I really like that this is from Hermoine's viewpoint rather than a third person one. I thought it gave it definite authenticity when she says that his carefree attitude is a bit annoying.
I can feel the hurt and pain they are going thru. You are good at potraying their feelings. I like it that Ron have enough courage in him to let Hermione know how he feel.
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:) love it
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This was very touching, and I loved how you wrote the entire thing in the second person. It was very clever.
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aww... i love it!
It's so cute!
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Now that made me cry. I so can not wait for the last book just to see not if but how they get together. Well great job. Keep it up.
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I thouroughly enjoyed this. Excellent job. Very romantic.
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you story is so romantic!!!!!!!!!!!
It's sweet and touching
I love it
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WONDERFUL! i actually feel like Hermione here. its a totally too long story. but anyhow. well written. excellent ending. love it completely!
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sniffsniff...it's just so sweet! write more fics, pretty please!
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You are a very good writer! Congrats! I really liked it!
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You are a very good writer! Congrats! I really liked it!
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This is a lovely story. We usually think of Ron as being tongue-tied and messing up all the time but I think deep down this is who he is. Keep writing!
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How sweet, how touching and totally how we all want, wish and hope it to happen. The heart goes flutter-flutter and a smile broadens across my cheeks. So well written - keep it up.
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awww.....
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that was well done. the running commentary was well put, and the banter between hermione and ron was worded appropriately. It didn't look like it was going to be automatic, yet it was put together well. I like that you gave Ron the gusto to FINALLY kiss Hermione. character-wise Ron probably wouldn't do that, but I liked the umption you gave him. it was a welcome change in a fan fic...not just Ron screwing up all the time, ruining the moment. two thumbs up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I don't think people give Ron a lot of credit.... and I try to show that in my writing. Thanks again.
I really like the way you keep the identity of Ron a scret until the end, really good piece of writing. :)
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