Reviews For Heal Me
Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 03/13/07 13:33
Chapter: One-Shot

lovely.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 03/08/07 13:12
Chapter: One-Shot

This was good. It shows that he needs her in his life and that he won't make it without her. It also shows that he is afraid of what is to come and how it will end. And whether or not they will be there to help him through it. GREAT JOB

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 03/07/07 12:10
Chapter: One-Shot

This was beautiful! So powerful! one of the best poems on this site ad im not just saying that!

I loved the repetition and your use of language and u portrayed his meesage of need and desperaton fantastically!

Poetry is out of ur comfort zone, eh? i nver would have guessed! keep it up!

I can't pic out a favorite stanza, really (AND IM SERIOUSLY NOT.JUST.SAYING THAT!)

great job!

ps. mind reading and eviewing mines? its right below yours....

:-)

Author's Response: thank you soo much!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 03/06/07 11:09
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow. That was really good if you've never written poetry before. Or even if you have... that was amazing. I love how you never show who anybody is, so it could be anybody, but then you make it quite clear that it's Harry asking Ginny/Ron/Hermione for help. I loved the repition of the Heal Me and the Save My Soul - they really helped the flow of the poem. Really good job!
-Abby


Author's Response: Wow, what a great review! I've only written some crappy poetry for an english class or two but other than that...not at all!

Reviewer: Tagidi Riva
Date: 03/06/07 10:48
Chapter: One-Shot

The bittersweet tone is so moving and powerful. Amazingly well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Poetry is not my strong suit so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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