Reviews For A Choice
Reviewer: princess_potter
Date: 08/04/07 22:14
Chapter: A Choice

it was...interesting. I think that the story line was good, but the dialogue said some stuff that if you imagine a normal teenager saying like that, well you would slap them for syaing something so completely ridiculous. it was a good storyline though

Reviewer: princess_potter
Date: 08/04/07 22:12
Chapter: A Choice

it was...interesting. I think that the story line was good, but the dialogue said some stuff that if you imagine a normal teenager saying like that, well you would slap them for syaing something so completely ridiculous. it was a good storyline though

Reviewer: Ravenlily
Date: 08/04/07 10:39
Chapter: A Choice

Hey! I'm Ravenlilie's sis. (Slytherin Princess) And this is a great story! I love Draco and I think its really sad what happens to him, but he is Draco and used to be evil. I think its a great story

lots of love
Slytherin Princess

Reviewer: Ravenlily
Date: 08/04/07 10:39
Chapter: A Choice

Hey! I'm Ravenlilie's sis. (Slytherin Princess) And this is a great story! I love Draco and I think its really sad what happens to him, but he is Draco and used to be evil. I think its a great story

lots of love
Slytherin Princess

Reviewer: Merlin the Weirdster
Date: 05/28/07 10:00
Chapter: A Choice

well, for one thing, there was a lot of kissing. for another, i liked it. i like how its like the stereotyped love triengle, two guys like girl, girl likes one guy, they get together, after many months, girl realizes she likes other guy, they get together, first guy finds out, girl dumps first guy, girl and second guy live hapilly ever after, but with an interesting twist.

you should write a next chapter.



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. This is a One-Shot, so there is no next chapter, but you can look at any of my other fics to read more!

Reviewer: ljroxyou
Date: 05/10/07 17:17
Chapter: A Choice

Hey HKG!! This is Prof LJ. I liked it. But, you should put a little bit more in there besides snogging. I don't mean like really physical scenes. But there seems to be a lot of redundant snogging. But, I really really liked it!
-Prof LJ

Author's Response: Hi LJ! Thank you for the review. I really appreciate it. And you're right --- redundant snogging there is. HKG

Reviewer: Edgware
Date: 04/09/07 19:03
Chapter: A Choice

Your poems are very good. Write more fics, chaptered ones, then email them to me so i can beta muahahahahaha

Author's Response: . . . you scare me sometimes. but thats okay. btw, this isnt a poem if you havent noticed

Reviewer: Colores
Date: 03/29/07 9:39
Chapter: A Choice

Your writing at the beginning of the story was stronger than your writing as the story progressed. The rest of it wasn't bad at all, but it just wasn't the same quality as it was at the beginning. Your beginning writing was awesome. You really captured Hermione's thoughts perfectly and you gave a lot of wonderful description.

As the story progressed, I think the biggest weakness was just that it moved too quickly. Hermione seemed to be flitting between Draco and Ron and the speed with which she made her decisions was not very Hermione-like, from my perspective. I realize their may have been constraints on the writing that made you write the scenes so quickly, but maybe here would have been a way to make it seem less rushed? I don't know.

I do love the romance part of the story, however. I think that Ron's actions to get Hermione were really sweet and I am happy she ended up with him in the end. I must say, at the beginning, I thought she was choosing between Harry and Draco, instead of Ron and Draco, but I like that she ended up with Ron. Good job at keeping it ambiguous! It shocked me when I found out later on in the work.

Great job at writing romance. You seem to have an eye for it that I don't. :)

-Colores, of the Hufflepuff Review Circle

Author's Response: Awww thank you! Thanks for the wildly amazing critique. The reason for the strength of the writing was because some of it was after being rejected a few times, and I did submit this the night before the deadline. --HKG

Reviewer: cAughtonFire
Date: 03/09/07 22:12
Chapter: A Choice

YAY I'm so happy to see this up!! I love this fic. It has so much drama, but you don't over do it :)

-Ashley (belezza)

Author's Response: THANK YOU! I must have forgotten to PM you and tell you it was up in all my excitement. SORRY!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: pikster2
Date: 03/03/07 17:18
Chapter: A Choice

I like it! its good! i like the r.hr part, thats cuz i hugely ship ron/hermione, more than almost anyone else in the entire world. I told u i would review and i am, its good and keep writing r/hr fics, ( you are one of my fav authorss)
just to put that out there ;)


Author's Response: OMFG I LUB YOU BIFFER! YOU ARE ON MY FAVORITE AUTHORS, EVEN IF YOU DONT HAVE STORIES. I know you ship r/hr, which was why I was reluctant to ask you to review this. anyway, you are the awesome-est person ever. that is a true fact right there. EVERYONE. THIS REVIEW WAS FROM THE AWESOME-EST PERSON EVER! I LUB HER FOREVER AND IF YOU DON'T THEN YOU HAVE ISSUES. lol. sorry, thanks for reviewing this, even if draco/hemrione makes you gag.

Reviewer: izzyblue24
Date: 03/03/07 15:23
Chapter: A Choice

YEY!!!! I luv HrR shipping!

Author's Response: awwwww thanks! me too. i really only had the dramione factor as a way to kinda say "dramione would never work. this is why. so hah. i win."

Reviewer: hpfangirl9
Date: 03/02/07 21:53
Chapter: A Choice

omg i love this it's wonderfully writen even though hermione's an idiot

Author's Response: awwwwwwwww thanks you! twin power! lol.

Reviewer: hpfangirl9
Date: 03/02/07 21:50
Chapter: A Choice

Omg

Author's Response: !

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