Very moving. I really enjoyed it.
Um, this was good. Nice ryhming, by the way - are you going to give me that bottle of ryhmes or what?
I'm tired. But I have a goal to accomplished before clocking out.
Author's Response: Um, thank you. Now I have to clear out my inbox from, 'You have recieved a new review...' But, if you insist. Reach for the STARS!!
I'm touched, I truly am.
Author's Response: I appreciate it, I truly do. :)
OH...that was really great! Don't know much about poetry but you did a great job! They're all alive, Yay!
Author's Response: Yup!
oh this was so sweet! i think 'cute' is actually the best word for this, even though the image you tried to portray was a bit sad (just a tad bit :-))
You won't see them,
I'll open your eyes.
I'll comb your red hair,
I'll be your surprise.
that was so great: I'll comb your red hair/ I'll be your surprise. Just so sweet!! :-D
mind checking out my poem?
Author's Response: Thanks! No problem. :)
Aaaaaaaaaaawww! thats so sweet! I love it, being a H/G shipper and all, but it;s beautiful. good gob, 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks!