Reviews For At Fault
Reviewer: awsomesnape
Date: 03/29/11 14:53
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Snape is dead and killed Dumbledore on Dumbledore's orders!!!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/21/09 12:15
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OMG. Snape just sucks.

Reviewer: madam_rosmerta
Date: 07/13/07 22:55
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I don't get it, it just ends like that? I'm sorry but i'm a bit disappointed, you could have gone far with that storyline.

Reviewer: Vorona
Date: 05/02/07 22:06
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Wow. That's absolutely perfect.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/26/07 10:35
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If only he knew! :D I love all the little additions to this world you've created! And Snape/Ginny is (at least in this fic) WAY sweeter than Harry/Ginny. Maybe he'll finally learn! I really liked the way to characterized Ginny and Harry, by the way. Ginny was so IC for canon and for the rest of your fics of this universe. And the same for Harry. It's good to sometimes seem the roles reversed - even Harry Potter is in the wrong sometimes. And you pulled it off brilliantly!

Reviewer: Ennalee
Date: 03/25/07 15:43
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What really makes this entire story for me is the progression of the argument: how it changes, how it escalates, how real it is. It starts out about a single issue, and ends up being about their entire lives. This is the way real people fight – they don’t start out with an issue and work it through. Instead, they go where the argument takes them, and all sorts of irrelevant things get pulled in, and sometimes by the time they get to the end the issue that started it has been totally forgotten. You do a great job of showing that progression, how this argument isn’t really about Snape – instead it’s about Harry and Ginny.

Ginny is right, pointing out this fact about Harry. As many times as he’s saved the world, Harry has a tendency to be selfish in that he’s willing to put anyone and anything at risk in order to save the people he cares about, to pursue the people who have done him wrong. I love that Ginny calls him on this, and his apparent inability to see it.

They’d parted before, when he was saving the world, or while she was studying law, or while he was at work because professors didn’t have girlfriends, or all those other silly reasons for their breakups.

This time, Harry was pretty sure it was for good. And despite everything she had said, he couldn’t help but think it was because of Snape of all people.
I love the ending. Absolutely love it. Especially that looking back, all their past fights seem suddenly inconsequential, no matter how crucial they must have seemed at the time. And the last sentence is perfect – Harry doesn’t understand how the argument possibly became more than it started out as, because he can’t see that the real heart of the issue wasn’t Snape but himself.

Reviewer: Phoenix3
Date: 03/18/07 0:31
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Somehow I get the feeling that you really don't like Harry Potter... But of course your interpretation of him is more than possible. He very likely will be just as stubborn as his father, especially with regards to one character who he finds less than savory. Ooo and that last paragraph was the clincher. Aaaaaah short and soooo good. You make short a good thing, packing in all kinds of emotion and simplifying detail (is that an oxymoron?) and it makes my toes wiggle in delight.

One nitpick: "It’s over how you’d never heard a word I said..." I do believe that should be "hear."

=D cheers

Reviewer: harrypotterluvr4life
Date: 03/14/07 20:19
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uhhh did they really break up??? omg i think this is a one shot not sure bt if its not are you going to get them back together ahhh im dieing lol i like it though

Author's Response: Oh yeah, they're totally split up. *smug* It's a one-shot and I am evil. ;)

Author's Response: Oh yeah, they're totally split up. *smug* It's a one-shot and I am evil. ;)

Reviewer: BlondieFangurl
Date: 03/08/07 20:18
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I don't think Harry would be THAT insensitive. Well yeah it is Snape. And if I were Ginny, I would smack him. Ain't no man the boss of me:)

Author's Response: *giggle* Thanks! When it comes to Severus, I really do think he would/will be.

Reviewer: Blackpenny
Date: 03/06/07 19:36
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Whoa! Excellent. I love GInny even more. As for Harry, this has always been his problem. He learns what he wants to learn and nothing else.

Author's Response: Thanks! I totally agree with you about Harry, of course. He does have a couple of big solid blind spots.

Reviewer: harry potter girl12
Date: 03/04/07 14:04
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That did not make any sense

Author's Response: No? I'm sorry.

Reviewer: zara600
Date: 02/28/07 17:44
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This story just goes to show how destructive hatred can be.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, pretty much.

Reviewer: Eliza_R
Date: 02/27/07 17:00
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A great story. It’s very well-written and captivating as always, even though your Harry isn't as fluently written as your Severus. But excellent anyways!

Author's Response: Yes, I do find Harry horribly difficult, probably because we do know him best and there's so little wiggle room! Thanks!

Reviewer: littlemissveela
Date: 02/27/07 15:56
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I very much like this story, and I can picture Harry holding a very similar grudge against Snape exactly like this. Props to you!


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: madjh
Date: 02/27/07 9:56
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Ahh, well all right then. Not that I don't occasionally sail this ship, but I'm looking forward to Ginny/Severus from you!

*grins* Carry on :)

Author's Response: LOL! I always wonder what people think when they come across a review from you when the first half of it was done by AIM and only the second half is here. Thanks for popping by!

Reviewer: _Ivy_
Date: 02/26/07 16:44
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This is a great Ginny/Harry fic! It seemed a bit melodramtic, however. they didn't seem too angry, or like they were arguing for that long. But other than that, it sounds excellent! Great job!

Author's Response: Or under-dramatic, perhaps? I just had this in mind as a short sharp shock, rather than a drawn-out argument; Harry finally trod on something important to Ginny and just couldn't understand what she was thinking. It was tricky to write; Harry, for some reason, gives me difficulties. Still, I had to do it or he was going to nag me half to death. Thanks for reviewing!

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