You're great at getting the dialog exactly perfect. It sounds like it could actually be in the book. :)
so sweet:) exactly how i would imagine it
awww i love ron && hermione together
again i say beautiful more more more
everyone get on the good ol ship ron and hermione
HAPPY NEW YEAR
aaw this is sooo gonna go onto my faves
awww!!!! this is great! i love how sort of nervous they are. when ron's arm falls asleep, that is just so real. amazing!
That was sweet even though we know there is no way that wouldv'e happened i still like it though.I added it to my favs
i really liked it = ]
i mean its a lovely story..but is that it??
I would want to see what happens next...but youre the author..:):)
so...anyways thats a great story!!!:):)
Very cool and fluffy. Nice Job!
awe THAT WAS TOOO CUTE!
pretty good, it would make a great chapter if you could have extended it, but I did really like it.
very cute, 9/10
Very sweet and lovely. I really could see Ron and Hermione together like this.
This was one of the best R/H fan fics i've read. Most of them have been Corny. It was so sweet. i'm adding it 2 my faves.
That was so cute!
A perfect missing moment! : )
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
awwwwww! : )
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.