Reviews For What Lies Within
Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:54
Chapter: Chapter 22: Six Degrees of Separation

I am a major Sirius fan. You made me cry again. Thanks.

Author's Response: Me, too. JKR crushed me when she killed him in OOTP and I just wanted to flush out his story a bit more and give it some more texture.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:53
Chapter: Chapter 21: The Best Gift Ever

I like the way you write Harry. It's familiar, it's evolving and most of all, believable.

Author's Response: Thanks. I love Harry and I wanted to really show his growth. He still needs his friends and their help and knows it; but this Harry is a little more confident, without any false bravado.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:40
Chapter: Chapter 20: Least Expected

I think this is probably my "new favorite chapter."

Author's Response: Yeah, I had a lot of fun with this one. It had lots of layers and lots of surprises.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:39
Chapter: Chapter 17: Less is More

Okay, I think I knew the what, but definitely not the who or how. I was wondering what was up with Kingsley's sister.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:32
Chapter: Chapter 19: One Step Forward


Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:30
Chapter: Chapter 16: Hocus Focus

Love it. Love it. Love it.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:27
Chapter: Chapter 14: Unlike Any Other

Wow!! A sorting hat song, too. You rock.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:25
Chapter: Chapter 11: Thirty-Two Days and Counting

I've never read a fanfic with so much detail.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:24
Chapter: Chapter 10: Away in the Night

Back to Hogwarts. YIPPIE!!

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:22
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Other Celebration

I don't well up easily, but this chapter was amazing and I actually shed a few tears.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:20
Chapter: Chapter 7: The Serpent's Touch Revisited

Well done. I felt like I was standing with them in Godric's Hollow.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:19
Chapter: Chapter 6: Burrowing

Wickedly clever. Where do you come up with this stuff? :)

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:18
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Pact

Brilliant...absolutely brillaintly written.

Author's Response: This was definitely one of my favorite chapters. I just really wanted someone to finally get indigent on Harry's behalf.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:16
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Dark Lair

Were you in JKR's head or what? And I love the way you fold in your new character, Baldwin.

Reviewer: gdhmay
Date: 09/01/07 9:15
Chapter: Chapter 2: Home, Sour Home

Your characters are dead on perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks. And I see you reviewed a lot of the chapters. I appreciate you taking the extra time to do so.

Reviewer: Frenchfan
Date: 09/01/07 6:38
Chapter: Chapter 28: New Beginnings

Fantastic story. I hope you write more in the future and will wait for it avidly. Keep it up !

Author's Response: Merci beaucoup... This was actually my first attempt at a fanfic and I have been overwhelmed by the response and encouragement from fans like you. I will probably try another one at some point.

Reviewer: emeraldeyes1216
Date: 08/31/07 20:03
Chapter: Chapter 28: New Beginnings

please, please, please do a sequal! im begging you. you're a great author. keep writting.

Author's Response: Hi, It's been an amazing experience and I'll probably eventually write another one. Thanks for all the feedback and for loving this story as much as I loved writing it.

Reviewer: vboy
Date: 08/31/07 19:37
Chapter: Chapter 28: New Beginnings

SPECTACULAR!! You've got some real talent and I'm in agreement with a few others that this is probably the best fanfic I've ever read. Awesome job!

Author's Response: You all made it a joy to develop and finish this story. I can't thank you enough for your support.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 08/31/07 19:31
Chapter: Chapter 28: New Beginnings

Great ending to an excellent story!

Author's Response: Much thanks for all your feedback and ecnouragement along this journey. It's been more fun than I can say.

Reviewer: x_GinnyPotter_x
Date: 08/31/07 14:45
Chapter: Chapter 28: New Beginnings

An excelent story =] Very good writing and I loved the ending! I enjoyed it a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

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