Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/03/10 10:37
Chapter: 24 - In Demand

Oh my gosh--that was amazing. I loved how you brought Quirrell into the story. I don't know how you keep your own complex story straight and yet bring in canon. It just fits together like a puzzle. I'm sure glad I don't have to drink polyjuice potion. It always sounds awful. I can't wait to see how you weave the rest of this story. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Now, do you understand why this is my favorite? This was the apex to the trilogy. It just gets better. My favorite part was when it finally hit her that she was a man. You can really imagine her reaction. Geez. I'd be in a fit of giggles, too. Especially a burly, hair, fisherman... Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/03/10 9:54
Chapter: 23 - Pineto

Don't you wish someone would just step up and assassinate Voldemort? Or that Albus would say "I took out Grindelwald and now I'll take out Voldemort." It must comfort Daniella to have Pinky there. I think it's totally adorable that she likes to go to the beach and feel the sand in hier toes. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Pinky on the beach was something that I could really picture, plus her comments about Muggles. As for Albus *snort* He's leaving this up to others. After all, that's why she was "born", isn't it? This is what he's been working for since Once Upon A Time. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/03/10 9:22
Chapter: 22 - Home Is Where The Heart Is

This was kind of a bittersweet chapter with all the good byes and then the forward looking into the future. I think it's wonderful that Pinky will be going to Italy with Daniella. I hated that Daniella and Severus had to say good bye again. What's Albus thinking--life doesn't go on forever. You've got to make the most of relationships when you have them. I loved that she kissed Kurtz good bye and thanked him in front of his class. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Kurtz and Severus are so close together in personality that it was hard not to toss Daniella with him, but I refrained. I can still play with him, though... and do... Pinky is Daniella's adorable, little sidekick. They have such an amazing relationship. I couldn't tear them apart. There were too many other good-bues. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/02/10 10:43
Chapter: 21 - Stolen Moments

What a lovely surprise--all of those roses--and I'm sure it smelled lovely too. I'm so happy her presentation went well, this time without Belby taking credit for everything. I was noticing the "leering" wizard again. He never was named but he's so memorable:D This was such a wonderful and happy chapter. If magical people were real I think this is how they would be.

Author's Response: The leering wizard is never named, but you're right, he's one of those unforgettable characters who keeps popping up. As Daniella gets older, she seems to overcome her stagefright. Remeber there was a suggestion that she teacher that she declines. Daniella and Severus have to have a moment every now and then. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/02/10 9:37
Chapter: 20 - The Messenger

I'm so fickle. Remus is barely out of the picture and I forget all about him. This poor couple has been through so much. I don't think I could be brave like they are. I hope they can get together occasionally at the safe house. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Told you Stark was a character. Oh, the indignity of being a carrier raven. I don't know if you've noticed, but this story has 65 chapters. A lot happens over many years. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/02/10 8:43
Chapter: 19 - Remus' Heart

I have a very odd feeling about Stark. Does Daniella really know he's not an animagus? I'm thinking he is. Either that or ravens mate for life and the bird thinks humans should too:D That was heartbreaking but I think Daniella let Remus down easy in the least painful way possible. The other problem is that she's not really Daniella but someone Remus knew before so the relationship, out of necessity, had to start out dishonestly and that's never good. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Hmm, Stark. He's just a cute bird... What a character! He's in it until the end. Remus still shows up too. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/01/10 11:03
Chapter: 18 - Hail The Conquering Heroes

I know she's going to hurt Remus' feelings. That's sad since he's such a nice man. Why does life have to be that way--I suppose it would be boring though if things went smoothly all the time. Sometimes I think we need pain to let us know we're alive. Belby is such a jerk. I with she had been paying attention during his speech and had corrected him, but in the end she still gets a good job and to go back to Italy. Great chapter.

Author's Response: You get the feeling that she doesn't want to hurt him but knows it's going to happen anyway. I love Remus, too. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/01/10 10:14
Chapter: 17 - Syria

You're so evil. I had a feeling that it was Severus who came to rescue her but you really had me guessing up to the last second. My heart nearly broke when Severus asked her if she cared for the wolf and she said yes. Then when she said she could love only Severus I felt bad for Remus. I know the Goddess wants Severus and Daniella to be a couple but do they have to be such tortured lovers? Great chapter.

Author's Response: Life would not be nearly as interesting if everything went smoothly. Life is full of bumps along the road. Tenacity can smooth it out. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/01/10 9:40
Chapter: 16 - Life's Rollercoaster

That wasn't nice, leaving me with a big cliffie:D I don't know why but I felt pleasantly surprised to find Remus in Daniella's bed. It's like they both need each other. Albus is such a game player. And, he's a big tease.That had to be so painful for her to go to Saxon's grave. It's very hard to lose a child. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Wa ha ha ha ha... I love both Remus and Severus but only one can win. As for Albus, gee, does he really think he just interupted a good night's sleep. snort. This is Albus. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/21/10 14:24
Chapter: 15 - Triumph in the Month of Moons

That was a close one. I thought Daniella was going to have to Obliviate Kurtz. I was imagining all sorts of horrible things--like what if he destroyed the Wolfsbane by accident. I think Kurtz has a little crush on Daniella. The scenes with the pack were heartwarming. For some reason they reminded me of the end of Robin Hood--the movie. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Social awkward remember. He's trying to be social but doesn't quite know how, and yes, I think he might have a little crush on her. She's given him friendly time and attention. I haven't seen Robin Hood yet. Hmmm, Russell Crowe... Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/21/10 9:35
Chapter: 14 - A Horse Of A Different Colour

Daniella is so kind. Part of the reason is that she's an empath but I like to think that she's just kind. That was so nice of her to spend time with Kurtz. I was starting to feel sorry for him. Maybe not sorry but to sympathize with someone who's kind of a social misfit. He's used to being alone and doesn't know what to do to get out of it. Or, does he remind her so much of Severus? Great chapter.

