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Name: nikster (Signed) · Date: 05/12/07 13:37 · For: Chapter 5: An Interesting Conversation
Great chapter!
Cont soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! Will get the next chapter up asap! Thanks for the review.

Author's Response: Thank you! Will get the next chapter up asap! Thanks for the review.

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 05/11/07 1:45 · For: Chapter 5: An Interesting Conversation
I reallly really love your writing style. you sound so genuine.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I probably sound genuine, because Lauren is modelled on a very good friend of mine. Thank you for taking the time to leave a review!

Name: nikster (Signed) · Date: 04/30/07 12:57 · For: Chapter 4: Tattoos
Great chapter!!
I am still wondering wat the Tatatoo looks like!!
Cont soon!

Author's Response: We are getting there...slowly! Thank you for the review!

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 04/28/07 21:26 · For: Chapter 4: Tattoos
really reallly cool! I can't wait. don't answer this if you don't want to, but what made you move to america?

Author's Response: I got married to a truly gorgeous American, who didn't really want to live in England. Now I am an American citizen, and I really love America. My children were born here, and I have tons of really fantastic friends. I am glad you like this story so far, and I am really pleased you are still reading it.

Name: James Jameson (Signed) · Date: 04/28/07 20:27 · For: Chapter 4: Tattoos
that was good! i'm so glad that luaren plays cello, because i play cello too!!!!! im glad that i can understand the muiscall terms, and i pity th people who can't. anyways, i want to find out if ben is a death eater.

Author's Response: I love the cello. I just took it up, and I am teaching myself the Suzuki method. I just got to book 4 - if that means anything to you! I haven't had any lessons though, so my technique is probably terrible, but I enjoy it tremendously. I think you have a chapter to go before you find out definitely about Ben! I am glad you are enjoying the story so much. What is your favourite piece on the cello?

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Name: muggle_child (Signed) · Date: 04/25/07 21:49 · For: Chapter 1: A Date with Ben
love it soooooooo much!! great story!!!

Author's Response: I am so glad you like it. I had such fun writing it, and it is very satisfying to know that people are also enjoying reading it. Thank you very much for your review.

Name: nikster (Signed) · Date: 04/21/07 7:08 · For: Chapter 3: An Argument and a Second Date
Great chapter!
I am wondering what will happen next with the link with Rawenclaw and Ben's tattoo!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Cont soon

Author's Response: Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. But you will have to wait a bit to find out about the tattoo! Thank you for reviewing!

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 04/20/07 21:14 · For: Chapter 3: An Argument and a Second Date
interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 04/20/07 21:05 · For: Chapter 2: Coincidences
are you british? you seem really familiar with london.

there is something creepy about ben. I don't trust him. and how did lauren know what ravenclaw looked like? and why does she look like her? I think this story is going to get creepy.

Author's Response: Actually, I am American - just got my citizenship - but I used to be British. As to the story getting creepy, you will have to wait and see. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 04/20/07 20:48 · For: Chapter 1: A Date with Ben
this horcrux book kind of reminds me of the book of the dead in Sabriel by Garth Nix, just because of Lauren's reaction to it. that is really creative, with the horcrux in an instrument. that must be absolute hell to find and destroy though--I mean, how do you find the instrument, let alone reconstruct it if it was destroyed, and then play the song? and I just thought--does it just have to be the same song, or does it have to be exactly the same, like if whoever planted the horcrux made a mistake? does whoever is trying to evict the horcrux also have to make the same mistake?

I'm guessing the Royal acadamy is a music school, possibly comparable to something like julliard...?

I have a friend who's studying to be a professional musician, and she hardly ever stops practicing. i don't know if she'd take breaks to read, even for her best friend. I'm her best friend. I guess not all musicians are like that.

The bit about black socks reminds me of my school band. we always have that problem. are you a musician? you sound very familiar with the inner workings of putting together a concert.

Author's Response: I wondered about hat, and I did address it at one point, but then might have edited it out. After all, a ring can also be destroyed, and so can a locket. So could Nagini, come to that - if, of course Nagini is actualy a Horcrux. Perhaps things with Horcruxes in them are preserved from destruction in some way. So I stopped worrying too much about it. There are a few really good music colleges in England - the Royal Academy, the Royal College, the Royal Northern, the Guildhall and the Royal Scottish Academy of Music and Drama. The London College of Music used to be good, but it ran out of money and was incorporated into Thames Valley University in Ealing. I used to play in an orchestra (viola) at college but I am trying the cello now, as my two children play violin and my husband plays viola (not professionally!). I have family members who are musicians though, so I am used to sitting around in draughty churches and dashing out to the nearest store to buy black socks! A lot of musicians practice all the time - it must be hard for you sometimes! However, maybe she would change her mind if she was helping you to overcome an evil overlord who wanted to destroy her! You will have to read the story to find out how Lauren does.

Name: nikster (Signed) · Date: 04/13/07 8:41 · For: Chapter 2: Coincidences
Great chapter!
I wonder what happens next!!
Cont soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I have actually written the whole thing, I just have to get around to formatting the chapter so that I can post it, so hopefully it won't be that long.

Name: James Jameson (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 15:59 · For: Chapter 2: Coincidences
Come on Lauren!!!! Steal the "sbuffbox"

Author's Response: Wait and see... Thanks for the review!

Name: muggle_child (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 13:44 · For: Chapter 2: Coincidences
Love it
Hermione's Muggle friend's revealed and she is awesome

Author's Response: Thank you! I like Lauren too - she is based on a friend of mine. thank you for leaving a review.

Name: Siva2478 (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 10:41 · For: Chapter 2: Coincidences
Working up to be quite a good story, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you for your review.

Name: hannahabbot2007 (Signed) · Date: 03/29/07 16:30 · For: Chapter 1: A Date with Ben
I feel bad for Lauren because of Ellie. Is Ellie going to steal him & Lauren hook up with Harry?? that actually would be cool!

Author's Response: Unfortunately I am having trouble with my formatting for some reason now. I am trying to get the next chapter up to answer your question. But you will have to wait and see... Thank you for your review.

Name: Visceral Love (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 22:44 · For: Chapter 1: A Date with Ben
A lovely first chapter. Sorry this isn't going to be long as my first review. I enjoyed it emmensly but for some reason the Harry/OC possibilty rings sour with me. Perhaps I'm just a fan for characters to suffer. I think a little more information on how they integrated a muggle into their friendship would help, but I like the concept and the writing has a nice ring. I particularily liked the line about splitting yourself up into Dvorak. I personally would have one of my horacruxes be Schubert's Vocal Winterlese. Look foreward to the next chapter.
Visceral Love

Author's Response: Hi! Don't worry about the Harry O/C possibility. Ain't going to happen. On the other hand, I think if Harry is as good looking as the books imply, that she would notice. And I think there will be quite enough suffering for you as it goes on! But you have to get through the happy clappy part first. I did write another story to go with this one, and then decided to write more about the character, but I can't work out how to put them together as a series. Just dense, I suppose, everyone else manages it. If you want to read it, it is called "How I found My Best Friend Was a Witch." Did you mean Schubert's Winterreise? If so, what a wonderful choice. I used to sing it - before I had kids, and lost all my breath control, (even though my voice is more suited to French songs). I adore Schubert. If I had to do Horcruxes, they would probably all be musical, because I wouldn't be able to decide what to choose!

Name: James Jameson (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 18:37 · For: Chapter 1: A Date with Ben
lol that last part made me laugh.

Author's Response: I am glad you found it funny. I prefer the made up bow ties on elastic! Thank you for being my first reviewer on this story, and for leaving such a nice review.

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