Just one thing - Snape is sooo Mr.Darcy-ish, if you know what I mean. And, really, it stops bothering me, I start to like him this way. 'ill-mannered', 'inquiring' - God, I feel like reading Austen's version of HP ;) And that's a big plus, you know.
Author's Response: I think he might be Darcy-ish if he were in this type of situation. I doubt he's had many women in his life, so I imagined he would be a bit standoffish. He warms up to her nicely though.
As I read through chapters, I tried to think, what style of writing, your writing reminds me of, and now I know - it's Austen's. Really like it, I like the plot, but Severus is not himself too much - he too quickly fells for Hermione, in my opinion, but keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. Yes, he fell for her fast, but I see him as a man who is lonely and ready to accept someone in his life. Thanks for taking the time to read this and to leave me a review.
Thank-you for wonderfull story.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read it.
I loved this!!! I can't wait for the sequel!!!
I love this!!! ur an awesome author!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I wanted to write something happy and with humor, but also romantic. I appreciate that you took the time to leave me so many reviews.
Yay!!! They're back together!!!!
OMG!!!! This is going well!!! I guess. All excet for Hermione's health!!!
ya!!! harry's gonna help!!! Doo da da doo!!! Harry to the rescue!!1 (I'm going insane!!!)
It's a bud of doubt!!!
Yay!!! the seed mof doubt. Now that seed just has to turn into a flower. I wonder how long that's gonna take!!!
i did NOT like the chapter!!! Snape is acting like a total bastard!!!
You have to make them get back together!!!
Severus loves her!!! Of course he's gonna be concerned!!!
Yay!!!!! I loved this chapter!!!! *hint*hint*