I loved it! I picture James exactly as Lily pictures him in this one-shot. I love the premise for the story. Good job! :)
I really enjoyed that. Really good story, you have some talent there. :D
a short, and really good story!
That was a nice read! You did a good job showing this other side of James's character, and how Lily might react to it. The last paragraph in particular really wrapped it up well. Good job, I'm glad I stopped to read this story! ~Gina :)
I really liked it! Nice way of explaining how Lily realizes that James is mature...I wish you could continue it somehow! :-)