Reviews For Anticlimax
Reviewer: Hermoine Jean Granger
Date: 07/31/09 16:40
Chapter: Anitclimax

Morgan! =D

Ron/Hermoine and light-hearted humour is totally mood-uplifting. I just had to mention that. Really, this was a short, sweet little one-shot exploring Ron and Hermione and Fifth-Years(well, almost!), and you managed to weave in tiny bits of romance with some humour-- a huge contrast from the premise of most of your other fics that tend to lean towards D/A.

I enjoyed the little conversation that they had going, and the beginning where you describe Hermione packing her things up-- that part, I totally went, "Oh, Hermione!" even before you actually mention her name. It was so like her to sort books by author and fold clothes and arrange by colour.

And Ron, too, was totally canonically perfect. I was not the least surprised when he approached Hermione to ask for help-- it sounds like something he would do. If that weren't enough, the description of his room that you managed to convey so realistically, was definitely something that made me appreciate Ron's characterisation. It was really well done!

Humour brought out subtly was totally what won it for me, though. “They’re priceless parts of history,” Ron sulked from the clothes blob. Oh, definitely one of my favourite lines in the story. Their response to Mrs. Weasley's appearance made me laugh out loud. Seriously, a game of tag? XD

Even with all the humour, there was also realisation on part of the two of them, and that only made the story more likeable. I loved their nostalgia in the end towards the years that had passed, and how you conveyed it. Amazing work there. =)

A really short, sweet fic which was utterly enjoyable, dear! -hugs-

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. This fic is proof I can write fluff. :) Ron/Hermione were definitely the couple I was hoping would get together the entire series, and I honestly thought it would come before DH.

Reviewer: HPLoverForever
Date: 02/26/07 1:44
Chapter: Anitclimax

Hello! You've done a lovely job on this first chapter. I really enjoyed reading it. It really does seem like something that would show up in the series, mainly because it is something that could easily happen between them.

You have Hermione right on target. She can be a difficult character to get right since she can be quite hardheaded a good portion of the time. Very good job there. When I read this one sentence, it struck me as such a Hermione thing to say:



“They’re worthless, Ron, and at least I’m a clean monster.”


I almost laughed it was so perfect! Yes, you've definitely got Hermione perfect.

You also got Ron down as well. He would definitely be the one to need help packing, if anyone. We can clearly see here that he is a very disorganized person, something that makes Ron who he is.

Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's a rare piece where my writing takes the turn for humour. I really think Ron/Hermione would have a very fun relationship, though, and that's what I tried to capture.

Reviewer: HPLoverForever
Date: 02/26/07 1:43
Chapter: Anitclimax

Hello! You've done a lovely job on this first chapter. I really enjoyed reading it. It really does seem like something that would show up in the series, mainly because it is something that could easily happen between them.

You have Hermione right on target. She can be a difficult character to get right since she can be quite hardheaded a good portion of the time. Very good job there. When I read this one sentence, it struck me as such a Hermione thing to say:



“They’re worthless, Ron, and at least I’m a clean monster.”


I almost laughed it was so perfect! Yes, you've definitely got Hermione perfect.

You also got Ron down as well. He would definitely be the one to need help packing, if anyone. We can clearly see here that he is a very disorganized person, something that makes Ron who he is.

Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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