I'm reading this for the second time. Now it makes me cry!
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That is so sad! Poor Lily and James! At least they made it through. *sniffle*
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Such a sweet story! I cried while reading it, it was so beautiful.
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Oh, I loved it! You never see James/Lily stories like this. Great job, you deserved first place for the February Challenge! =]
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OMG! I love this story! I almost started crying! MAKE ANOTHER ONE!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I hope to.
awww, this one was cute. makes you think, you know. i really enjoyed this story. a lot a lot. very nice writing style, good flow, good everything! great story overall.
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what a sweet story! It's so sad that Harry might have had an older sibling, but James is right. It wasn't meant to be. Luved it!
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Totally. Awesome. I am at lost for words. this was beautiful.
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Argh, you made me cry! Great story!
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have i told you you are one of my favorites! come up with more and FAST!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will!
That was beautiful!
I can see why it won!
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Great job! I enjoyed reading your story. I look forward to more in the future.
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Awwwww, that was fantastic! I love how you portrayed what the loss of a child, born or unborn, can to to a relationship. The writing was beautiful, it flowed so well. Fabulous job, you should write more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will write more.
I really really enjoyed this story! There was just enough suspense in there to keep me guessing what had caused the rift between Lily and James. You portrayed their emotions really well, and the resloution was not rushed--again, great job!
~Katie
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That was so sweet. It was very climatic, because you were always leading the reader on. Flashbacks were very nice too. You're becoming one of my favorite authors. Congrats on winning the challenge! You deserve it :]
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wonderful! I really like all of your stories, and this was one of the best. I will even admit that I was very close to tears during some of it... Keep writing!
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Wow! I LOVED it ! It's so great! I'm not an obssessed JPLE FF reader, but I'm a marauders frantic fan. :D. It's so great! I loved how you attract the readers attention by hinting that something was wrong, in the begining, wthout really stating it. It was great!
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Oh, my gosh, that was so sweet! I'm seriously crying right now!
It's also really cool that Harry would have had an older sibling, I think that was a really good idea. Could you write a sequel or something?
Author's Response: Hmm.... Maybe. I'm working on another fic right now, but maybe when I'm finished. Thank you!
I'm glad it had a happy ending. Nice story! It was good to read a different kind of Lily/James story.
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That was a very touching story! Congratulatioin on winning!! :) You did wonderfully at hiding what was wrong at the beginning, and it made perfect sense once we knew. :) Cyns
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