write a sequel!!!!!!

Author's Response: :D I'll try!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 03/20/07 19:32
Chapter: To Be With You

i liked the ending...."For he would never let Lily go." way cute, yet another brilliant story. i really liked the part when james was there for her all the time. so cute. basically, i enjoy reading your james/lily stuff, please wrtie more! it would make my day! thanks, a new-fouind loyal reader, Quiditch fan aka Lauryn.


Author's Response: :D Thank you!! Your review made my day.

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 03/15/07 17:32
Chapter: To Be With You

AWW! So sweet. I LOVED IT!!! I loved the last line. =D SO SWEET! You have a way with words! And what are you talking about when you said its not too good. ITS EXCELLENT!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: pam
Date: 03/14/07 23:46
Chapter: To Be With You

This was a really good story tragic but leaves you wandering when will she accept him.

Author's Response: Hehe, seventh year?

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 03/13/07 16:26
Chapter: To Be With You

I like it

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: jandl
Date: 03/12/07 20:31
Chapter: To Be With You

You need a sequel

Author's Response: I'll try!

Reviewer: jandl
Date: 03/12/07 19:53
Chapter: To Be With You

You need a sequel

Author's Response: Hehe, I'll try!

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