Reviews For The Long Wait
Reviewer: mAgic62442
Date: 04/24/06 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 14

i've read this at least 15 times. it's just soooooooo awesome!!! i now luv this pairing even though i'm a diehard r/h shipper. if only snape could be ron!!! this is my FAVORITE FANFIC EVA!!! :)

Author's Response: LOL, if only Snape could be Ron? Don't let Snape hear you say that. I'm happy you have enjoyed this so much. I really had a great time writing this story.

Reviewer: mAgic62442
Date: 04/24/06 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 13

omg cant wait!!!! :) :) :)

Reviewer: snapes_lover1207
Date: 04/20/06 17:07
Chapter: Epilogue

wow! this is the best hg/ss fanfic iv ever read! bin glued to it for2 days. you are a brilliant writer and i hope you will do more of these fics. ang xx ps i love osiris

Author's Response: Thank you. What a wonderful compliment. I'm very happy you've enjoyed this fic so much. I had a great time writing it and I loved writing Osiris. I've got all of my stories posted on The Petulant Poetess. I stopped posting here because the site was having lots of problems with posts several months back. But if you would like to read everything I've done including my current story, here's the url: I have two short sequels and one longer sequel to The Long Wait that you can see at TPP, and if you are interested, my current fic is called Sometimes the best things come in small packages. I hope you enjoy my other stories. Stop by TPP. There are a lot of good stories there.

Reviewer: Applekissis
Date: 04/17/06 11:40
Chapter: Epilogue

Wonderful Story!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 04/14/06 16:43
Chapter: Epilogue

Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh!!!!!!!! You are THE GREATEST WRITER EVER!!! Please please please keep writing. Your ideas are so wonderful and your wording is magnificent and everything you did was PERFECT!!!!!!!!! I'm so excited about this story, I'm going to read it again and again and again!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. What great compliments. I'm go very happy you enjoyed this story so much. I haven't posted anything here in a long time. I do have all of my stories at The Petulant Poetess. If you are interested you can find them all here: I also have three sequels to The Long Wait. Two short ones, A Small Addition and Caught in the Act, and a longer one called Lestrange Days. If you have a chance to read them, I'd love to know what you think. Also, you might enjoy The Petulant Poetess. There are a lot of wonderful stories there.

Reviewer: mAgic62442
Date: 04/14/06 14:20
Chapter: Chapter 14

wow!! wow wow wow!!! who knew Severus could be so sexy? *wink wink* ;)

Author's Response: LOL, could it be that I will forever have an image of Alan Rickman when I think of Snape? Thank you for reading this. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Mysterygirl80
Date: 04/14/06 9:52
Chapter: Epilogue

This was the most touching story i have read so far thank you for telling me all would be well i was clawing my hair out when snape decided to be such a moronic idiot!-Mysterygirl80

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought I should warn people who might think the worst. I hate angst, so I thought I should let people know all was not lost.

Reviewer: Tacpebs
Date: 04/06/06 22:09
Chapter: Epilogue

Wow, and here I thought I didn't want to read anything HG/SS. I have to say this was amazingly good. Was that a hint to a sequel at the end? Hope it was. Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so happy you enjoyed this and decided to give the pairing a chance. I do happen to have two small sequels, and a longer one for this story. I mainly post on The Petulant Poetess. You can find the sequels there as well as a few others. I hope you enjoy those as well. Here's the url:

Reviewer: Skulblaka
Date: 02/20/06 10:04
Chapter: Chapter 8

I love the nice Draco, he really goes with Ginny. Not to mention "'Ladies please, there’s plenty of Draco to go around.'" almost made me pee my pants with laughter. Very nice!

Author's Response: LOL, I think deep down inside he's a good kid who is very confused. I also think he just might be a little bit into himself, but that's okay, he's a cutie. Thanks for taking the time to read this. I'm very happy you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: mald1983
Date: 02/04/06 19:35
Chapter: Chapter 8

Aww!!! I think it's sweet that Hermione's going to Ginny for advice on clothes! I'm glad to see Draco and Ginny are happy together. And I really like how you show a good side to Draco. I really do believe there's some good in him! Great Job capturing some of the positive attributes to him while still keeping him slightly in character, especially with his ego!~ MALD

Author's Response: Thank you. I really feel that Draco will surprise everybody in the end, just as those who believe Severus is bad will be surprised. All is not always as we see on the surface, and I think JKR is a master at that. Thank you for taking the time to read this. I appreciate you words.

