i really like the long chapters:)

grrreat!!!!

nice;)

eeeeexcellent

This was one of the first fan fictions that i have read, and i have to admit that i am hooked. i really thought that you did an excelent job with the plot and characters. thanks for sharing

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was really the first long fic I did in the HP fandom, and I'm really proud of it. I don't post here anymore, but all of my other stories are here: http://www.thepetulantpoetess.com/viewuser.php?uid=68

quick note, Serverus - I'm fairly certain - is a half-blood, he's not pure blood. not that it matters.
great fic!


Author's Response: He is half-blood, but I wrote this just before HBP came out, and it was believed he was pure-blood. I need to put a little note on this story at some point. Thanks for reminding me :)

“I smell trouble. You two have been in there forever, giggling and whispering. What are you up to, and whom should I warn?” he raised a suspicious eyebrow as he crossed his arm and tapped his foot impatiently on the floor.

“Draco, how long have you been here?” Ginny came and gave him a peck on the cheek. He grabbed her by the waist and nipped at her neck playfully then turned to look at Hermione.

I don't think Draco is that OOC at all, I think you captured him very well, and I like how it seems from th story that while he's always been a bit dominant and aggressive (like when he grabs Ginny,) he only acted like a jerk because of his dad's influence. All in all...I like!

Author's Response: Thanks. I tried to write Draco thinking of how his personality might be if he didn't have to act all high and mighty.

good

don't kill hermione!Or the baby-ever!

tacky way of doing that