Reviewer: The Mighty KFC
Date: 06/06/07 15:21
Chapter: Part 2

Wow, I just read this a second time and I usually do not enjoy reading things over again.
This story is amazing. You captured the characters beautifully. I also liked the great choices of words that you used- very rich. I love it!
Great job and please keep writing because you have talent.

Author's Response: :D I love to hear that a story is reread, it's one of the best compliments. Thank you! And I will certainly keep writing - heehee, it would be far harder to get me to STOP writing. ;)

Reviewer: iluvkrum
Date: 05/28/07 18:50
Chapter: Part 2

ahhh, i think i may have to change my name to i luv remus.

Author's Response: *laughs* Well, if I've managed to make you want to change your name, then I'll assume you really liked the story. ;) Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 05/22/07 20:12
Chapter: Part 2

I love this story! You should have continued this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Infinity! That is the score out of a possible ten!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, that's a lot of exclamation points, lol! I am considering doing a sequel at some point, so maybe... ;) Thank you! :D

Reviewer: floydfan
Date: 04/22/07 21:58
Chapter: Part 2


Now I am in tears, sitting on the edge of my seat. There are absolutely no words to describe's so beautiful. You've written them in a way that's not cheesy or out of character, but very believable and funny and so deep that I'm at a loss for words at how perfect this is. I can't wait to read more from you, especially R/T, since you write them so well. :)

Author's Response: Well, I have written quite a bit of R/T, but I confess I'm terrible at getting it all posted. I'll try in the next few weeks to submit some more things here. "Victor" is possibly the best one, so I'm afraid that none of the others will quite hit this level. :P Still, it's wonderful that this fic was able to inspire that reaction. Thanks so much for sharing. :D

Reviewer: floydfan
Date: 04/22/07 21:47
Chapter: Part 1


This is easily the most spectacular Remus/Tonks story I've ever read, and I'm a huge fan of the ship, so I've read many. ;) I absolutely love their humour. The characters are so deep and so believable; you almost had me in tears there for a second. There's really not much left to say it's so perfect, so I'm off to read Part 2.

Author's Response: Yey! Wow, that's humbling - "most spectacular." I'd have to respectfully disagree, but it's lovely that you think so. :D Thanks!

Reviewer: meant2be_a_marauder
Date: 03/31/07 16:41
Chapter: Part 1

Easily the best remus/tonks story I have ever read! It is really a beautiful piece of work and I've read it over and over again. Good Job!
Hope to read more fanfics from you,

Author's Response: Thank you! And what a compliment, to know that you've read it so may times. I do the same with my favourites. :D I hope to put more fics on here...just give me time. ;)

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 03/25/07 18:28
Chapter: Part 2

That was excellent! It was like a giant metaphor! I really couldn't find anything wrong with it. I really liked when Remus put the angel on top of the umbrella. Only he could be that clever. Anyways, loved it! It's going on my favorites list!

Author's Response: Well, the umbrella certainly came to mean many things in this fic, you're right. And of course Remus is that clever. ;) Thank you so much! :D

Reviewer: sss89
Date: 03/19/07 9:26
Chapter: Part 2

Author's Response: Thank you! :) Sighs and wows are always nice to hear. ;)

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 03/12/07 21:21
Chapter: Part 2

awwww, i love it! I'm gonna check to see if you have any more, i love it...

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I do have more, but I'm not sure that my other story will continue here...we'll see. You can find more of my stories on my Live Journal page, and also, under the same penname. Glad you enjoyed it! :D

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 03/12/07 20:15
Chapter: Part 1

heehee, I love their senses of humour! You really got them good! God, this is seriously the best R/T I've read in a long, LONG time...:)

Author's Response: Boy, I really need to look at all the reviews before responding - I didn't see this before I saw your other one. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 03/09/07 17:30
Chapter: Part 2

Wow. I'm shocked that this story hasn't gotten any reviews yet. If your readers are at all like me, they're way too stunned to be writing anything. This absolutely gorgeous. I don't have the words to leave for this. Tonks is so vulnerable, so afraid, so unlike the confident self she usually appears to be. And Remus is afraid in different ways, like and unlike the Remus we know from the books. The whole umbrella idea is brilliant and the ending is amazing. I just...agh. I'm literally at a loss for words. Congratulations!

Author's Response: Hahaha - well, I certainly hope that any lack of reviews is because I've stunned people into a comatose state, and not because they hate it. ;) Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 03/07/07 15:48
Chapter: Part 1

This IS Remus/Tonks. This is the pairing I fell in love with. You were different, you had a great plot, your characters were amazingly true to the books, yet at the same time you showed a completely different side to them. I haven't 'squee-d' over a new story here in a long time, but i did today. Thank you.

Author's Response: You're absolutely welcome! This was a different style for me, but the characterizations are certainly the way I like to picture them as well. Thanks so much for the review! :D

Reviewer: Moonysgirl79
Date: 03/07/07 15:12
Chapter: Part 2

Wow, what a great ending. I love how you made it different from all the others by it being tonks who is unsure, rather than Remus. I really ejoyed it, thanks! One thing i might say is the spacing between the paragraphs. It makes it much easier to read if you put them in, though it in no way detracts from the wonderfulness of your story!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D I also like reading stories where Tonks is unsure. It makes sense that she would have her own hangups, after all. Not sure what you mean by the spacing of the paragraphs. I haven't looked at the story in a bit - I wonder if it loaded incorrectly or something. Thanks for the heads up - I'll go and check. :)

Reviewer: Moonysgirl79
Date: 03/07/07 15:10
Chapter: Part 1

I loved this so far. I love the way you portray Remus as though he is back at school and it was so funny too. A joy to read. Thankyou!

Author's Response: You're welcome! Marauder!Remus is one of my favourites. ;) Glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: poppyhead
Date: 03/06/07 17:30
Chapter: Part 2

What a sweet story! I enjoyed the writing style, it was a compelling read. The umbrella "tree" was brilliant, and I would love to read more in this little "universe" you have created. I feel the test of a good story is whether or not more is wanted, and in this case, I would read much more! Thank you for a fun, sweet time!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I have considered writing more of this, and hopefully one day I will. I tend to have too many writing projects going at the same time, so it won't be for awhile, but if I do, I'll post it here so you can enjoy some more. :D

Reviewer: phoe_gurl
Date: 03/03/07 14:50
Chapter: Part 1

i've read this before - can't remember on what exactly, but i had to re-read it because i loved it so much. post more on this website, especially remus and tonks. they're the best! no offense.

Author's Response: Hahaha - I love R/T too, so no offense taken. ;) I am going to post more stories here, it just takes me forever to get things edited. Be patient with me. :) Thanks so much for the review! :D

Reviewer: narwhallover
Date: 03/02/07 15:58
Chapter: Part 1

this is one of the most fantastic fics I have ever read... I can't wait for the next part to be up!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D I have updated now, so enjoy!

Reviewer: wishmyhairwasred
Date: 02/27/07 16:33
Chapter: Part 1

quite possibly the most funny, most entertaining, and most true to what images i got from the books remus/tonks stories EVER. :]

Author's Response: Wow, that's a lot of superlatives! :D Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it!

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