Cool Story, bit interesting. You should make it that Coriander and Sophie become best of friends through out their years at Hogwarts. That'd be quite a shock to Harry x.x eh?

Author's Response: heh I can only imagine how Harry would feel about that =P anyway, I think this story is staying a one-shot, although I may write more about Coriander and Sophie; they were fun to write.

Wow. I liked it... its a good story about Malfoy and his family, nice. Excellent. I liked Coriander and Sophie's personallity. They become friends right?

Author's Response: I don't envision them becoming, like, best friends or anything, but yeah, they've reached an understanding and are able to get over their differences somewhat. I'm glad you liked it! thannks for reviewing.

Aww. This is so sad. I got teary-eyed. I loved your other fic too! it seems like everything you write I love! You are one of my new favorite authors now.

I thought you did a wonderful job with Sophie, and she has the same values as her dad. I would think that any child of Harry's would be like her.


I think you did just as good a job with Coriander as you did with Sophie.

While I could never like Harry Potter after what he’d done, I knew he was a better man than my father had ever been. The outburst was uncalled for as well; it wasn’t as though Sophie had provoked me or even brought up the topic.

I love how she knows what is right, and what is wrong, and how she admits it. She is a strong character, and many others would quite possibly deny their relation to him. I love her 'I love my dad, and if you think that I shouldn't, then screw you,' attitude about it. I love her!

I loved your fic, and I believe that you are a very talented writer! *adds to favorite author list*

--Hanni


Author's Response: wow, thank you so much! it means so much to me to get a review like this, and I'm so happy you like my fics!!! thanks for reviewing!