Reviewer: Hermione Snape
Date: 11/26/05 19:05
Chapter: Epilogue

Truly, that was one of the most fantastic stories I have ever read! I have always been a fan of Severus and Hermione as a pair, as they are my two favourite characters and I give full support to and have a firm belief that Severus is one on the side of good; I certainly think that you have increased my devotion to this pairing, it that's even possible. =) I think you are a brilliant and wonderful writer. The portrayal of all of the characters (including those you brought in, such as Osiris), was excellent. Whilst reading your story, it had me literally smiling, laughing, crying and even feeling anger towards Ron because he was the stimulus of ruining Severus' and Hermione's relationship; I'm just glad he got what was coming to him! Anyway, perhaps I should stop rambling on, and get to reading your sequels. Once again, your story is amazing, and I am honestly glad that it was something I got the chance to read.

Author's Response: I'm sorry it has taken me so long to respond to you. I got tired of the problems this site was having and rarely come here any more. Thank you so much for your lovely words. I'm glad I was able to make you happy while reading this. I tried to bring a bit of every emotion in this story. Thanks again for your support.

Reviewer: Donniedarkorocksmyworld
Date: 11/01/05 19:36
Chapter: Epilogue

Thats one of my favorites! I actually printed it out and Im reading it for the 3rd or 4th time! Isn't he like 20 years older than she is? Do you have any sequels?

Author's Response: I'm glad you have enjoyed this. Yes, he's about 20 years older than her. I do have 3 sequels to this. A Small Addition, Caught in the Act and Lestrange Days. You can read them here or go to:

Reviewer: nikkim602
Date: 10/29/05 20:24
Chapter: Epilogue

wonderful - i laughed out loud several times. you kept me enthralled from start to finish. i first turnd my nose up at a hg/ss pairing, but they are now one of my favorites. thanks for the entertainment.

Author's Response: When I first began reading it I wasn't sure either, but I slowly got sucked in. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have more stories here: It is a good archive and I think you would enjoy some of the other stories up there too.

Reviewer: Miniuncy22
Date: 10/10/05 8:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is the first Herminone/Snape story I ever read. You made me fall in love with this ship. Thank you! Please keep writing. You are so good at it.

Author's Response: I'm glad I made a believer out of you. It's a fun pairing to write and read sometimes. Right now I've got all of my stories at: I hope you enjoy some of my other stories as I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Reviewer: Ezza
Date: 10/05/05 3:04
Chapter: Epilogue

You are an absolutley great writer. Loved the story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the compliment.

Reviewer: MiaAlexia
Date: 09/15/05 3:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

What a great story. I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked this. I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

Reviewer: luinloriel
Date: 09/03/05 23:13
Chapter: Epilogue

i LOVED this story. i know it's not in the story or if u thought it was really important but i was wondering who Raven's godparents were. i was thinking about it and if you were to ask my opinion i think it should be Ginny and Draco just because Severus is Draco's godfather and if Draco became Ravens godfather then it would all come full circle. that's just my idea though. keep writing just the way you are. (except maybe a little more proof-reading. some sentances didn't make much sence) ciao

Author's Response: I'm not sure whic sentences didn't make sense to you since I read it several times, not to mention so did my beta. But who knows. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: MagicAlly
Date: 08/23/05 5:26
Chapter: Epilogue

Thank you so much for this wonderful story. I'm off to read the sequals now and I can't wait. All the best and thanks again.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope you like the sequels as well.

Reviewer: Stormy_the_house_elf
Date: 08/21/05 21:52
Chapter: Epilogue

Just spent three hours reading this from start to finish...I really enjoyed it! I know this was written before HBP, but I'm hoping we'll find out that things are not what they seem at the end of HBP. Even if they are, though, I'll still enjoy these fics. A/U isn't such a bad thing. I'll be reading the sequels next. I'll give you a 9 for this one. Oh, and I loved the pic of Crooks and Osiris. Too bad we didn't see one of Ron after Hermione hexed him!

Author's Response: Wow! I'm so glad you enjoyed this story and I'm glad you are going to read the sequels. I hope you enjoy them as well. I consider all HP fics AU, since we as writers put these characters in situations they would not normaly. I firmly believe that Severus is innocent, rather I believe there is more to things than meets the eyes right now. I'm also glad you enjoyed the picture of Osiris and Crooks. I could see them in my head like that every time I wrote them. And I'm not sure that I would have wanted to see a picture of Ron after Hermione hexed him.

Reviewer: sftbllchik4
Date: 08/17/05 7:06
Chapter: Epilogue

i waited until the end to review, because i thought it would be better that way. overall, it was great. i love the way you make Severus not so bad. i am a fan of him myself. i loved it! and the sequel to this is awesome too!

Author's Response: Thank you. I tried not to keep him too out of character, but let's face it. He's supposed to be falling in love so he's got to be a little ooc. I'm glad you enjoyed this as well as the sequel.

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