Reviews For What Lies Within
Reviewer: vboy
Date: 07/01/07 9:40
Chapter: Chapter 6: Burrowing

Clever!! Jillian seems pretty interesting.

Reviewer: vboy
Date: 07/01/07 9:38
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Pact

OMG, I love this chapter. I read you chapter intro and didn't know what to expect. But I love the edge you gave to Ron and all the other characters are dead on. I'm glad Aunt Petunia got a little misery back.

Reviewer: vboy
Date: 07/01/07 8:51
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Dark Lair

I like that you didn't wait to the end to throw in Voldemort. Is the new character going to be important?

Reviewer: vboy
Date: 07/01/07 8:42
Chapter: Chapter 2: Home, Sour Home

Cool. I was hoping Ron and Hermone would be with him.

Reviewer: vboy
Date: 07/01/07 8:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Longest Ride

Nice setup. It's just enough to pull you in and make you wonder what's coming.

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 06/26/07 21:56
Chapter: Chapter 17: Less is More

I love the last line! 'Silence speaks volumes, Harry Potter."!!! That is so Firenze. Harry seems to be coming along nicely so I can't wait to see what lies ahead. Maybe a broom closet snogging session? heehee

Author's Response: There's definitely more coming. As soon as eighteen is approved, I'll add nineteen to the queue.

Reviewer: lildebbie464
Date: 06/25/07 1:58
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Longest Ride

OMG!! this is one of my FAVORITE stories!! upload fast please!!! lol

Author's Response: I'm trying. I guess the queue must be overflowing. As soon as eighteen is approved, I'll submit the next one. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: dsljstar5729
Date: 06/21/07 18:09
Chapter: Chapter 17: Less is More

You're just full of interesting surprises. I love the way you write with such detail. Keep posting more.

Author's Response: Will do and thanks for reading.

Reviewer: ibrooks
Date: 06/21/07 16:04
Chapter: Chapter 17: Less is More

I'm loving your imagination. Keep 'em coming.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 06/21/07 13:15
Chapter: Chapter 17: Less is More

Very good. Sounds like Harry is well on his way in preparing for the final confrontation. Keep the updates coming. I like how you have Slughorn taking a gentler approach to Occlumency than Snape. Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks for consistently taking the time to read and review my story. I really do appreciate your input and there's more on the way. I'm guessing the queue must be overflowing or something.

Reviewer: cmel
Date: 06/15/07 11:30
Chapter: Chapter 15: Scheduled Assistance

Arms shaking beneath her robes? What's up with Jillian?
This is great! I need more...

Author's Response: Jillian's rather intriguing, isnt' she? I'm glad you picked that up. Keep reading.

Reviewer: Oharachic1
Date: 06/14/07 20:35
Chapter: Chapter 16: Hocus Focus

I am truely enjoying this story. I've read many stories on this site and I must say that this one seems to be the most 'true to style' (JK's that is) so far. Many have Harry and Ginny in deep romantical relations. Although we all may want that to happen, it just not the relationship JK has outlined in her book. I like your version very much and thank you for keeping it as true to Jk's story as you have. It is truely like what I expect from book 7. Thank you for sharing it with us and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. I am really flattered that you find in true to the stage set by JK, and I will do my best to maintain the consistency. There is definitely more on the horizon.

Reviewer: FreeRaven
Date: 06/14/07 1:08
Chapter: Chapter 16: Hocus Focus

This story is Brilliant thus far! Keep up the good work and imagination!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read it all. There's more on the way.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 06/13/07 14:19
Chapter: Chapter 16: Hocus Focus

Another good chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep the story coming ;-)

Reviewer: ibrooks
Date: 06/10/07 17:36
Chapter: Chapter 15: Scheduled Assistance

I am so HOOKED!!

Reviewer: dsljstar5729
Date: 06/09/07 9:58
Chapter: Chapter 15: Scheduled Assistance

You are weaving an amazing story.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm having a lot of fun along the way.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 06/06/07 12:27
Chapter: Chapter 15: Scheduled Assistance

Great work!! CANNOT wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. Love the way this is all coming together. 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for reading all the posted chapters. I'm very happy to know you are enjoying it. There's much more coming your way.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 06/06/07 11:24
Chapter: Chapter 14: Unlike Any Other

Great Sorting Hat song - really relative to the story. Great story so far.

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 06/05/07 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Other Celebration

That was so touching. It had me on the verge of tears. Great work.

Author's Response: Thanks. It was one of my favorite chapters to write. I nearly made my own self cry (smile),

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 06/05/07 10:29
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Pact

So sad that Petunia realized too late that she needed to show some emotion/caring about Harry.

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