Reviews For Unfairness
Reviewer: cAughtonFire
Date: 03/04/07 20:09
Chapter: Unfairness

I'm so glad to see this up! This is such a great story. It never fails to make me cry.

-Ashley (AKA Belezza)

Author's Response: Thank you for the help! I'm kinda glad it makes you cry... it was part of what I was going for when writing it. :) I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Cyns

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 02/20/07 18:10
Chapter: Unfairness

So tender and heartbreaking. These always bring a tear to my eyes. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you. This story was supposed to be a tear jerker. I'm glad I succeeded and you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 02/20/07 16:17
Chapter: Unfairness

This is the first story that you have written that has made me cry! But I loved how you dealt with this. Guess you have an inside when thinking about how a twin may feel when faced with the death of the other! (At least you know what the bond is like before the loss!). Hope we never suffer that loss, but you dealt with it great!!

Author's Response: Thanks Cwiddy. I'm glad you thought I handled this correctly! Thanks for the help you've given me in writing this, including being the best Twin I could have wanted. :) Cyns

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