Reviews For Alice
Reviewer: jayliejay
Date: 06/05/08 19:23
Chapter: Alice

i love this story!

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Thanks for your review. :]

Reviewer: Gin_PotterGirl
Date: 09/17/07 19:25
Chapter: Alice

Dude, this was like, seriously awesome. I, like Kumy, never thought my heart could take Neville / Lavender, until you wrote it. This story was just fantastic to read. The humor was priceless, like the naming part,( We mine as well name her Frank!) and I think everyone was in character.

I also think Lavender was a little OOC. I think she wopuld know that a relashionship isn't all about her, but again, your the better writer.

Great Story! Did I mention that I nominated this is the QSQ?

~ Leia

Author's Response: Well...if you insist....*giggles* Yes, you mentioned it. :)

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 06/27/07 1:52
Chapter: Alice

Oh, how sweet. I loved the ending. I also like the way you had flashbacks to different places in their relationship. My favorite part was the scene in Madame Puddifoot's on Valentine's Day. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Catherine! Add to your favorites!

Reviewer: lilyjones
Date: 05/12/07 2:15
Chapter: Alice

nice save

Author's Response: Uhh...

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 03/07/07 23:40
Chapter: Alice

Oh my gosh. I thought I would hate this pairing. Really and truly hate it! I think it's beautiful: the way you've written it.

I would argue that Lavender may be OOC. She seems very IC in the Puddifoot's scene, but I'd like to see a bit more of her maturation from that moment to the last. I think that the Parvati scene really helped: "It's not always about you." However, I would like to see a bit more of that - people don't usually change after one reprimand/lesson, you know. :)

Nevertheless, you truly captured Neville -and Augusta's characterization was just hilarious. :D I love grandmothers.

Finally, the problem was an issue that I think any relationship with Neville would face, and I LOVE how you made it the focus of your piece.

Must I say this? The ending was gorgeous. Lavender, again, seems a bit TOO mature, but she is lovely like that. :D

A bit more development, and this story will be a masterpiece. As of now, it was definitely worth my time to read it!!! :D


Author's Response: Thanks SO much for the wonderful critique, Kumy! Gosh, you are so helpful. *huggles*

Reviewer: pumpkin_pie
Date: 02/22/07 11:38
Chapter: Alice

I loved the ending. =)

Author's Response: I hope so! :)

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 02/21/07 19:15
Chapter: Alice

Very sweet. You got Neville dead on as far as characterization goes, and I like that you made him a healer that deals with plants. You did a good job on Lavender too, and I think the problem that they had was believable and realistic. I can totally see Neville not getting around to telling his girlfriend about his parents.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: FenrirG
Date: 02/21/07 18:18
Chapter: Alice

Ohhh! What a beautiful and heartwarming story, I just love it. I've never really found Lavender/Neville to be too appealing, but you really made everything so believeable. And the end is just... lovely.
Great job on your story, and keep up the good work! =)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Add to your favorites!

Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 02/21/07 17:58
Chapter: Alice

wow. this is a really good story. good job. you are a great author, beta, and bannermaker. :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 02/21/07 17:51
Chapter: Alice

Nikki! *squees and hugs*

I'm so happy to see that this was put up! Congratulations, my friend, on yet another fine story!

I particularly enjoyed beta-ing this because I liked the plot-line. I haven't ever seen on like this, and I must say that I enjoyed it. Great ideas, and great story.

I really like the "comedy" in this story.

"Neville, the name Alice is plain, and we both know it. I mean, we might as well just name her Frank."

*still giggles*

Anyway, great story, Nikki, and keep the wonderful fics coming!

~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and beta-ing services! :P

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