Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 03/09/08 4:54
Chapter: 13 - Trials and Errors

OH HOLY .... can't wait 4 Severus 2 find out!

Author's Response: Well, he won't be happy about it. Dani

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 03/09/08 4:35
Chapter: 11 - Cold Nights, Warm Hearts

Hopefully not! =)

Author's Response: :-D

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 03/08/08 4:57
Chapter: 8 - Getting To Know You

Severus should have seen them together in Hogsmeade. Now THAT would have brought him running back!

Author's Response: Hmmm, but does he ever find out? He's very vocused man, and this is a very long story 65 chapters. Thanks for keeping up with it. Dani

Author's Response: "vocused" should be "focused". Opps. Dani

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 03/08/08 4:52
Chapter: 7 - Graduation

Aawwwww... so he still loves her, does he not =) =D

Author's Response: Of course. :-) D

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 03/08/08 4:30
Chapter: 2 - Holiday Cheer

Yeahh! Severus' hair transfigured into mistletoe... LOL! I seriously think Pinky deserves huge fat reward for that... Y is he acting like such a huge prat anyway?

Author's Response: You will find out. D

Reviewer: Minerva46
Date: 03/04/08 13:06
Chapter: 12 - Wolfsbane and Crab Cakes

I'm not sure that the gravitational pull of the moon is more at fullness. The moon is no closer to the earth at that time, is it? It is only its position relative to the sun and earth that makes it full.

Author's Response: I do realise that, but this is a story. However, I did do a thesis on behaviour patterns in humans at various ages in relationship to the moon's cycle, and there is something to be said about a full moon on behaviour in younger children and teens. Adults don't exhibit a change in behaviour as much. Hypothesis - adults are trained to repress instinctive urges and reactions. Dani

Reviewer: chickonsticks
Date: 03/02/08 22:55
Chapter: 5 - Moving On

this makes me wish my thesis topic had some sort of "other world" significance.... but i really like your idea of some inter-cellular singaling mechanim being responsible for warewolves... I mean it is responsibel for seemingly everything else

Author's Response: It does seem to make sense, doesn't it. At least I thought so. :-) Dani

Reviewer: truelight
Date: 03/01/08 23:15
Chapter: Prologue

this is good, something the author may have say in her writing

Author's Response: That's what I thought. There's only so much an author can include. I just liked filling in the blanks. Have you read the other two? This is the last of a trilogy. Dani

Reviewer: sirius_stars
Date: 03/01/08 20:28
Chapter: 34 - Frustration

nice story, the 2 stories before were pretty good as well. Keep writing! ;)

Author's Response: Oh, it's far from finished. Glad you're enjoying them. Dani

Reviewer: Dazed_And_Abused
Date: 02/28/08 15:52
Chapter: 34 - Frustration

i love this trilogy, esepecially the whole
remus x daniella affair lol. i was put out because you decided to make it a daniella x snape (forgot her real name lol) maybe you could like make another story, but a remus x whatever ship? i love remus, he's my favourite. lol keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I have to say Snape was/is my favourite with Remus coming a close second. There might be another story in my head somewhere with Remus. Dani

Reviewer: buffyslayer
Date: 02/28/08 5:24
Chapter: 34 - Frustration

Wonderful!! This beautiful story has me hooked! Wonderful imagery, writing, and plot! 1000% Fantastic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :-D What a wonderful review. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. As I'v already said, MNFF has asked that we not post, so the next chapter will be coming eventually. Dani

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 02/28/08 1:48
Chapter: 34 - Frustration

wow......can't wait for next chapter!!!

I really hope she finds happiness. I hope she can get past Tuscany and find a new place with severus when this is all over. if you end this fic with death and depression, I will be very sad. :(

Author's Response: MNFF is still asking that we not post, so it may be a while before the next chapter is up. Sorry. My hands are tied. Dani

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 02/02/08 20:53
Chapter: 33 - As One Door Closes

I'm really curious to see if you'll do anything more with Frank and Alice... but I guess I'll have to be patient. Well anyways, I just thought I'd tell you the chapter was wonderful (as usual), and I can't wait until the next one is validated. :)

Author's Response: I'm sorry I didn't reply to this sooner. I'm usually much better. Frank and Alice are reoccurring, but you have to read to the end. At the moment, the Epilogue is at Chapter 64. Eeeekkk!!! The next chapter is waiting validation, but with the problems at MNFF, things are a bit slow. I guess we all have to be patient. Thanks for reading and I'm glad that you're enjoying it. Dani

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 02/02/08 14:25
Chapter: 33 - As One Door Closes

saxon's fourteenth's birthday!!! I tend to forget how much time has passed in your fic's world. it made me so sad. I was still imagining saxon as a baby, a bit like emily's you made me tear up.
I love the ending to this chapter.

Author's Response: Happy to please. The next chapter is in line to be validated. Dani

Reviewer: Em1992
Date: 01/23/08 15:16
Chapter: 32 - Surprises

ive read all of these ones and they are so good!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like them. Dani

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 01/19/08 22:58
Chapter: 32 - Surprises


Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 01/04/08 20:06
Chapter: 30 - And Resolutions

I love reading this.

Author's Response: Yay! Because I love writing it! Dani

Reviewer: Mrs Spike
Date: 01/02/08 15:32
Chapter: 23 - Pineto

This chapter seemed to be a rather strange transition. You made a big deal out of Pinky knowing they were together at the safehouse and them not knowing that she knows. Now all of a sudden, she's making him roast beef at Dani's house? I feel that could have used more explanation.

I hope you take this as constructive critism, because it's intent is not to offend. I truly enjoy this story and your writing in general.

Author's Response: No offence taken. Constructive criticism is always welcome. "Pineto" was a difficult chapter to write. It covered many years in a short span in order to catch up with JRK's books and not drag too much. I figured by this point, Pinky has caught on. Dani

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 12/08/07 20:08
Chapter: 28 - Keeping Busy

Ooooh -- nice ending!

Author's Response: Grazie.

Reviewer: CourtneyPaige31
Date: 12/02/07 17:40
Chapter: 9 - Between Two Worlds

Although I'm only on chapter 9, I love this story. I can hardly tear my eyes from it at the end of the day. Daniella reminds me a lot of a grown up Hermione. although less know-it-all. But I applaud your work, I could never do something this amazing. more snape please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review. Snape comes and goes in this story, as well, as a few other characters. It's a long one. Patience is required. ;-) Dani

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