Author's Response: Daniella is sweet. I think that's why she attracts the awkward ones - Severus, Remus, Kurtz. I like Kurtz. He fits in with the others. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/21/10 9:00
Chapter: 13 - Trials and Errors

While I don't see anything wrong with what Remus and Daniella are doing, if I were her I would've felt very guilty running into my "husband" in Hogsmeade. I said it before--if she's going to venture close to Hogwarts she'll run into Severus at some point in time. It really doesn't have to be this way--Severus is so stubborn.I was trying to figure out what year this is. If Remus is 27 it must be around 1987 and there's 10-11 years left of the war. I don't know why but I'm always trying to figure out what's going on with everybody else while our main characters are struggling through life. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Ex-husband...but then, they weren't officially married anyway, and he's being a prat about thngs. Hormones and lust, or a simple need to have someone care for you, that's what it's about. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/20/10 13:26
Chapter: 12 - Wolfsbane and Crab Cakes

Now you're just teasing me. I thought Severus had snuck into the lab on Christmas Day. I was as surprised as the next person when he invited Daniella out to dinner. I'm not really disappointed that Daniella had sex with Remus. She was attracted to him earlier and Severus has been so distant. A woman can only put up with so much, I think. That is pretty amazing that the potion allowed Remus to keep his human form but bummer that it poisoned him. Maybe they're just have to adjust it. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I remember somewhere in the story, probably one of the books, it says that Remus changes into a wolf, but is able to keep his cognition. The potion made him sleepy so he curls up and goes to sleep for the duration. The scene between Remus and Daniella was heat and lust, pure and simple. Go without for a while and... sigh... Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/20/10 9:43
Chapter: 11 - Cold Nights, Warm Hearts

That was so sad yet so hopeful. I smirked myself when I read about what Daniella was up to. Poor Severus--he has to immediately jump into a jealous mode--although I might be worried about Remus too if I were him:D I wish their story could be a happier one but sometimes I wonder--the story I'm writing has its own horribly heartbreaking and angsty moments--in the end, well we all know what happens to Bellatrix. I have the opportunity to write something happy but I go with the angst:D Anyway, great chapter--although my heart is sad.

Author's Response: Just tugs at the heartstrings, doesn't it? I love Severus so much. He's such a tortured soul. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/20/10 9:12
Chapter: 10 - Stalemate

Again, what impresses me is the amount of research you must have to do to write these stories. I don't know that much about science but what you describe in the medical parts is very convincing. I know I couldn't write that. What else is interesting is that you have me convinced that Daniella might actually be able to come up with a cure for lycanthropy. I'm reading as if this was reality. One thing I smiled about was that Severus' snarky demeanor fit in with the female-hostile countries he had to visit:D I can imagine it did. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I did an enormous amount of research for this story, and all the plants and medical stuff is accurate. I loved this story. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/19/10 10:33
Chapter: 9 - Between Two Worlds

I hope Daniella kicked Kurtz's butt enough so he stops asking dumb questions. If she did the work at Oxford who cares. I was worried for a minute that Albus was going to send Daniella into a strange country that was hostile to women--sounds like something he'd do. I still feel sad about her and Severus. I hope they get back together. I'll bet you have something interesting planned:D Great chapter.

Author's Response: Me? Something planned? Kurtz is harmless, and Daniella can stand up for herself. She's a tough cookie. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/19/10 10:07
Chapter: 8 - Getting To Know You

I got the biggest kick out of the child trying to ride the bouncing broom outside of one of the Hogsmeade shops. I used to love the Muggle rides like that when I was young. I was afraid they might run into Severus venturing that close to Hogwarts. The only thing I was a little confused about was that Daniella acted like she'd never been to Hogsmeade when I remember she had. I know she had to play along with Remus but she acted like she had no memory at all. Great chapter. I love how you've integrated Muggle medicine and technology into this very Wizard illness.

Author's Response: I remember those rides, too! If you read back to CAG, Alicia only goes to Hogsmeade once. She may not remember everything about it. She was only at Hogwarts for 6 months. Dani

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/18/10 11:39
Chapter: 7 - Graduation

I knew it! I knew it! Severus was there. I figured he was the one who stopped her from falling. Why oh why didn't you let him wait for her in her room? I almost cried. That was so lovely. I'm almost wondering if he's watching over her but she doesn't really know it. How exciting. I'm not surprised she had the highest GPA. Great chapter. By the way, thanks for not having her kiss Russell. That just shouldn't happen. She'll hate herself for it.

Author's Response: Of course he was there!!! :-D As snarky and distant as he is, I think he still loves her.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/18/10 9:22
Chapter: 6 - Ready, Set, Go

That was cool. I thought the "boys" might be uncomfortable meeting each other but you described the handshake perfectly. I got a big smile out of that. It's too bad Daniella hasn't told Remus who she really is. I wonder if you'll have her do that:D I can't wait to see if Daniella will figure out something to help Remus. Wonderful chapter as always.

Author's Response: That handshake was so typical, I had to laugh too. Daniella can't tell Remus who she is. she's supposed to be dead. But, maybe she'll figure something out.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/14/10 9:06
Chapter: 5 - Moving On

I felt a little bad that Russell thought that Daniella was giving him another chance. Then I thought for a moment that Daniella was going to give in to her lonely feelings. She's got to be a strong person to wait like that for Severus. I remembered my own stress at presenting my dissertation proposal. Now I would sail right through it but at the time I was so nervous knowing this committee of people held my future in their hands. Great chapter.

Author's Response: No, she won't give in to her feleings...yet... snicker

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