Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 05/11/07 20:58
Chapter: Chapter 3: Sirius in Trouble
Wow really good chapter!
~ Hannah Abbot
Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 05/11/07 20:46
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hard to Get
Ha never thought James would play hard to get. Makes me laugh, a little too much. Keep up the Good work!
~ Hannah Abbot, the Forgotten Hufflepuff.
Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 05/11/07 6:47
Chapter: Chapter 14: Home
Awwwww
How sad!!!!!
Greet story!
Reviewer: iheartjames
Date: 05/10/07 20:30
Chapter: Chapter 14: Home
awww... poor lily!!
remind me again why james isnt there???
please update again soon!
Author's Response: james couldn't leave school for someone else's parents' funeral, but to see what he'll do read the next chapter! it's in the queue. thanks for the review.
Reviewer: I Am Peeves
Date: 05/10/07 20:05
Chapter: Chapter 14: Home
This was very short and it almost seemed as though she wasn't sad enough. I'm guessing that it's shock and she'll let everything out with James but I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response: yeah it was supposed to be denial, sorry if i didn't really get that across!
Reviewer: Morgainne
Date: 05/06/07 17:11
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lost
So sad, but, of course, needed...
Reviewer: sfc823
Date: 05/06/07 13:55
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lost
oh that was so sad... i usualy have more to say about chapters but im exausted right now so all thats comin form my head is that that was so very sad... poor lily...
:::hearts:::
sarah
Reviewer: sfc823
Date: 05/06/07 13:48
Chapter: Chapter 12: A Sluggish Day
hahahahahahahahahahahahaha... i really liked it
:::hearts:::
sarah
Reviewer: Marauder_Luver2
Date: 05/05/07 21:54
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lost
awww poor Lily i love how you keep updating like everyday there's another chapter keep updating
Reviewer: iheartjames
Date: 05/04/07 18:05
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lost
aw! poor lily! please update soon! i want to know what James will do!
Reviewer: I Am Peeves
Date: 05/04/07 17:34
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lost
Oh no! That's so sad!
Reviewer: California
Date: 05/04/07 16:55
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lost
aw poor lily. omg i love how you keep updating...YOUR MAKING MY WEEK!! lol =] keep em' coming!!
Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 05/04/07 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 12: A Sluggish Day
Hahaha
Fun chappter
Keep writing more stories!!
Reviewer: gerberb
Date: 05/03/07 20:08
Chapter: Chapter 12: A Sluggish Day
Great...Keep it up and Update soon...Thanks,
Author's Response: Will do :)
Author's Response: Will do :)
Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 05/03/07 19:50
Chapter: Chapter 12: A Sluggish Day
I love Sirius in this story...
Author's Response: Thank you. I love Sirius, he deserves a bit of humour in his teenage years!
Reviewer: California
Date: 05/03/07 19:35
Chapter: Chapter 12: A Sluggish Day
aww i like when she said i missed you potter and sirius's "progress" thanx for the fast update!!
Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 05/03/07 18:36
Chapter: Chapter 11: A Treasure Hunt
Okay
Great chapter!!!!
Keep wirting more stories since this one is almost finished!!!
Author's Response: thank you! but there's quite a lot left to go of this story!
Reviewer: Marauder_Luver2
Date: 05/03/07 16:36
Chapter: Chapter 11: A Treasure Hunt
awww that was such a cute chapter update soon
Reviewer: gerberb
Date: 05/03/07 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 11: A Treasure Hunt
I like the story. Keep it up.
